Samaina OS- Unnamed Relation - Page 4

Originally posted by: SixteenAgain

Beautiful OS Shreya!
Loved the intense jealous Sam! And also Naina knows that's it better not to let him stay angry and green for too long.
That conversation in the canteen was just too good!!
Ishaan ko bolo koi dusra tutor dhunde humara hero apni heroine bilkul bhi share nahi karega 😆

Originally posted by: Sameerkideewani

It was awesome dear Shreya 👍🏼

Loved it ❤️

It was so cute ,It made me blush so hard 😳

Jealous Sameer toh hum sabka sapna hain dear

Keep coming with more

plzzz do write more OSs

Lots of love for you

Originally posted by: toshibelekar

Good work. Keep updating.

Originally posted by: mystique123

Simply fabulous Shreya👏

Thank you so much Isha! I have never interacted with you before so hope I can call you that 😃

Oh , loved the way you created the parallel for the book list scene😊

Thank you dear! I had two parallels in my mind for this One Shot, the one you mentioned and the other one, you must have noticed the Romeo-Juliet hand kiss I tried to recreate in my style 😉

I am always amazed by the way Naina could sense Sameer. Gave away too many feels.

I am with you, the feels that we get is unexplainable...!

Jealousy is a reaction to the fear of losing someone and Sameer was totally lost in it. His insecurity and fear of losing his loved one was clearly visible in his body language.

Right!

But Jealousy actually wasn't in the plot firstly, I just wanted to show how they aren't oblivious to what they share then thus thought came into my mind and I am glad you loved it!🤗

Should be grateful to you for making Naina realize his fear and shower him with all the love he ever cared of. The comfort brought in by the mere mention of love and boyfriend , ahem...his guy is so possessive. He couldnot even stand her talking to anyone.

Thank you dear! Sameer is possessive considering how he had lost his loved ones at such a tender age. Naina realising his fear was done to portray how she deeply love's him and understand him, having fun by making your partner jealous is secondary. 😳

Aww...the subtle romance , am blushing harder than Naina may be 😳

Thank you so much dear! Glad I could make you blush.😃

I wanted to add a little more intimacy but then it isn't proper to the situation, I couldn't add just for the sake of it. Intimacy can be dealt in my upcoming works😆

Sameer's smile towards the end reflected the peace his soul is at.😊

You got it right dear! His soul is at peace whenever Naina is with him, she's his angel after all. 😳

Love

Much love 😃

Originally posted by: 9211

Awww... It was a really sweet OS!!

School was the best time ever in the show with mount abu ki trip...

Now I'm re watching old episodes.. hehe..

Thanks for the PM!

Keep writing!!

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU

Wow..Shreya..I am so surprised.Must say you have a concrete grip over your words.👏👏

Thank you so much Minu di! Coming from you, it means a lot especially because I am fan of your vocabulary😳

Such a crisp update.Boy is jealous from Ishann..Btw with the mention of name Ishaan,I pictured Darseel from Taare Zameen Par..Just imagine Sameer getting jealous of that kiddo.😆

🤣You cracked me up so badly yesterday when I read this. Laughing right now too when I am replying you. I am fond of the name Ishaan but didn't have a face associated with it, now I have😉

Sameer getting jealous of that kid would be some sight😆

Umm..I loved how the green-neon light sparkled and mashallah!what dialogues.👏👏 Short yet powerful and provocative.

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! You made my day❤️

The dialogues were the hardest to write, considering I usually just do descriptions and this compliment, thank you so much. I will work hard on my dialogues in my upcoming works too, much needed motivation 🤗

Naina spoke B-word...That was a good punch.And absolutely loved the detailing of physical proximity scene.The loving act and emotions--right on point.

Thanks di! 😃

I didn't make it heavy and didn't add a lot of physical proximity because I thought the situation isn't right at all, they were having an emotional confession.

Visakha angle was so emotional and yet the label from his love wiped the emotional void of other relationship.

Yes, I added it for a reason. The rejected child's wound will never fully heal but I needed to show that Naina can, to some extent. Naming their relation was a little too much important for Sam for this reason. 😳

Loved it and do come with more ''UNs''...

Thanks for the PM and keep writing.

With love-

Minu