Samaina OS- Unnamed Relation - Page 8

Originally posted by: shravyarao

Aww shreya, this one was so cute ❤️ i love the way u are going with the school theme in ur OS's. I keep missing the school romance too much. Their innocence coupled with the attraction always gives me the feels!!

Thank you Shravya. True, the school romance has a charm that holds a special place in our hearts, always. Maybe that's the reason why I always end up writing on those lines. 😳

And what a treat to see jealous sameer, you dealt with it so subtly i loved it so much. Him demanding to name their relation and the soft romance u gave there is to die for. I absolutely adore the sweet romance these two indulge in, always a treat to watch and read as well.

I am humbled. Glad you love it! I had a hard time writing the dialogues for jealous Sammy but thank you! 😃

I want a longer one next time yaar. Why so short short? Mann nahi bara!! Please give little bit longer one on the next story 😳

Hahha, yeah! That's a complain. The crisis in time makes me write short, will work on the length.

Also how naina handles sameer so maturely exactly understanding the reason behind his behaviour, sameer pouting that she isn't pestering him more is super cute.

It's shown in the show too. When Sam sulks, Naina handles him amazingly and vice versa. Portrayed that here. 😃

Keep coming with more 😊

Originally posted by: viraf4u

this is indeed very beautiful and yes Jealous Sameer is always a treat to watch.. his nose flaring and cheeks going red.. ufff.. fab job...

Thank you for the PM..

It was amazing..

👏

Vira

Originally posted by: moumita04

Hey Shreya... What a beautiful OS... 😃

Thank you so much Mou Di 😃

Sameer's jealousy was a treat... and for a moment even I felt like what is Naina saying... How can she call another boy her friend... 😆😆

Dialogues were hard for me to come up with and I had to enact it to get the realism which took up my time..That dialogue was inspired by my personal experience 😉

I loved how Sameer didn't let her go and demanded that she name their relationship... Call him her own... He already had that unspoken right over her, but now he wanted it to be spelled out...

Today he wouldn't have let her go away, shy or not. She had to name their relation and she couldn't leave him hanging with 'boyf'

I thought it would end on a kiss... but you took me by surprise... so the school scene was recreated, and this time instead of anger, love overpowered both souls...

I felt the scene was a little emotional considering I had bought unhealed wounds in the narration so I just wanted them to enjoy the feeling. 😃

Truly a fantastic piece Shreya... and I am sorry for the late reply...! 😊

Thank you again Di. It is completely okay and I am sorry to reply late, so much in my platter.

You are good at bringing out such unexpected twists and quite effective phrasing... keep it up!

This compliment means a lot! 😳

Love,

Mou

Originally posted by: ...sandy...

Hey dear,

Sorry for the late comment..

Oh dear, and I am sorry for the late reply, was too busy. Hope you understand. 😊 I don't mind late replied though. 😃

Such a wonderful OS.. 👏 Jealous Sameer.. ❤️ Wish the cvs show us Sameer jealous in the show too. 😆

Thank you Sandy...! Show mein kab milega, kisko pata hai...stories se kaam chalana hai I guess 😆

I remembered the school scene, in canteen Sameer would utter the B-word and stop in midway making Naina blush.. And here Naina herself is uttering the word openly.. 😆 Loved it.. And now i'm blushing.. 😆

The canteen scene is what gave birth to this idea, and you could see this is why it's presented in the canteen only...Before Naina uttering the B-word, there was some subtle actions by Sameer😉

Glad I could make you blush dear😳

I can't believe a cheek kiss can be so hot.. 😉

Hahhaa, thank you dear!

"Darling" the word from his mouth would be enough to do anything and Naina named the relationship.. ❤️ Wish they had kissed.. Write more dear.. it was really a wonderful read.. 😳

Actually 'Darling' is a habit of mine which i use to address my bestie, so my few dialogues reflects my way of talking...😃

I didn't want to them to kiss considering how I had made it a little emotional, bringing the Vishaka angle...I still haven't written a kiss in my works on Samaina😉

Originally posted by: padmalaya30

wow this is amazing

jealous sameer..uff..wish we get something like this in the show😉

shreya keep writing..

thanks for the pm😊

Originally posted by: husnkimalika

Amazing os

Originally posted by: husnkimalika

Well written

Originally posted by: aman.bindra

Hey Shreya!!

Hayee this was such a cuteee OS!!

I have alwaysss longed to see a jealous Sameer on our show and here you showed a jealous Sameer in such a cutee fashion!! 😆😳...

PVKM...the name itself gives me nostalgia!! Loved the antics of sameer...cutee as a button...❤️...and Naina finally giving in and understanding what her words mean for him in his life!! Hai their confession was...☺️🤗!!

Originally posted by: _.SilentHeart._

Reserved darling.. 😉

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Unreserved 😳

Intezaar karwaya tumne. 😳

First of all, I'm very sorry for the delay

Maaf kiya! 😉 Main bhi khud late hu.

At the time of the study, you were in the world of SamAina 😆😆

Roz ki baat hai, hamesha un dono ke baare mein hi sochti hu...😆

All fans want to see jealous Sameer.. And you gave it to us.. Stories mein hi armaan pure hote hai 😉

It was hard to write about jealousy of an opposite gender but all of you liked it and I am glad! 😃

And yes, stories mein hi armaan pure hote hai, show se zyada umeed nahi kar sakte! 😉

Possessive Sameer.. Yeh toh hadd se jyaada hi jealous tha.. aur hadd se jyaada kuch bhi achha nahi hota, jealousy bhi nahi.. hehe pyaar tha par maine apne convenience ke liye kar liya.. 😉😆

Aur woh Beyhadh mein tha, my favourite Maya! 😳

Yeah, hadd se zyada kuch bhi acha nahi hai, par yeh toh cute wala tha, no harm caused! 😳

Sameer himself called them friends.. Here Naina went a bit further 😳

Naina's BF confession was simple and cute 😊

Thank you so much Di! 😃

Shreya!! It's not fair with Ishaan darling.. bechare ko kam se kam 1 baar tution dene deti na Naina ko.. fail ho gaya toh 😆

Finally uske baare mein koi toh socha! 🤣

Uske tuition ke liye Sanjay Tibrewal haina...😉

End ka romance toh blushing karanewala tha ☺️

Arre, ye compliment sun ke mein blush kar rahi hu...❤️

Hope to get the next OS soon.. Btw what happened to your TS? Wo bhi jaldi se mil jaaye 😆

Likhungi kuch, jald hi. 😳

Thanks for the PM