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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#361

Ch 13:

This is d forbidden magic

Loved it

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#362

U ended it??seriously???

But wht an end...amazing
Very well said

Love can neve be forced...n thts wht happened

Do write more

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Supriya

@-SupriyaluvsMN-

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#363

sorry kinzu .. 4 commenting so late...
just read chp 13 n 14...
i felt sooo bad 4 zeeshan...
sumtyms luv n lyf gets soo complicated!
njoy ur vacns !
luv ya!🤗

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christmas

@christmas

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#364

i dont think. i've ever commented on this story (or perhaps i have:\). but i've been reading it from the beginning.

this was some writing...i oddly found myself loving the ending. it was quite befitting. not just to the character that was maheen but also to the ideology that was zeeshaan.

he was her catalyst. she was kind of his last push. i feel like there is so much to say. yet i cant find myself to say much. for it would just be too wordy and repetitive.

loved! reading. hope to read more in future. thanks for sharing!

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priya

@lopli

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#365

I have not commented on the story before but i read it in one go today and it was amazing it touched my heart, though the ending was sad , it almost made me cry, but people say life is not easy...you put every aspect of love in the story i am truly amazed, this story is definitely an inspiration for the people who have fell in love but didn't get it return...totally loved it.

If you right more stories please do pm me..

Thanks

Ria

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chandni

@*Nishi*

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#366

i just started and read your whole story in a few hours 😆 it was sooo amazing. im speechless really. i hate that it ended so sadly for zeeshan though 😭 i cant say i was surprised though but i'll have to admit it was unexpected. i love, love, loooveee your writing style and it seems like you really knew those 3 books you wrote about (have you read them?) well it was such a cute story 😳 i can relate to maheen in a way that im a little hesitant to people showing their love for me also. i cant believe how much attention you've brought to my little section here!! 😃 thanks for bringing your FF friends and hopefully you will continue writing here more!! 😃😃

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Ria Arjun

@ria.arjun

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#367

i read this whole FF in 30 mins... n ended up crying for more than an hour...

awwh this was like... too heart wrenching... .why couldnt she give a chance to her heart to fall in love? why did she think of her parents relationship and compare it with what she had with zeeshan? no not fair on maheen's part.

really sad kinzu... loved the way u wrote it...

cant say more... jus loved it... God bless you... take care...

thank you for letting me know about this story... i wud have missed reading this one ...

love you loads ❤️ 🤗