Silver Linings - IshRa OS - Page 8

Originally posted by: Jyoe

Hey Aani!

Sorry for being late to reply. been so busy at work!😔

Just got around to read the OS only today and thank you for the PM! and boy , am I glad that I finallyread it and get to share my views!😊

No problem Jyo I understand life gets in the way and time constraints... it takes me days sometimes too to edit my res' or finish my replies...this while I dont even take part in many posts

As always very beautifuly written and heart touching!👏 You are such a gifted writer Aani!😊

thank you ☺️

As like all others here, I am uspet with this dragged track and ofcourse with Raman on the show, but trust me reading your OS make me much more calm and understand Raman in a way that I feel I am in his mind and feeling and experiencing the inner turmoil he is going through and my heart just goes out to it. I just connect with him! And all this, thanks to you for the beautiful way you write about him! I cannot help but end up falling and feel for this guy Raman and for your writing. My reaction after reading your OS..is exactly like this

That is so sweet of you to say I am so relieved this track is now ending to tell you the truth man cos I was fed up of the word majboori 😡😆 But there were moments like this RuMan scene which I totally adored during this track, even last night' convo IshRa had by the window about the rain I had seen where this was headed and made a post called Burning the last bridge too about it, so am not surprised with the direction of the track, only it turned out to be longer than any of us anticipated!

keep writing and if I am fan of this show YHM , then am equally a big fan of your writing!😊

You are gonna give me a bloated head by all this praise I am telling ya 😆

lotsa love to you! Stay blessed and keep giving us more of such OS!

Thanks Jyo 🤗

Originally posted by: madhavimanish32

awesome

Originally posted by: Rozy77

oh i loved this 😃

beautifully written 👏

loved the portrayal of raman's emotions👍🏼

as always, superb dear⭐️

Originally posted by: prachi_vrushan

this made m speechless you penned his emotions very well abt ruhi ishita n their happy life simply loved it
keep it up

Originally posted by: -IshRaDivAn-

Finally I am back to reading your works...😳 Still a lot more of them to finish.. Not that I mind... 😆
Aani, this one was just out of the world..

For me it completely belonged to Raman..He was an open book in this one..Starting with RuMan.. Their bond was so beautifully penned down in this one..The Ruman scene where she takes care of him has been my fav scene of them followed by the one where she tests his love..actually to be honest, its a tie between both. Both the scenes are beyond a few words of appreciation..Ofcourse, the scene described in your words can only make it look more beautiful...

" He cannot understand how life came to this - a daughter who loves him so always got the rough end of the deal while a son who loathes him to no ends is the one who makes him pine for his presence. " - Aani, you nailed it here. This is exactly where he was always wrong. His feelings and his fears regarding Ruhi and her future followed by his guilt. It couldn't have been better.. 👏

Coming to him and Ishita, yes Ruhi was the one who gave him Ishu and now his life seems somewhat stable than it was before, when he had nothing to actually look up to. She changed his life for good.. I loved the way he was missing her.. and yearning for her..

" Her distance is as maddening to him as her concern is. He knows she is the one who made Ruhi take care of him last night, understands Ishita must have taught Ruhi how to look after him. His daughter is an angel but the one whose concern overwhelmed and cocooned him, the one whose presence lingered even when she was not around was his wife. " - Those had me grinning like a fool, I dont know why.!!!! 😃😆 LOVED IT.!!! 😳 I would put the parts that followed this one too but I may have to put so many that follow, but the point is.. the entire part was so lovely.!! Everything about Ishra..❤️

You know the best part about this one was of how you showed that Ishu and Ruhi both hold equal importance in his life..he is incomplete without either of them. He is glad that his daughter is with him, but he also cannot stop missing her.

Brilliant Aani.. It was flawless.!!! You already know it that you are brilliant... 😉😃