Samaina OS- Unnamed Relation

*unreserved*. I am so happy, I was the first one to reserve the comment. 😆

It was amazing Shreya. I loved it to the core. Fandom hmesha jealous Sameer hi to maangta hai aur tumne de diya 😉 It was a treat to read about Jealous Sameer. The mere sight of Naina giving the list of books to the new guy brought out his possessive streak. Such a cute kiddo he is.

Many a times we girls enjoy seeing our partners being possessive for us but then it is a task to manaofy them. Naina knew it won't be easy to calm him down so she immediately put a stop to that boy's advances though he wanted her help only 😆

Awww Sameer is so cute. I do the same. When someone doesn't put in much efforts to erase my anger, I get double angry. Afterall itni attention to Banti hi hai. So I can easily understand how Sameer must have felt when Naina got up to leave 😆

Baap re jyada hi jealous ho Raha hai ladka. His reply ' we were also friemds' was epic. Sahi hi to kaha ladke ne aise kisi Ko bhi apna friend bol degi kya Naina 🤣

Ahaaan so Naina finally gave a name to their relationship. I really liked the fact that you added Vishakha's angle to it. Naina's acceptance would surely ease away Sameer's pain. For a guy who was never accepted by his mother, even a simple acknowledgement of the love his girlfriend has for him, is enough to keep him going.

😳baki unki physical proximity se to Mai Sharma gayi.

Keep coming with more. 😊

*UNRES*

Wow! Where do I even start? First I need my heart to recover from the ending.

First of all, I am so glad you wrote another OS because I absolutely love your writing dear. Don't stop writing because trust me you are meant for it.

Second, a jealous and sulky Sameer Maheshwari is the cutest thing on this planet and totally gets my SamAina feels reeling. I like how you drew a parallel here between this boy and Sameer but with a reverse perspective. It added layers of depth to the time that has gone by and also portrayed the distance that SamAina have travelled together.

Third, you read my mind virtually. I wanted Naina to call Sameer her boyfriend in the show. Which she did but not the way I wanted. i wanted it to be done in school where we saw a more innocent version of Naina and her calling him her love would have portrayed the first inklings of comfort arising in their relationship. Something you have done here accompanying it with that beautiful description of our innocent SamAina's first brush with physical intimacy. Totally had me fangirling and blushing there.

So do continue writing your beautiful ideas. I can't wait to read more from you. 👏👏

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Unreserved 😳

First of all, I'm very sorry for the delay

At the time of the study, you were in the world of SamAina 😆😆

All fans want to see jealous Sameer.. And you gave it to us.. Stories mein hi armaan pure hote hai 😉

Possessive Sameer.. Yeh toh hadd se jyaada hi jealous tha.. aur hadd se jyaada kuch bhi achha nahi hota, jealousy bhi nahi.. hehe pyaar tha par maine apne convenience ke liye kar liya.. 😉😆

Sameer himself called them friends.. Here Naina went a bit further 😳

Naina's BF confession was simple and cute 😊

Shreya!! It's not fair with Ishaan darling.. bechare ko kam se kam 1 baar tuition dene deti na Naina ko.. fail ho gaya toh 😆

End ka romance toh blushing karanewala tha ☺️

Hope to get the next OS soon.. Btw what happened to your TS? Wo bhi jaldi se mil jaaye 😆

Thanks for the PM

I loved how he could finally get the word boyfriend out of her.. For him😳

The sudden b word from Naina...the scene was beautifully created.

Jealous Sameer is a treat to get.

And the mention of my love, Naina added the charm.

Ending scene in canteen was nostalgic of school time.

Keep up writing. 👍🏼

Loved it. ❤️

Laizu