Beneath The Surface - An IshRa SS | Last Ch - Pg 28 - Page 5

Originally posted by: Rozy77

wow, fantastic start dear 👏

beautifully and brilliantly written ⭐️

am really looking forward to this 1...😃

take care

Originally posted by: Metamorphmagus

Excellent one Aani!

Thanks Sneha 😊

Specially the learning, unlearning and relearning part was a revelation.

☺️ I find sometimes you can be really surprised to learn some things, if you pay close enough attention to details and actually ponder over them. This show has characters that have layers and layers to them which made me think of this esp when I compared Ishita and Shagun from Raman' POV 😳

In the recent episodes, this message was being played in their usual subtle manner. I think when it comes to Ishita, Raman is shielding himself from her effect that too consciously which is of course proving to be a futile attempt.

Totally from his I dont give a damn attitude he has gradually started shifting and caring for her, everything she says and does bothers him, even troubles of her family are now his 😳 he never assumed she would get so involved with his own family to begin with - he always felt since they are marrying for Ruhi that is all she would bother about - being a mom, but she has blended so well into his family he HAD to give in but he is not ready to do so yet without a fight 😳 - and he is fighting a battle he has lost long ago, just wont admit

She came into his life at a juncture when his loss of faith was complete and to be proved wrong when you were just convinced of the opposite is unnerving. He is totally shocked by her.Ishita believes him to be heartless. Yet his behaviour does not unnerve her as much as hers does him. At least, that is what I inferred from what they are showing.

yep he had lost all his faith and she started shocking him almost immediately after their marriage! the first time Ruhi calls Ishita Ishimaa and Ishita is just so floored and happy she hugs her and just watching the two of them interact, seeing his daughter call a woman maa, they barely knew and for her to mean it - it was unnerving to him, watch his expressions in that scene - so subtle and fleeting yet very telling! Honestly its one of the best moments of Karan' acting I have seen on the show. this capacity and selfless love that he witnessed from both ends was a surprise to him - he had felt love doesnt exist anymore - not when a mother can leave her weeping baby barely 6 months old

Which is why I am eager to read your version of Ishita's plight which may throw some light(that rhymes😆) on how Ishita is being affected.

well... I dont know what you are expecting - only I can provide a clue to you here - this is a realization fic 😉 since there are so many blanks for us... its not an easy space to explore 😳

You are right. Shagun and Ishita are as different as chalk and cheese. More so, because Ishita is his equal in intellect and maturity.

Yep and because somewhere they have undergone similar experiences - that of heartbreak and betrayals

I am a little worried about this track though. I haven't read about how Romi will react to his truth coming out. I don't want Romi to go against Ishita because the both them have a really cute relation and we have enough people against the two of them. Also, "Too many villains spoil the show".😆

😆😆 I know what you mean and agree but I think Romi wont turn bad not entirely he is a misguided and lost soul as per me who has the capacity for goodness, he needs some direction and perhaps the right kind of push with a good teacher I know he has done some unforgivable things but somehow I see a ray of hope for him, I kinda like the guy so hope he doesn't stray too far and go rotten

Originally posted by: florine_20

Superb start. Continue soon

Originally posted by: Fenice

Splendid!
You are really gifted with words.
This was as awesome as all your previous stories.
Eagerly waiting for the next update. 😊

Originally posted by: afsanaanjum

Whoa madame! (People are calling you Aani here, though i don't know your name hence, apologies!😛)
Hi Afsana I assume thats your name 😳 you can call me Aani like everyone else 😊

That was something remarkably the best that i have come across till now in this forum. That is what a brilliant introduction can do to the readers. Truly outstanding stuff. The overture couldn't have been better than this buddy!👏 Loved the use of appropriate precepts in the correct places.

thank you! ☺️

You definitely did justice to Raman's disposition. His inhibitions and convoluted manners have apt reasons. She will learn soon.

I find him a very twisted character and he intrigues me as much as he baffles me. In a way its easy to understand him, but its a tough to know him! I hope that made sense 🤔😆 he is as real as can be - he has his good qualities, his woes and then he has his faults which make him my muse 😳

An amazing part being the fact that life keeps on teaching us stuff every single moments. Sometimes we fail to grasp it, but when we do then nothing seems more palatable than the reverberations of our own realizations.


exactly! if you pay attention closely and are WILLING to learn, life is the best teacher in the world, willingness to learn can help you grow and flourish but if you dont then as teachers are known to do, they hand out punishments 😳

Definitely looking forward to read the upcoming parts.

I hope I dont disappoint you 😳

Originally posted by: smilydear

Too Good ... I want to read more ... Update soon ...

Originally posted by: FieryLioness

@bold:- me too... actually m learning doing so... m hell bad person when it comes to judging others... when ever i think a person to be gud, they usually show their colors sooner or later... and whom i actually misunderstand they often come out to be a well wishers...

so now i keep my all judgements on hold and only go by ppl's behaviour in various situation..

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Great start. Loved how you gave us a well thought out and written part on how Raman came to be the way he is. And this hints on how though he has become good at wearing a mask to hide his real self, he has failed to realise that others may do the same, even Ishita.

Originally posted by: luvsagar

wow Aani..what a beautiful start...I always await your updates anxiously .. you are a fabulous writer penning down emotions so well Please continue soon!!