Samaina OS- Unnamed Relation - Page 3

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Posted: 7 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: Yudkbh30

I love jealous Sameer Maheshwari

Thank you for commenting😊
Hahhhaa, I love jealous Sameer Maheshwari too😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww... It was a really sweet OS!!
School was the best time ever in the show with mount abu ki trip...
Now I'm re watching old episodes.. hehe..
Thanks for the PM!
Keep writing!!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wow..Shreya..I am so surprised.Must say you have a concrete grip over your words.👏👏
Such a crisp update.Boy is jealous from Ishann..Btw with the mention of name Ishaan,I pictured Darseel from Taare Zameen Par..Just imagine Sameer getting jealous of that kiddo.😆

Umm..I loved how the green-neon light sparkled and mashallah!what dialogues.👏👏 Short yet powerful and provocative.

Naina spoke B-word...That was a good punch.And absolutely loved the detailing of physical proximity scene.The loving act and emotions--right on point.

Visakha angle was so emotional and yet the label from his love wiped the emotional void of other relationship.

Loved it and do come with more ''UNs''...

Thanks for the PM and keep writing.
With love-
Minu

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: JaySee

Superb story Shreya. Thanks for the PM.
Jealous, angry and sulking Sameer is always a treat to watch. Loved the way how Naina named their relation wholeheartedly and how much importance it held in Sameer's life.
If u are writing assignments like this then readers like me are always happy.

Thank you so much! 😃
Right. I wanted to put a twist to a jealous Sameer and glad that it can came out good.
@bold: 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
#25
ahhaaan
lovely os dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Samainadeewani

It was so cute

Jealous Sameer toh kabse dekhna change hai hum sab
And you gave us that too in school phase ..
I loved it
The canteen scene was so beautiful
Sameer finally found someone whom he can address as his
I totally felt the emotion
This update just made my day
Thanx a lot for the pm

Love
Laalchi reader

Thanks a lot Manisha! 😃
Well, school track has its own charm and the memories associated to it isn't leaving me! 😳
The neglection he had felt all these years could only be healed by Naina, but the wound his mother caused remains.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: WeRockTheWorld

Simple and elegant is what I say when I read this OS...I loved reading it!! 👏

Thank you Ashu di😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awww jealous sameer.. jbse dekhna Chahte h.. such a cutie pie he is..Loved it.. thnx 4 pm..
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Jealous Sameer Wow! How happy I was to see him get jealous 😳
The confrontation was amazing! She started to go and he held her wrists to stop her ☺️

Awww 😳 Sameer just admitted he was jealous, kab milega aisa show mein? 😛

Friend sun kar toh volcano phat gya tha! Main bhi friend hun aur woh bhi friend hai 😆😉
I loved the possessiveness Mr. Maheshwari held! 😃

Then she pacified him with the B-word and herself got terrified and blushy aiee ❤️

The ending was fabulous 🤗 The name of the oneshot is perfect! Unnamed relation , do do write more! It was great 😊

Love it shreya! You write really short and sweet! It tugs the heart at the right places! ⭐️
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Posted: 7 years ago
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J Sameer yayyy!!! But I got confused in the end...were they reminiscing school days or was it a few days gap between the two incidents?
Edited by Radkam - 7 years ago

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