Silver Linings - IshRa OS - Page 6

Originally posted by: Isma_A

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Another beautiful piece, Aani. I love how you showed there was equal importance of both Ruhi and Ishita in Raman's life. Also loved how you explained Raman's emotions and inner thoughts.

All of these OSes on the current track by our IF writers are amazing!! I'm glad to see others so beautifully explain Raman's point of view, something I find lacking in the show! You all help me to see the track differently and give hope for a sweet 'reunion'. :)

Love your pieces, Aani!! I look forward to reading more!:)

Originally posted by: MSN_Vanny

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*Phew* I know I needed to edit this because I just made another *Reserved* post! 😳

Buttt...I'm happy! 😃 It's always a delight to read your works, so I have no problem reading and reserving; even though I edit days later! 😉

Thanks Vanny 😊 and no issues about the time I have a tough time to edit my res' too 😳

Coming to this one. Sighs. You've captured that beautiful father-daughter sequence and more! They always say that daughters are closer to their fathers than their mothers (I know I am. 😳) yet, they tend to pick up their mother's habits, whether they like it or not. 😆 And that's exactly what happened here, Ruhi is so well connected to Raman, yet she's taken after her Ishimaa. Good. Because I can't imagine our angel as a calculating b**** like Shagun. 😳

yep a daughter is always her daddy' little girl no matter what and of course has to be closer to him, I am also closer to my dad too and I wish the show would pick on that too and yep glad to know Ruhi is taking on her Ishimaa as far as mothers go though I would be lying if I say I didnt find the resort bit amazing, lol there she was being such a devil that def is Shagun in her😉😆

The IshRa part. Sighs. We all know nothing hurts or speaks louder than the silent treatment. 😭 Poor Raman, you've made him so vulnerable in here, much like the serial. Except in there, we perceive him as the ultimate idiot. -__- But you've justified him yet not giving him the benefit of the doubt. 👏

oh I am loving the way he is suffering because of her silent treatment and missing her to bits... she has no idea how much she affects him honestly and that makes it all the more a treat when she snubs him and he has a puppy dog look on his face after all it means he is sorry and missing her 😆

All in all, awesome stuff! 🤗

thanks Vanny 🤗

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum

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Another one from you!
Though this track is pissing yet chalo issi bahane we are getting more OSes from you!😆


😆 i cant believe this crappy track is making me write so much shouldnt it be the other way around 🤔 or because a good track is wonderful as it is I dont write much ... hmm points to ponder 😆

Truly that scene between the father-daughter duo was adorable.
Ruhi is actually now a combination of Ishita and Raman. Her nature and habits comprising of Raman with her behaviour and thought processes inspired by Ishita!😛
That girl follows her Ishima's orders impeccably! She knows when to be a dadi-ma and when not!


Ru is a darling I swear when she appears on screen its such a pleasure the kid lights up your screen and your mood in a moment and the daddy daughter duo are so adorable together I dont get it why the makers dont focus more on them and have him be a fool for that brat of his


Though the credit goes to Ishita. That silent realization that Ishita is actually the person behind all this was dealt with subtlety!👏

yep i love how they conceived this whole sequence kudos to the writer


He accepted that Ishita is the best thing that could have ever happened to him!
Though he didn't accept it out loud but still he truly believes it now and wants his daughter to be like him.
I prefer the method of silently accepting a fact and believing it instead of being pretentiously vociferous.😊


oh when will he say this on the show and I dont mean a loud public declaration just a monologue cos he need not put up an ad for what his wife means to him for the world to see - he should feel that for himself and that is more than enough 😳

The way you ended your story with the dawn it felt like those few auspicious seconds when you wake up from your slumber with the feeling of paradise on earth and you being omnipotent with an angel in your arms.
Thence, suddenly reality crashes down on your feet.😊

wow you put that so beautifully I didnt see it that way 😛 but yep its so true


Loved this piece Aani! Thank you!🤗

thanks Afsana 🤗

Originally posted by: ZenerDiode

Hey Anni, very beautiful OS . it was very emotional scene and i literally cried with him 😭

Hey Zene aww thank you so much for liking this one so very much 😳

i cannot describe how much i loved your details to show his turmoil he is passing through. once again master piece after beneath the surface !! its always treat to read your write up give me always fresh air and clean some clouds too !!

