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Posted: 14 years ago
#41
Fanta y not MN...

but never mind all i can imagine is still MN😉😆

and loved ur writing style jee😳
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#42
angel😃🤗...welcum back..🤗 🤗...wow! lovely title...actually very interesting!!
n the part 1...hmmm made me even more curious!!! waiting fr this story as eagerly as ever! coz MN or no MN u r just awesome...so seriously waiting fr the part2...n since u r not gonna update daily...plz longer updates!😃
anyways congoz fr this ff..🤗 🤗 though i hope u wont stop writing on MN🤔..anyways i love ur work n m sure anythng u write will b awesome..:D...
n yea congoz fr ur awesome result too!🤗
cont soon(finally i can say this to u😆)...thnx fr d pm...<3 tc!! keep smiling...
GODBLESS❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
#43
Congrates for ur Result Kinza ,,
nice and unique start Kinza..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#44
Awww...a new magic...😆
luv u fantaaa...🤗
but first congrats on ur gud result sweetheart...😳👏🤗
n abt the MAGIC...Awww...its an interesting Start...😳😃
Continue soon...😳🤗
annu😛

😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#45
Congrats for ur new FF Kinza !!🤗🤗

I was so happy to see another FF frm u !!


Interesting beginning..
👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Waiting eagerly for the magic to unfold..


Cont soon!!
😳😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
#46
thank u so much for the lovely response people !! .. 🤗 ..
2.

"Welcome home beta .. " .. Ahmed Malik, a man in his late 50s affectionately spoke as her daughter entered home. "hey dad!", her voice was plain and cold.

"how was the day?", Ahmed Malik still tried being sweet but she just threw her bag and lied down on the couch. Feeling embarrased, he again cleared his throat, "um .. will you .. ," his tone was helpless , but paying least attention, she switched on the TV and raised the volume to the extent that the voice of her father was subdued in it.

"WHAT THE HELL!!",

A boy of about 19 years of age entered the home shouting and she raised the volume even higher.

"ARE YOU DEAF?", he shouted and she started humming the song too, and the boy threw his bag, "dad!!, why don't you say anything to her, she always does like this, is she mad?", he growled and his voice got above the TV volume also,

"umer beta .. please atleast you can.. ", Ahmed Malik just shrugged his shoulders, looking at her with the same helplessnes.
Disappointed from his father's reaction, Umer pulled out the TV plug, "Stop this nonsense", he shouted and she opened her eyes. He passed her a wild look and taking his bag he rushed upstairs and banged the door.

She looked sideways and her father, who went in the kitchen, leaving her alone in the lounge.

She stretched her legs and closed her eyes, another evening filled with shouts and abuses. It wasn't a new thing, and neither did she ever complain about all this, she initiated all this. She could avoid, but she didn't want to.

Sighing, she went to the fridge and grabbed a bottle of juice and gulped it down, she needed something cold to settle the raging fire in herself.

"i am making your favourite pasta with red sauce.. will you ..", her father slowly asked and the drink seemed to stuck in her throat .

"no need to bother so much dad!, I AM leaving!!", she stamped her feet and rushed out of the home, leaving her father with a deep sigh and teary eyes.

Walking down the street, she was blankly going through her current routine, which was without doubt, pathetic. Fighting, sleeping, eating - that was all.

She herself chose to live a life like animals and thus she cannot complain.

"okay fine, I am not complaining!!", she barked at her own conscious as she was walking by a the famous busy street of London,

She observed people around her, there were of all types, but still her eyes stopped on every couple out there, holding hands, sipping coffee, kissing, making out, etc etc, she noticed all their physical gestures, and with these physical gestures, she noticed the abstract reality they were enforcing - COMPANIONSHIP.

"I don't need a companion", she smirked and diverted her attention to her nails, "I am not dependent on anyone", and with this assurity, the raging fire in her settled down.

Turning her eyes away from all those cozying couples, she walked by the street quickly and reached the famous night club of the city. She zipped down her leather jacket, leaving her with a revealing black top, perfectly flaunting every curve of her body.

Taking a deep breath, she entered the club, which she knew was hell, but Maheen Malik had always chosen hell as her companion.

Chap 3 - Pg 11
Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#47
it was an awesome update Fanta...i can actually connect to her thoughts somehow...pats the writer😆

btw me still sees Nupur in there waiting for her Mayank😆
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#48
I'm liking the way you are building up the story! Great job Kinza!

~jiya~
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Posted: 14 years ago
#49
nice update...but y maheen behaviving so wierd?

really goonaa know this...

cont soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#50
wow magician! great buildup of the story i must say.its getting really interesting...waiting for the next part now!!!!!!🤗

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