Silver Linings - IshRa OS - Page 7

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Brilliant OS Aani Di 😊 Thanks fr pm 😉 Pls do write more on IshRa & pm Me 😃

Originally posted by: SilverGold

Reserved~

This one might be a little late.

"Teaser of my reaction" -

"OH! EM! GEE! Can I just say that this was...

Originally posted by: ABBY92

I'll start by quoting your last sentence. We all want these dark days to end. This track has gone on for too long now.

Coming to the OS, I literally had tears in my eyes watching the Raman and Ruhi scene yesterday and so, reading this today absolutely justified the scene as I can see Raman actually feeling all that you've written here.

In a way, though I feel Raman has brought this upon himself, seeing him all alone makes me feel bad for him. Ishita has changed a lot in his life but most of all, Raman had found a confidante in her. But now, he can't confide in her or rather, he's forced not to which makes this all the more frustrating for both Raman and us.

I just hope this track does indeed have a silver lining!!

Originally posted by: baubles

Yet another beautiful piece from you...you manage to evoke so many emotions in me while reading your OSes!😳

Raman recalling all his harsh memories with Ruhi while having his angel beside him, showering him with love was beautiful...❤️

And also him missing his Ishita..loved it..!

Originally posted by: VasuKaShlicious

So veey well written dear !
loved it...
Keep writing...

Originally posted by: rutu83

lovely os
that ruhi-raman scene has to be one of my favs in YHM❤️ and loved reading about the morning after and ruhi bringing that peace to raman for few moments. you write raman really really well.
not liking this wretched track but if it's inspiring you to write more then i'm all for it 😛

Originally posted by: Elita

A gripping monologue on Raman's feelings. 👏👏👏

Sliver Lining...a fitting title for Raman... under the current situation...when he's caught in the conflicts of life Ruhi came as a ray of hope and love which was much needed for him. She lifted his spirits up when all had shunned him.

Originally posted by: --Sia--

Lovely OS Aani ...

Originally posted by: paru_rox

Glad to read Raman's thoughts and feelings when he is fighting with his self. I especially loved the part where the father in him is in conflict with the husband in him. And adored his regret when he had ignored Ruhi due to her mole ... he missed out on so many years of his daughter's life coz of a mole .

God the character RKB has always been this stupid I tell you and the guy just needs a shrink especially for the mole wala logic which always irritated me big time. I never understood why he liked Shagun's mole for that matter ... its a bloody mole, let it go man 😡

I actually could feel an ounce of something for Raman here coz you have written this Aani and as usual you can feel while reading your works. But in reality I would just like to strangle RKB right now for his idiot ism.

Thanks for being such a sweetheart and writing for this track ... it really helps in these dreary times 🤗

Originally posted by: Live-life

Hey A!

Hey N

I am sorry for being late in commenting yet again. This time don't even ask!

no probs LOL I am having a hard time myself keeping up with the replies

Okay coming to the update. It was a mind blowing wriiten again from your side Aani! I loved every word of it. There was not one time where my eyes moved from the screen. It literally hooked me there for the 15 mins I took to read it. Seriously...Hats Off to you!

thanks N 😊

Raman and his little angel sleeping together was probably the a soothing scene we have had in a while considering the current track. The way Ruhi took care of Raman, fed him, lulled him to sleep was just heart touching. Any father would be very proud of his daughter in this situation. And Ruhi is a doll! Puri ki puri Daddiama! 😆 Afterall she is the daughter of Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla. She takes on after her Ishima! Hehe.

I know man the scene just melted my heart and to see Ruhi taking care of her dad was such an adorable sight. Daughters are seriously the best and yep she is her mother Ishita' daughter completely

Your portrayed Raman's inner turmoil and pain beautifully into words. Couldn't have been better. He is stuck between fulfilling a husband's duty and a Fathers one. It really is a complicated situation. But that said he still misses Ishita. Being under the same roof they are miles apart and this is getting to him. He missed her, their arguments, her lectures, their taunts, their silly nok jhoks.

if he opens up his damn mouth he may get out of the mess he is in but well he is Majboor and so the suffering had to give way to this longing he has for Ishita... I think post this track it would be a delight to watch the change in their equation today SBS showed he was about to hug her,,, oh he is so falling for her 😛

He misses his Ruhi and Ishita. He misses his family terribly. You portrayed that really well Aani! I mean...it couldn't have been better. I am at a loss of words here... 😛

thank you ☺️

The scene where Ishita enters the room and he sneaks glances at her is a prisstine one. Feeling her presence meant so much to him that he stayed as he as. Their...relationship is really ggrowing even though it's not the best way...but still...I hope in the real track this situation is over soon.

it was the best he could get at the moment you know and he doesnt even realize it but just a glimpse of her means so much to him now!

Thank you sooo much for this Fantabulous and beyond perfect OS as always. You really are a one in a million. And I seriously mean it!

Keep writing A and Thanks for the PM!

😳

Nabi...

thanks Nabi 🤗