I really love this dad daughter dynamic on the show wish the makers pay more attention to it and as for attention to details thank you guess having a sort of OCD pays off 😆

i am not really having enough reading this so many times this is power of writer i must say!!

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how much controversy. the daughter he always overlooked just because of mole, had become strongest support system for him.he never could show his love for his daughter for certain reasons,same child is giving him alleviation. what to say ?
and the son he was craving from 6 years is just giving him pain and pain . i just wonder when this man ll realize difference between his own children
one becomes ointment for him and other just never leaves chance to curse him.

exactly one attribute beyond her control made him subject her to so much ignorance until Ishita came along one day the man has to learn he cannot always subject her to his crap though... the son he considers as a manifestation of the happy times of his life is actually no good while the daughter who he thought made him miserable is the one who actually sticks with him always

what ever the circumstances are shown on show am not still able to hate him, of course he deserves punishment for breaking marriage promises i too disliked it am too upset with him but i can't have extreme dislike can i say this kid is making me to love him ?

@bold - I know what you mean man... you wanna be so annoyed with him but then she comes along and nowadays you see so much tenderness between the scenes these two share your heart cant help but melt 😳

how much we all are hoping complete ST by ishu after this track is over !! i really want to see him literally finding excuses and reasons to talk to her but she ignores all and he becomes impatient and finally sits upon knees "talk to me,i want to hear your voice"

oh he would move heaven and earth trust me if for Ruhi he could make dosas and do all sorts of stuff this one' totally on him 😉 and between them

it s possible for cvs still after patch up is done that ishita only made ruhi to take care of him that could be acknowledged by him in front of ishita just like he did in hospital that why she was crying when he was having pain

I hope they do

my one of fav lyrics for your OS:

Kal koi tha yahin Ab koi bhi nahin
Banke naagin jaise hai saanson mein laheraayi
Tanhaai palkon pe kitne aansu hai laayi


ah lovely song a fav of mine 😳
on lighter note: by-products of accident crappy track are very much more interesting than incidents running right now on the show 😆 please write more 😳

🤣 I know!! and will be here as much as I can

Originally posted by: Autumn.

What timing!!! Yesterday in episode when they showed Raman in thinking mood while Ruhi was reading to him and bg music going on. I was like why there is music. Why cannot they show inner thoughts of Raman. And since that moment I am like hope you write an OS on it. Wish got fulfilled :)

Beautifully written OS. If only half of what you write CVs will show Raman thinking in the show. So good it will be. Am sure now while watching the show I will be thinking of this OS and Raman's thoughts in here if ever they show Raman contemplating again. Love it!!!

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Silver Lining, indeed!

Hope we can see that in the show. After yesterday's episode it does seem possible. When Ruhi got involved in an issue, she has always managed to bring Ishita and Raman together.

Just when you think Ruhi and Raman couldn't get any cuter, the writers whip out an amazing scene. It was so beautiful to see Raman actually enjoy the much needed warmth and comfort his daughter was providing.

Ishita's silent treatment hurts him the most. I am sure he was hoping she would shout at him. This is probably the best way to get to him.

That little girl certainly deserves the name they call her with lots of love, Ru. She truly is the Ru and once the soul enters, you find happiness.

Last but not at all the least, great OS. As usual!

Cheers!

Originally posted by: MysticRiver

very nice os..👍🏼

Originally posted by: Autumn.

Oh and forgot to write earlier that when he was shown contemplating on the bed, wish they had shown he thinking how come Ruhi came to him and it must be Ishita who must have send her to him. This one dialogue too would have been enough there. But alas it was not. And you wrote same thing in your OS. So glad. Thats makes me think he truly did :)

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

5th OS on same track... not bad Aani

u should thank CV's for dragging ti so long🤣

superb OS...

i loved yesterday Ruhi-Raman scene...

and now ur OS and Raman's thoughts superb...

how Ruhi changed his world and how her presence make him forget all his pain for some time... very beautifully written ...

loved the part where he is missing Ishita and he knows Ishita has done all this and sent Ruhi to him so that he don't feel alone...

i must say u always do all the work, which i always want CV's to do in show...

as usual its amazing Aani...loved it

Originally posted by: ran2012

This is just awesome Aani!! Though I have felt bad for Raman, but never this much after reading your OS. God why doesnt he tell the truth to Ishita😡. I liked the way you included how he had told his daughter not to be like her Ishima. And his realizations of what Ishita had brought in his life!! Keep giving beautiful weekend doses like this😆