Kerim Fatma OS Corner: GUILT - P.5 (FINAL): pg.13 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
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i love this!! So beautifully written :) Well done
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: muskaan2298

i love this!! So beautifully written :) Well done


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ooo myyy goddd. Am in loveee...love hogaya bhai sooo good!!!
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Standing ovation!!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SaraFatma

Ooo myyy goddd. Am in loveee...love hogaya bhai sooo good!!!

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Standing ovation!!!!


Thank u 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fatmagul was left STUNNED by Karem's confession and I am left STUNNED by your OS,Janhvi 👏...it's wonderful.
I have yet to read other two. This was the first one .
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

Fatmagul was left STUNNED by Karem's confession and I am left STUNNED by your OS,Janhvi 👏...it's wonderful.

I have yet to read other two. This was the first one .


Thank u Ritu 😳

The second has three parts. And is completed 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
So happy to read all this...it was super to read all the three chapters in one go.. Mazaa aa gaya ... fantastic as far as the dialogs and emotions are considered... the way you subtly expressed each emotion that Kerim / Fatmagul felt was what got me 👏
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Originally posted by: NavyaKavya30

So happy to read all this...it was super to read all the three chapters in one go.. Mazaa aa gaya ... fantastic as far as the dialogs and emotions are considered... the way you subtly expressed each emotion that Kerim / Fatmagul felt was what got me 👏


Thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Aww so nice... loved the 3 parts os..
pls do put an index at the start with link
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Originally posted by: JRia

Aww so nice... loved the 3 parts os..

pls do put an index at the start with link


Thanx ria.

Yes. I want to that for each work. I'll do it once I get back to PC. Its tough to do from phone.

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