Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: cool_aparna
woAH Aani you giving us treat on 6 months completion of YHM ...huh?!?!😉

Nice start...very well expressed RKB...

Looking fwd for it...

Hey Aparna thanks so much and OMG 😛 I didnt realize its the 6 month anniversary of YHM until you pointed it out well its wasnt a planned move but now that I know its how cool is that 😛

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Aani

@EkPaheli

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: MysticRiver
very well written...👍🏼

thanks dear 😊

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Shona

@SilverGold

Beginner

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

AMAZING! This was so well portrayed like all of your previous SSes, I love the way you wrote that appearances can and are deceptive. It applies to both Shagun and Ishita, although they are poles apart. I LOVED it! 👏👏👏

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felciya

@felciya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

I love your writing. The title is apt . You have described Raman's past n present well. I'm waiting for your take on Ishita's side of exploration.

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Rumaisa

@Rozy77

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

wow, fantastic start dear 👏

beautifully and brilliantly written ⭐️

am really looking forward to this 1...😃

take care

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Juggaadd

@Juggaadd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Excellent one Aani! Specially the learning, unlearning and relearning part was a revelation.

In the recent episodes, this message was being played in their usual subtle manner. I think when it comes to Ishita, Raman is shielding himself from her effect that too consciously which is of course proving to be a futile attempt. She came into his life at a juncture when his loss of faith was complete and to be proved wrong when you were just convinced of the opposite is unnerving. He is totally shocked by her. Ishita believes him to be heartless. Yet his behaviour does not unnerve her as much as hers does him. At least, that is what I inferred from what they are showing. Which is why I am eager to read your version of Ishita's plight which may throw some light(that rhymes😆) on how Ishita is being affected.

You are right. Shagun and Ishita are as different as chalk and cheese. More so, because Ishita is his equal in intellect and maturity.

I am a little worried about this track though. I haven't read about how Romi will react to his truth coming out. I don't want Romi to go against Ishita because the both them have a really cute relation and we have enough people against the two of them. Also, "Too many villains spoil the show".😆

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Vini

@Fenice

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Splendid!
You are really gifted with words.
This was as awesome as all your previous stories.
Eagerly waiting for the next update. 😊

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afsanaanjum

@afsanaanjum

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Whoa madame! (People are calling you Aani here, though i don't know your name hence, apologies!😛)

That was something remarkably the best that i have come across till now in this forum. That is what a brilliant introduction can do to the readers. Truly outstanding stuff. The overture couldn't have been better than this buddy!👏 Loved the use of appropriate precepts in the correct places.

You definitely did justice to Raman's disposition. His inhibitions and convoluted manners have apt reasons. She will learn soon.

An amazing part being the fact that life keeps on teaching us stuff every single moments. Sometimes we fail to grasp it, but when we do then nothing seems more palatable than the reverberations of our own realizations.

Definitely looking forward to read the upcoming parts.

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smilydear

@smilydear

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Too Good ... I want to read more ... Update soon ...

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FieryLioness

@FieryLioness

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: EkPaheli

Hey Meet 😊

@bold - yep I had so much discussions about this with you, Lucky, Sneha (metamorphmagus) that I felt why not write an SS on this 😳

@red - I dont know how will this be taken but I chose to go with my vision here 😳

@blue - I personally follow that quote and believe not to trust or dislike people in an instant so thats where it comes from and the next UD will be soon 😊

@bold:- me too... actually m learning doing so... m hell bad person when it comes to judging others... when ever i think a person to be gud, they usually show their colors sooner or later... and whom i actually misunderstand they often come out to be a well wishers...

so now i keep my all judgements on hold and only go by ppl's behaviour in various situation..