Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28 - Page 2

Originally posted by: SWAN123

Nice and a thoughtful one! Very well etched! Makes Raman really lovable.

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Originally posted by: -DreamWeaver-

Wow Anni, what a beautiful scene!!You made RKB and his inner turmoil believable nd realistic.. very intelligent nd smart writing.. Will be waiting fr d next part..

Originally posted by: gupta.aditi20

Hey Aani

First of all you derseve 👏 for writing something like this...

Thanks Aditi 😊

the one phrase :NEVER JUDGE A BOOK BY ITS COVER"... is so apt for both the leads

raman on one hand behaves to be an arrogant ruthless unworthy jerk to the outside world... when there is nothing but emptiness and feeling of betrayal in his heart... he everyday fights with his inner self... and masks all the goodness that he has behind the mask of anger... first meet and you'll surely come to the conclusion of the heartless man... yes he is heartless only because it has been brutally broken by a devil who came to his life masked as an angel.. his ex wife...

and then there is ishita who masks her broken heart.. the rejections and taunts she faced overtime.. the cries and pleadings of the lost women.. .the carefree girl that she once was... and most of all the inability to bear a child... all these things behind that peaceful smile... which makes all her near and dear ones think that now she is happy and finally moved on... first look at her we see her contented smile... and all we think that she is content in the world...

i loved how you have showed raman's pain... the feeling of rejection by his own son and wife...

Exactly thats what makes them stand out in the current crop of pairs as per me, these are very real people who have been very brutally abused emotionally and each of them is dealing with a similar problem in their own way. He has exploded like a volcano that was dormant and she has withdrawn into her shell they have like you said been rejected in diff ways by diff people and carry the scars of those injuries on their hearts and souls

and the complete relation to this phrase.. being taught by two women in life.. though differently...

i wish creatives would have explored ishita's pain... or raman realiising that she too has a broken heart.. after the engagement fiasco... but alas.. i so wish this track to be explored... and this would indeed be interesting how raman reads behind the peaceful facade of ishita...

i know my comment is little bit long... hope it didn't bore you...

no problem about the length of the comment and I would love nothing more than for Raman to gain an insight into Ishita' broken heart too😳

Originally posted by: ishra24

Hey well done as usual!

With your every post I run out of praises. It's awesome. Continue soon.

BTW I too was thinking that Ishita's plight must be brought forward. I am actually writing an OS on it. It's half way done. I was suppose to post it today but I have exams and did not have more time. I think I'll post it next week but till then it will be really interesting to see your take on it!

Love your work!!!! 😊😊😊

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

OMG Aani u seriously give it a thought to write on this 🤗

seriously we all wanna see Ishita's side of story too... this poor soul is equally hurt and broken...

and ur start is superb , showing what Raman have bin through .. and how hard life bin to him...

he thinks he has bin through the worst of hell and nothing can be more worse...

but life gonna prove him wrong that he knows it all...

waiting for to read how he will realize Ishita's pain...

ur ending is nice wid quote " never judge a book by its cover" very very true and something we all should follow in our lives...

eagerly waiting for next update...

plz don't make us wait for long...

Originally posted by: lwrimaforever

Intresting start Aani Di!Thanks fr pm!Waiting fr next!Pls continue soon!

Originally posted by: swati_bhatia

loved it :) :)