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hello all !! .. 😃 ..

Surprised to see me in the Writer's Corner ? .. 😳 .. well u all are in for a surprise , 😳 .. this time my story is not a Fan Fiction , it is a story with ORIGINAL CHARACTERS .. (credit nidzzy 😆 ) ..

Today me and nidzzy were just having a discussion and this talk, that why don't i write apart form MN popped up, and as i was feeling mentally relaxed today ( i had my result today 😛 .. 3.1 CGPA 😳) .. so i quickly penned down an idea going on in my head and so here we have


The Forbidden Magic ..

This story is not based on any fictional characters already shown on Tv or books, these are entirely my creation .. 😳 .. i hope u all will enjoy this one as well .. 😳 ..

and one more IMPORTANT thing, i will not update this daily, as normally i start posting when i am done with typing the story but i have just started this today so .. i hope u all understand .. 😳

Happy Reading..
God Bless
Kinza Arshad.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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1.

"hey your lips..!!",

He shouted on the top of his voice and she stopped midway on the road.

Confused , shocked and completely dumbfounded, she turned to find that the person behind that loud voice was running towards her, "your lips ..

"shut up!!" , she shouted and turned, taking a few quick steps she descended down the stairs of the subway station.

The temperature in London was below zero degrees, and entering the subway automatically made her feel warm. Swiping her Oyster travel card in the pass through gates, she took a seat near the track and started waiting for the train. She was holding her bag tight, not because it had something valuable; she just had a habit of holding everything of her possession very tight.

The train could be here any moment, she was going through her wrist watch again and again , tapping her feet and uselessly looking here and there, she was getting impatient for no reason when she saw someone sitting next to her,

"your lips..

"will you shut up!",

He person again came by her and she shouted again.

"I know my lips are very rosy and pink, and very very kissable, I have been hearing this from countless men since my teen age, but sorry dude, this pick up line won't work , ", she spoke in a furious voice and he leaned a bit over her,

"your lips are bleeding..",

And there was something in his voice which made her speechless. In voluntarily, she brushed her fingers over her lips and saw a smear of blood spreading over her fingers, she looked back at him and he took out small packet from his pocket and after removing the packing, slowly rubbed his thumb over the glycerin and then ever so softly rubbed his thumb over her lips.

Initially in shock , she closed her eyes as a wave of warmth diffused through her skin "take care..", his voice made her open her eyes and next she saw him moving away, leaving her eyes with no choice but to follow him till he disappeared in the crowd of people.

Chap 2 - Pg 7
Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oyeee CONGO SHONGO ji :D

A new FF :D

Mein sadke jawaan...though im sorry i havent finished reading the prev one yet :(

But this one seems interesting too :)

Lovely start :D

Lage Raho Angel :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I am so happy to see you write something that is not Mayank Nupur!!!! I was waiting for this to happen since a long time now!!

Okay the title is pretty intriguing since Forbidden is a word that makes the horses of my mind run in all freaking directions ... And the first part had something really amusing as if things were being whisked out from beneath the carpet - I don't know if I am making sense but there was this certain element which just catches you and you can't even point out what it is ... I am really excited to see what this story is all about so update soon!!!

Love you 🤗
Edited by JaeeDevRathore - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kinzaaa 🤗 (see I called you Kinza for a change 😆)
I am so glad you are writing this!! I love the he-she starting, I always enjoy such beginnings! 😳
It's something very different from what I have read till now & I'm eager to read more 😃
Do continue ASAP!!
And yes congo hun on the GPA 🤗
Love,
Nidz
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for cuming back...

and wow...gud start with curoisity...😊

loved it...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Res..

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wow Kinza you're back.. I thought you would take more time, but then its what we like about you... You come back so soon... :)
Okay so starting with the title.."The forbidden magic" its seem so tempting, the forbidden part...
Okay starting witht he ff, I like the start of it... Some random guy following a girl.. And mentioning her lips, according to the girl they were very rosy and kissable... I wonder what had happened if he actually had said that...😆😳
But he was something else..He was following in her because of her bleeding lip... How sweet...And he he gently wiped it away...
The forbidden Magic... Bleeding lip... and A guy following... This isn't a vampire lovestory is it?
Well whatever it is I'm already hooked... Pleasee continue soon... I'm not expecting daily updates but once in a week? Is that okay??
& Kinza continue soon, I want to know the character names, I adore your MN ffs but I'm glad its something new this time... 😃
Updaate sooon...😊
-Laiba
Edited by princez_94 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Kinza..u r back🤗
Luved the first part..so this guy is Mayank na😳
Is it gonna be luv at first sight 4 Nupur??
Update soon

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