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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
It was so cute
Jealous Sameer toh kabse dekhna change hai hum sab
And you gave us that too in school phase ..
I loved it
The canteen scene was so beautiful
Sameer finally found someone whom he can address as his
I totally felt the emotion
This update just made my day
Thanx a lot for the pm

Love
Laalchi reader

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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Simple and elegant is what I say when I read this OS...I loved reading it!! 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Beautiful OS Shreya!
Loved the intense jealous Sam! And also Naina knows that's it better not to let him stay angry and green for too long.
That conversation in the canteen was just too good!!
Ishaan ko bolo koi dusra tutor dhunde humara hero apni heroine bilkul bhi share nahi karega 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
It was awesome dear Shreya 👍🏼
Loved it ❤️
It was so cute ,It made me blush so hard 😳
Jealous Sameer toh hum sabka sapna hain dear
Keep coming with more
plzzz do write more OSs
Lots of love for you


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Posted: 7 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: AaishaM

Reserved 😉

*unreserved*. I am so happy, I was the first one to reserve the comment. 😆

Mujhe bhi same khushi hoti hai jab mein first reserve karti hu😆

It was amazing Shreya. I loved it to the core.

Thank you so much Aaisha di! 🤗

Fandom hmesha jealous Sameer hi to maangta hai aur tumne de diya 😉 It was a treat to read about Jealous Sameer. The mere sight of Naina giving the list of books to the new guy brought out his possessive streak. Such a cute kiddo he is.

I want to see a jealous Sameer too, kabse wish hai humari😆 Cute kiddo toh hai hi. The thought that Naina will teach someone else and in turn will spend more time with him got him mad.

Many a times we girls enjoy seeing our partners being possessive for us but then it is a task to manaofy them. Naina knew it won't be easy to calm him down so she immediately put a stop to that boy's advances though he wanted her help only 😆

She had her priorities clear, Sameer along with her family tops it. Knowing what caused Saneer's anger was more important for her. Poor Ishaan! 😛

Awww Sameer is so cute. I do the same. When someone doesn't put in much efforts to erase my anger, I get double angry. Afterall itni attention to Banti hi hai. So I can easily understand how Sameer must have felt when Naina got up to leave 😆

Main bhi waisi hi hu isliye I used that trait of mine in Sameer's character. Gussa dilao phir properly manathe bhi nahi.
But then again, Sameer liked Naina's attention on him always. 😳

Baap re jyada hi jealous ho Raha hai ladka. His reply ' we were also friemds' was epic. Sahi hi to kaha ladke ne aise kisi Ko bhi apna friend bol degi kya Naina 🤣

Thank you! I laughed at my own dialogue too😆

Ahaaan so Naina finally gave a name to their relationship. I really liked the fact that you added Vishakha's angle to it. Naina's acceptance would surely ease away Sameer's pain. For a guy who was never accepted by his mother, even a simple acknowledgement of the love his girlfriend has for him, is enough to keep him going.

Maine first socha Vishaka angle add na kare toh behtar hoga par phir mujhe woh necessary laga. You know, to just give a build up for Naina naming their relation😳

😳baki unki physical proximity se to Mai Sharma gayi.

Main bhi😆
Mujhe toh aur daalna tha par mujhe meri assignment bhi type karna thi toh jaane diya. Mere dimag mein ek aur idea hai, hehe.

Keep coming with more. 😊

Thank you so much Aaisha di for letting me know your thoughts🤗My answers in brown.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16
Simply fabulous Shreya👏
Oh , loved the way you created the parallel for the book list scene😊

I am always amazed by the way Naina could sense Sameer. Gave away too many feels.

Jealousy is a reaction to the fear of losing someone and Sameer was totally lost in it. His insecurity and fear of losing his loved one was clearly visible in his body language.

Should be grateful to you for making Naina realize his fear and shower him with all the love he ever cared of. The comfort brought in by the mere mention of love and boyfriend , ahem...his guy is so possessive. He couldnot even stand her talking to anyone.

Aww...the subtle romance , am blushing harder than Naina may be 😳

Sameer's smile towards the end reflected the peace his soul is at.😊

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Aww Shreya.. you write such adorable stories

I loved how he could finally get the word boyfriend out of her.. For him😳

Thank you so much Anji 😳
Haan, just for him
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: gugul

Beautiful !! Loved reading it... Jealous sameer.. romance in canteen... Wow..

Thank you so much dear! 😃

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: suhaaniladki

It was lovely shreya ... Finally Naina accepted and called him his boyfriend .. Jealous sameer was cherry on cake.. Loved it

Thank you so much Suman di! 😳
Glad you loved it!
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: smiley_lizi

This is very beaitiful os.

The sudden b word from Naina...the scene was beautifully created.
Jealous Sameer is a treat to get.
And the mention of my love, Naina added the charm.
Ending scene in canteen was nostalgic of school time.
Keep up writing. 👍🏼
Loved it. ❤️

Laizu

Thank you so much Laizu di🤗
The ending scene is my favourite too, I still go back to Romeo-Juliet episodes. They were bliss to watch. 😳
Edited by Mayashika - 7 years ago

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