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Posted: 14 years ago
Happi bdai sweetie
Awesome update
lobed it loadz
can't wait 4 da next part
con soon
thanks 4 da PM
muahhh
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Posted: 14 years ago
Thanks for the treat dear...!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW Kinza...this was absolutely beautifl...I LOVED LOVED LOVEEED the conversation of Zeeshan his subconscious...absolutely clap worthy 👏👏👏...
brilliant update.😊

And a Very happy B'day..didn't know or would've wished u earlier..hope u have a wonderfull year ahead😊
Edited by AmnaIsh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Fanta...its awesome...the way he flirted n fought...cumon its Mayank n Nupur😉😆

waiting eagerly for the next beautiful update😃am sure it will be😳
Edited by Payal-15 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... adorable update kinza!!!!
i'm soo excited abt date ...
cant wait ...
jaldi update!!!
luv ya loads n B'latd B'day once again!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

brilliant update dear..i m so loving the way everything is changing between them...the transformation is really impressive..

i m really sorry 4 not being able to wish u on ur bday..as i hv stopped going on main forum since ages,so i wasnt aware of it dear..a very happy birthday to u..though belated,but its my heartiest wishes 4 u...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Chapter # 9:

A whiff of cold air started blowing, and Zeeshan closed his eyes,

"what?",

Zeeshan opened his eyes on the voice which was soft naturally but always tried to be stern artificially.

Maheen had arrived. She was dressed in a black jeans and maroon high neck sweater. Her cheeks were white due to the chill and a bit puffy due to her huffing, hair loosely tied in a binder, but some of them managed freedom and were flowing freely on her face and her eyes were wide opened. Summing his observations, Zeeshan came on the conclusion that she looked beautiful under moonlight.

"Welcome maheen", he smiled

"I'll sit on only one condition", she replied sternly.

"what?", he asked standing up.

"this is not a date", she twitched her lips in anger, while zeeshan took a couple of steps towards her, now standing very close to her, "and what if I say that this is a date?"

"then I am leaving", she replied and turned immediately to leave.

"I thought you will appreciate my honesty", he said in a voice loud enough to catch the attention of people sitting on 10 ' 15 tables in that open air eating 'area.

His voice did put a halt on her feet and she turned to find that he was standing by the table and the whole place had sunken in silence for a moment, but as she looked around with glaring eyes, people got back to their work and she walked back to zeeshan,

"what exactly do u want?", she asked reaching close to him.

"exactly from what you are running away", he replied crossing his arms around his chest.

"I run away from companionship"

"you run away from your happiness, the solution of your problems", he said in a calm voice.

"you know my problem?", maheen was also equally calm.

"no!, but I know the solution",

Maheen looked in his eyes for a moment and then pulled the chair for herself, "alright lets give a chance to your solutions", she said sitting down and Zeeshan smiled and sat down on the chair opposite to her, on the other side of the table.

"now don't think that I will start crying in front of you again", she said as he sat down and started tapping her finger on the table and zeeshan placed his hand over her moving fingers.

Diffusion is the movement of particles form an area of high concentration to an area of low concentration - and that is what happened ' The warmth from Zeeshan's hand diffused through maheen's skin in her body at rate which was possible the highest ever possible. It felt as if maheen was pulling out warmth from his hand, but again ' the habit of running away she had, she was about to pull her hand away but before she could even try, her hand was brought close to him by Zeeshan, "nice nail color", he said taking a closer view of her fingers

"really?, I was about to change it tonight, I hate this color", she replied smirking and Zeeshan, after looking in her eyes for a second and leaving her breathless, looked back at her nails, "hmm, , but the thing is that it is still on your nails, seems the things you hate stay close to you?", he said and entwined his hard fingers in between her delicate , slender fingers.

Maheen started feeble attempts to free her hand, but in the process even her eyes were entwined with his eyes, and thus finding the easy way out, she looked sideways at the river, with her hand still under his soft yet strong hold.

"I hate water", she said irritation in her tone, whereas her mind was drifting in ecstasy by the way he was holding her hand and the soft rub of his thumb over her palm.

"see, you hate water and you are close to it, constantly staring", he chuckled and maheen looked back at him, "that was not funny!, and by the way why aren't we ordering something to eat/'

"because I don't want the moment to end soon", he tightened his grip over her hand and ignoring the rush of blood, she opened the menu card from her other hand and start skimming through it. She knew that the person sitting opposite to her was constantly staring her, and with their hands entwined, there was no way she could maintain her senses for a long time.

"NO 56", she said and looked back at him and then turned around to call a waiter but one was already heading towards her, 'yes ma'am"

"No 56", she said and looked at Zeeshan, ",make that two", he said and waiter left noting down.

"do you know what is No 56?', maheen asked as the waiter left.

"no I don't, but I wanted to trust you", he smiled.

"you'll regret!!, no one trusts me"

"I will not, trust me", he said again and finding no answer to him, she sought refuge in the river view by her side.

"what is your age", she said after a while, this time having zeeshan in shock for the first time in the evening.

"28", he replied and maheen looked back at him

"how come you are an instructor at the age of 28?'

"because I finished my degree at the age of 21, and then 6 years of job experience is enough for an instructor", he said and maheen again looked back at him

"what should I address you as?, I don't feel comfortable in calling you sir", she asked again looking at the water and felt the grip turning strong once again, "I have a name, you can call me Zeeshan,", he replied calmly, keeping the rub over her hands constant .

