SS: Sometimes there is no right way! - PART 5 updated on Page 10 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...
Thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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god i loved both d parts
raman understanding his mistake
i loved adi n ishu's convo
it was awesome updates
now need a ishra convo
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I'm left totally speechless! Par excellence 😊
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Wow... Thank you every one for your likes and comments... Will update soon!!!
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Awesome updates. Raman realized his mistake. Ishita and adi convo was superb. Loved it . Thanks for the pm.
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waiting for the next update eagerly..
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I read all the parts in one go! This is freaking awesome! How damn I wished cvs turned this scene like this.

Beautifully written. Completely loved ishima adi convo! So real.. cvs shud incorporate this.

Cont soon.. wud love to read ishra patch up..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello every one... I am back with the fourth installment in this story... well i was saw today's episode and realized that Mr. Iyer really loves his daughters... he just had a line or two but his concern for Vandu was obvious... so i sat down and came up with this... i know that i am dragging the story but i just could not give up on the idea and had to incorporate it in the story... Enjoy!!!

PS: will send out PMs tomorrow...


PART 4

RAMAN -

"She didn't stop"... I can see her Red Santro i10 leave the apartment complex... and for the first time she did not stop to look back... I can feel a trickle down my spine... Oh this is not good... not good at all... every time that I have messed it up with her, she always gives me an opening... sometimes she just forgives me... like in the case of Amma's accident... or she looks for a fight just like during the Rinki and Mihir thing... even if she is really... really hurt... like the time of Lori pooja... she still did not leave me... her eyes still asked me to talk to her... but this time... I can feel that invisible wall... it is as if she does not want to patch up... I slowly walk back to the apartment... my own walk of shame...

As I open the door I hear Adi telling everyone how his Ishima apologized to him... that she took him to her most secret place and then spoke to him... how she accepted her mistake and apologized for it... she did not justify her stand... she just apologized... and then answered all his questions... helped him understand why she went all bonkers... I hear Adi say... "Papa can you believe it... Ishima thinks that I am precious... that what we share needs to be protected... Romi Chachu... do you remember... you once told me that the two of us were alone in a large family... well... I am not alone... I have Papa and Ishima... they will always love me... guess what Dadi... Ishima loves me... not because she gave birth to me... or because being with me helps her win or gain something... she loves me because she chooses to do so..." just then Adi gets a call... it is from Vinnie... apparently Ishita called her up and cleared the air... Adi is so happy... and just like that the reason for my anger disappears... Adi is happy... Ishita and Adi... the mother - son duo have patched up... but because of the words I said in anger yesterday... I think I may lose her...

I walk back to my room and sit... I need a game plan... I need to win my Madrasan back... suddenly I hear a knock on the door... it is Neelu... telling that Papaji is calling me downstairs... I walk down to see Appa and Ishita there... from the look on her face it is clear that she does not want to be here... Appa asks the both of us to sit down... looks like some sort of intervention... Thank you Mata Rani... finally my Madrasan will have to forgive me... feeling a little better I immediately move ahead and take a seat... I smile at Appa but all I get in return is an angry stare... ok... this is not like what I was thinking... before I can speak Appa turns to Ishita and says...

"Ishu... you are the most precious thing in my life... and I love you... but what you did yesterday was inexcusable... I get that you want to be a good mother... and you are trying to compensate for not having given birth to Adi... but YOU WERE WRONG... period... there is no justification for what happened yesterday and I am very disappointed in what happened... and not just with Adi... but with your husband also... you need to stop treating Raman as the third party... because whether you want to agree or not...the fact remains that you are Ruhi and Adi's mother because you are his wife... this has nothing to do with your ability to conceive... it is just the truth!"... That was harsh... I can see the pain on Ishita's face... but before I could even get in a word Appa turned to me... "Shut up Raman... not another word... I think you have said enough in the last one year and we have heard enough... now it is my turn..." For the first time I had no retort... I have never see Appa this angry or this determined... so I just keep quiet and listen as Appa continues to speak to Ishita...

