Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28

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ABI

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Great start. Loved how you gave us a well thought out and written part on how Raman came to be the way he is. And this hints on how though he has become good at wearing a mask to hide his real self, he has failed to realise that others may do the same, even Ishita.

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luvsagar

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Posted: 11 years ago

#32

wow Aani..what a beautiful start...I always await your updates anxiously .. you are a fabulous writer penning down emotions so well Please continue soon!!

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sudhajo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#33

👏 ... SS on Ishra is always good to read,, this one is just Beautifully done n a good start

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Maaneet099

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Posted: 11 years ago

#34

bookmarked. Currently overwhelmed with work shall read at leisure :D

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serendipity.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Aah. Bliss. Sorry im late. Reserved.

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Elita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Love the way you have sketched Raman... a simple yet a complicated character admired by all.

Great start...

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: happenstance
Res- I don't think I can get away with any more grinning in front of my boss for now will be back
Edited- glad I did wait to read this, it had me all misty eyed. That was just so beautifully written, I want more please😳

Couple of things:

And the mountains echoed is a favourite of mine and I love that quote. Loved the way you conveyed the 'lessons' that he has learnt and is now learning all over again but in a completely different fashion.

You really get into the 'nitty gritty' (for lack of a better word right word) of Raman's core and each time regardless of which OS or SS it is I feel like we as a reader also grow with Raman- and thats all down to your gift! Its a pleasure reading your work. Looking forward to the next 🤗

Hi thank you so much for this reply 😊

@bold - 😳 that is kind of you to say and more its coming up 😳

@red - I love the book too 😃 Hosseini has a way with words and I idolize the man for the way he manages to make even the simplest words mesmerizing so its a huge compliment to me you saying I did justice to the words he used and I felt they suit Raman to the T. That no one looks you for the person you are, everyone just looks at the surface

@blue - ☺️ thank you

Btw may I pls know your name 😳

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: SilverGold
AMAZING! This was so well portrayed like all of your previous SSes, I love the way you wrote that appearances can and are deceptive. It applies to both Shagun and Ishita, although they are poles apart. I LOVED it! 👏👏👏

Thanks so much dear and its a pleasure to hear from a silent reader 😃

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago

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Aani

@EkPahelii

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Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: felciya
I love your writing. The title is apt . You have described Raman's past n present well. I'm waiting for your take on Ishita's side of exploration.

thanks dear 😊

Edited by EkPaheli - 11 years ago