"hmmm,", she barely said and there was silence once again. Both of them were staring constantly ' maheen at water and zeeshan at maheen.

"Sir your order", waiter's voice brought them out of the trance and there Zeeshan saw that No 56 was cream soup.

"I love soups", he said placing the bowl in front of her.

"I don't want to eat, let's leave", maheen said smirking and Zeeshan looked at her in complete shock, "okay , lets leave then", he stood up leaving maheen in a shock this time, but she made sure it went un noticed.

Zeeshan hadn't left her hand for even a second, he took out his wallet and placing money over the table, they walked out of the eating area.

"I am certainly not ending my date so soon, so where do u want to go now?", zeeshan asked as they were now walking by the barriers of the river, holding hands.

"hmmm, lets go over the Tower bridge, for a walk", she looked at him and he nodded.

Tower bride was the London's most famous place ' or most appropriately, London was famous for the tower bridge.

Walking by the barriers, they reached the stairs and slowly started climbing them. Reaching the top of the bridge gave a different view of the city. Lights all around, and the water flowing down. It was a sight of adrenaline rush.

"u are not afraid of heights?", zeeshan asked, as she was fearlessly looking at the water flowing down , their hands still entwined.

"I am not afraid of anything, I have seen everything that could go worst"

'hmmm, this means now you are about to see everything that could go best", he looked at her and she smiled, "you are so optimistic, how come?'

"ummm, well, God balances couples, you are pessimistic, so I had to be optimistic", he replied calmly, smiling.

'couple?, and when did we both became a couple?", maheen asked chuckling,

"the moment we saw each other, he said and moved close to her, looking in her eyes, "ouch!, that was chessy",

"I can't help, that was the truth", he said, pinning her to the barrier of the bridge and standing infront of her, with their entwined hands resting in the railing.

"I was right that you are a flirt", she said smiling, totally not bothered that they were dangerously closed.

"you always form wrong opinions", he said move a centimeter more close,

"how do you claim to know so much about me?'

"and I am always right about you!!', he smiled and maheen also did and lowered her eyes, his constant staring had finally succeeded her to blush but it was for a mere second.

The very next moment a water droplet fell on maheen.

'"Oh God, it's raining!:, maheen gasped and tried to move away from his grip but it was stong, "so?', he asked, making sure she doesn't moves

"I hate rains, they are so creepy", she glared and kept her tries, being un successful though,

"rains are beautiful maheen", he left her hand and cupped her cheek with one and gripped her waist with the other.

'but I don't like them, lets go under the shade please", she again tried, although inwardly totally numb over his grip, "no!", he stiffly said and maheen pouted, "pleaseee .. i..

"ssshh", he left her check and placed his finger over her lips, "stop talking", he whispered and maheen felt her heart suddenly pumping insanely and she had no other option but to agree to him.

Raindrops had become more frequent and now drenching every particle coming in their contact.

Zereshan crawled his hand up her waist, sending deep tantalizing sensations through her body and reaching her binder, he scrolled it down letting her thick tresses to flow over the notes of the wind and allowing them to soak the rain drops. Maheen closed her eyes as to absorb this alien feeling and as the wet hair sought places over her hair, she opened her eyes just to find that the expression in his eyes had gained intensity.

'what are u thinking zeehsan?", she couldn't help asking as zeeshan was pushing away wet strands from her face and then he replied pulling her close, "I am thinking about kissing you in this rain".

He said in one breath and maheen felt herself trembling all over.

"kiss??', the world around her came to a halt and made her alien to all the happenings , except for the pair of eyes staring at her.

His eyes were honest as his statement.

"do you have a problem?", he asked , but it was not a question, nothing as hesitancy or the fear of refusal, he asked in manner that he already knew the answer.

The confidence in his eyes made maheen look a little rosier than normal. Closing her eyes she took a deep breath. His closeness had made her hypnotic, she wanted to answer freely, and after closing her eyes, she felt the urge of looking at him again, so she opened them again, 'no, I don't have a problem", she said looking in his eyes, and observed no change of expression on his face - it felt as if he expected the answer.

Increasing the grip, he pulled her more close, and in anticipation of the moment, maheen closed her eyes. Crawling her hand up his torso, she gripped his collar and slowly felt his breath more warm with every passing second and then in a flash of a second - their hearts synced in beats - they pressed their lips together - making the time go still for a moment.

Chap 10 - Pg 40

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW KINZUUU!!!!!!! U WRITE SO BEAUTIFULLY!!!!👏IT WAS SO ROMANTIC!!!!!!😍ZEESHAN IS TOO GOOD TO BE TRUE AND MAHEEN IS A COMPLETE SWEETHEART INSPITE OF ALL HER IRRITATION!!!! INFACT NOW WHN I CM TO THINK OF IT, ALOT LIKE U!!!!😉AWWW... AND THE first date AND OFCOURSE THE FIRST KISSS!!!!!!!☺️BEAUTIFUL UPDATE KINZUUU!!!! LOVE U!!!!!!🤗
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
This is the most romantic update I've ever read from you...
Truly amazing... *still blushing*
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Posted: 14 years ago
WOW!!!!...THIS WAS FANTASTIC...
I am completely loving maheen and zeeshan...
wow!!!...
just brilliant and very romantic...

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