"Ishu... Having said that... I am proud of the way you dealt with the whole situation... instead of making it an ego issue... you spoke to Adi and apologized for your mistake... and kanna... that is what will make you a great mother... you don't become a good parent by hovering over your child... you become a good parent when you can accept and discuss your faults with your child... just like you do his... and today you took the first step in that direction..."

Appa is right... Ishita dealt with it really well... but if she accepts her mistake why cant she understand that I made a mistake too... she did it because she loves Adi... I also spoke in anger because I love Adi... so why cant she give me a chance... Appa then turns to me... it looks like he has a lot to say... he begins by telling me how he did not know me very well... but based on my conversation about Mihir with Mummyji that he overheard, he trusted me with his daughter... that in the last one year... I have given his daughter a lot of happiness and he is grateful for that... I want to stop him... every happy moment that Ishita and I shared in the last one year was as much for me as it was for her... I love his daughter... of course I want her to be happy... before I can put in a word Appa continues... "Raman... yesterday you stood up for your son... and I am happy that you love my grandson so much... so I think you will understand when today as a father, I stand up for my daughter... Raman, I am a simple man... my dreams are restricted to my family... I raised my daughters to be independent women with a sense of healthy self-respect and moral values... yes... Madhu and I have raised our daughters to believe that relationships are for life... that you need to stick with the person that you love... for better or for worse... but I don't want my daughter to do that at the expense of her self-respect... I am a simple man and I have raised Ishu also the same way... these grand gestures of expensive gifts...filling up a room of flowers... announcing your love to the whole world... are all very good and romantic... they may make her feel happy at that moment... but if you cannot give my daughter the basic respect which she deserves... then I am sorry... I cannot let my daughter be with a person who slowly strips her away of her confidence... using her weakness as weapons to hurt her... in the last one year there have been many times when either you have hurt her or have just kept quiet when someone else hurt her... and I have kept quiet... because I believe that somethings can be sortened out by a husband and wife only... so I have never interfered till today... but what happened yesterday was uncalled for...you had every right to correct Ishu... she made a mistake... and as her life partner it is your job to make her realize that... but the words you used yesterday... I am sorry... but after everything that my daughter has done for you... if this is your opinion... then you really need to think about you marriage and relationship... because it is clearly not healthy... and what was worse... my daughter left your house alone... late at night... walking in the rain all the way to Vandu's house... and you did not even bother... yes... she was being irresponsible taking a step like that... but Raman... you both may not have been on talking terms... but she was still your wife... and you did not even know that she had left your house..."

I am still trying to take in what Appa just said, when I hear him say that Ishita is going to Chennai with him for a few days... that I should use this time to sort myself out... and that Ishita will also be doing the same... and then we both need to figure out a way to move ahead... because marriage was for life... I see her walk away behind Appa... never looking at me... just one look Ishita... I need something to go on... because Appa's words today have shown me a facet of Raman Bhalla that I really don't like... I need some of you to feel good... so that I can move ahead and get you back... she pauses near the door... I can feel my heart rate increase... I hold my breath as I see her turn and look at me and then leave the house... these two seconds seem to have given me life... her eyes when she looked at me... they told me that she still loved me... that she expected me to sort everything out... that she hurt... but she wanted me to heal her pain... and I am going to do it... I am going to get my Madrasan back...

hope you all liked it... do let me know... 😉

Edited by mujna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow. I read all chapters in one go and I really liked how ishra understood their mistake. Wish something like this was shown on the show. Was completely disappointed how poorly the Nanny Cam situation was played in the serial. Please update soon. Waiting anxiously to read the rest.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow! God bless my friend..whatever made u write this. Its high time somebody spoke about self respect and basically the importance of respecting your partner in a relationship. And Indian television is light years away from showing something along these lines.
Respect comes first in a relationship.Period.Bhaad main jaaye candles aur balloons.

Quoting my fav part from the update below.

these grand gestures of expensive gifts...filling up a room of flowers... announcing your love to the whole world... are all very good and romantic... they may make her feel happy at that moment... but if you cannot give my daughter the basic respect which she deserves... then I am sorry... I cannot let my daughter be with a person who slowly strips her away of her confidence.

Eagerly waiting for the next update.


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