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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: CharmGal

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Will update tonight inshallah 😊


take your time Mary 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: always_a_TV_fan

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As I read this Aani, I felt like I was traversing through his head. Do I need to say how detailed and fine this piece is!!!


Thanks Lucky 😃


His scene with Ruhi, and Ruhi's angelic behaviour has inspired us so much. Just like your title, the scene was a silver lining for us fans in this dreadful phase

I swear I think it became the only scene in the past two weeks which we wouldnt mind watching on a loop there was such a charm about it, man the kid is magic and yet the man is blinded by that brat

Raman has woken up to the fact that his daughter is his strength, and a big part of his support system. I want the show to address this too. Not just focus on Ishita - Ruhi , Ishita - Raman, but also Raman and Ruhi. Although the scene was more than perfect, I'd like Raman to visibly show that he's realised the difference between his 2 kids, and how much he regrets the indifference he showed to his daughter till Ishita entered their lives.


Yep I was so prepared for this scene when I read the spoilers you know but to watch it was such a delight esp because you could see how very much Raman needed this - someone to just hold, he was literally falling apart and here came this little girl who wasnt judging him or expecting things from him like everyone else at the time - lies or truth, anything - she was just taking care of him no questions asked and sometimes that is all you need when you feel alone - someone there for you... I think once the two kids are under the same roof the difference would be so jarring to him it might be his dumb wake up call

It is interesting, that exactly when he's 'lost' his relationship with Ishita, he remembers the things he had. The things that didn't make a lot of meaning, the ones that didn't seem important are suddenly reminding him of her so much. I was reminded of this song "Na Jaane kyon hota hai yeh zindagi ke saath, achaanak yeh man kisi ke jaane ke baad, kare phir uski yaad, chhoti chhotisi baat"


Ah a beautiful and an apt song and isnt it the story of everyone' life somehow at some point you learn what you had only when you have lost it

Here goes a quote for how he realises he misses those little things with her:

"I wonder how much of the day I spend just callin' after you." - Harper Lee, To Kill a Mockingbird

and one for him and Ruhi:

"The soul is healed by being with children." - Fyodor Dostoyevsky

lovely quotes as always 😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
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thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: happenstance

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Aani i think this has to be one of my favourite pieces from you😳
I loved the way you chartered Raman and Ruhi's journey through his thoughts, and what struck me was that she was right by his side as his mind processes all that has happened in the past.

I had a lump in my throat reading this, thats how strongly you are able to evoke emotion through your writing.

The Raman you wrote is the Raman I have always seen and felt whilst watching the show and its so nice to see him in your work too.

Absolutely beautiful hun 🤗


Hey Uz thank you 😃
@bold - somehow thats parallel to the show as well isnt it? She has been always there with him through thick and thin... he just has to wake up to the fact and stop giving that brat so much importance or at least some lessons in manners 😳

Glad you were so moved by this Uz 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tanyaarora11

Beautiful! Loved it :) The inner turmoil and helplessness of RKB is perfectly described by you.
You're a fabulous writer, I just love reading your OS! It automatically rejuvenates your mood. :) Thanks! :D


thanks Tanya 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey A!

I am sorry for being late in commenting yet again. This time don't even ask!

Okay coming to the update. It was a mind blowing wriiten again from your side Aani! I loved every word of it. There was not one time where my eyes moved from the screen. It literally hooked me there for the 15 mins I took to read it. Seriously...Hats Off to you!

Raman and his little angel sleeping together was probably the a soothing scene we have had in a while considering the current track. The way Ruhi took care of Raman, fed him, lulled him to sleep was just heart touching. Any father would be very proud of his daughter in this situation. And Ruhi is a doll! Puri ki puri Daddiama! 😆 Afterall she is the daughter of Ishita Raman Kumar Bhalla. She takes on after her Ishima! Hehe.

Your portrayed Raman's inner turmoil and pain beautifully into words. Couldn't have been better. He is stuck between fulfilling a husband's duty and a Fathers one. It really is a complicated situation. But that said he still misses Ishita. Being under the same roof they are miles apart and this is getting to him. He missed her, their arguments, her lectures, their taunts, their silly nok jhoks.

He misses his Ruhi and Ishita. He misses his family terribly. You portrayed that really well Aani! I mean...it couldn't have been better. I am at a loss of words here... 😛

The scene where Ishita enters the room and he sneaks glances at her is a prisstine one. Feeling her presence meant so much to him that he stayed as he as. Their...relationship is really ggrowing even though it's not the best way...but still...I hope in the real track this situation is over soon.

Thank you sooo much for this Fantabulous and beyond perfect OS as always. You really are a one in a million. And I seriously mean it!

Keep writing A and Thanks for the PM!
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Nabi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited on page one. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Aani you seem to be on a role these days and the frustration is making you write more often which is awesome . For me I enjoy reading posts by members than watching the show because it makes me sick to my stomach ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Heyya Aani!

Edited on Page 2.😊

Sorry for being late. Was caught up on pending work.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited on page 1. Sorry for slow response! 😳

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