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Posted: 14 years ago
omg kinzu...
u ended @ such an crucial point!!!
now wt ws forbidden???
cant wait 4 d next update!
continue soon!
luv ya!🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Read the last 5 parts in one go...I ws bz so cudnt catch up and now i've fallen in love with this ff...

Part 9 & 10 ws magical...I ws fully engrossed in those parts...Smiling, blushing, laughing and what not...

I just loved the way zeeshan treat her as a princess...He can calm her down, understand her, give her positivity in everything and top of that he loves her truly, deeply...

This is a brilliant piece kinza...Plz dnt make it a sad story...Cont soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazingg...
do p.m me de rest of d story

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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u so much people!! .. 😳 ..
and as for the forbidden mystery .. i hope u all understand in this part, and if some of u don't then don't worry , i'll make it clear in the coming updates . 😳


Chapter # 12:

Maheen pressed the doorbell nervously, and within a minute, Zeeshan opened the door, "welcome ma'am", he bowed down respectfully and maheen giggled.

She stepped in and hugged him, while Zeeshan closed the door behind him.

This hug was much more intimate than usual, as Zeeshan could feel her nails digging in his skin though his sweater and her lips gently pressing on his neck, "hmmm .. so Miss Malik seems in a romantic mood", he said huskily placing a kiss on her ear and maheen pushed him away, "once a flirt always a flirt"

Glaring she moved inside and Zeeshan followed her chuckling. The home was simple and serene, a very few pieces of furniture and more of mattresses and cushions, elegantly decorated and cozily spacious.

"beautiful home Zeeshan", she praised sincerely and Zeeshan hugged her from back, "thank you so much sweetheart", placing a kiss on her ear he left her before she could push him away.

"okay now kindly be seated, I'll bring green tea for you", he said and left, while maheen sat on one of the purple cushions, as she loved purple.

Zeeshan was back in less than two minutes with two identical mugs, "here", he handed one to Maheen and sat beside her, pulling her close and she ' who was always waiting to pull out warmth from him, cuddled to him.

"its nice", maheen said taking a sip of the tea, "hope u made it urself and no tea bags", she raised her head to glare at him and he chuckled, "no tea bags, promise" , he said plainly and she placed her head back on his shoulder .

"by the way I am again angry", she said standing up and Zeeshan all of a sudden realized she was looking different, she was glowing and moreover she was dressed differently.

"U didn't tell how am I looking?', she raised her eye brows and, Zeeshan , who was still sitting on the cushion, extended his hand and grabbing her hand, he pulled her so she fell on him,

"you look breath-takingly beautiful", he caressed the rosy pink blotch on her cheek and maheen smiled slowly, "liar!!, I had to ask you to praise me", she said, making herself comfortable in his arms,

"why don't u ever believe me maheen?, you are always in a doubt", he said, and this time his tone was serious, something she had not seen in the past two months, and in the past two months, it was the first time maheen had no answer to him ' because he was right.

She looked at him with blank eyes and suddenly Zeeshan realized that he had said something which he shouldn't have.

"and well now do you mind getting off me, mera khana jal jaye ga", he said in his usual voice and maheen stood up quietly and without saying anything further he went in the kitchen, leaving maheen with tornado of emotions.

"What the hell Zeeshan 😡

"okay I am sorry,😭 I didn't mean that way .. I was just ..😭

Yeah you just blurted out what you shouldn't have.. you know how sensitive she is, and now you have also started complaining .. shame on you ..😡 🤢

"oh God that was unintentional 😭.. you know I can't ever hurt her 😭 . she is so dear to me ..❤️

Then learn holding your tongue next time.😡

Okay ..😭

Having this catharsis with his own conscious, he came out with dishes and placed them on the dining table, and looking around that maheen was sitting on the cushion, all cuddled upto herself, staring blankly at a point.

"I am sorry, I didn't mean that way", he whispered and kissed her shoulder.

"you were right, I do complain a lot, every time, at every issue , i

"stop it maheen", he made her face him, and saw huge sparkling tears in her eyes, "please don't embarrass me further, I am genuinely sorry, I swear, please", he kissed her cheek and kept his lips lingering on her skin for a moment, until he felt the stream of tears flowing down he r cheek and then he trailed the path of tear with his lips,

"all I do is just demand and demand, I have never talked to you about you, right?", she said creating a bit distance and looked in his eyes and zeeshan pulled her close and kissed her, "there is nothing about me to talk, and I don't like talking about myself, I love hearing about you", he stroked her cheek lovingly,

"Zeeshan don't say things which are humanely impossible", this time her vpice was stiff, and Zeeshan which was leaving kisses on her neck, immediately raised his head to see those empty eyes.

"everyone needs support, you cannot just give support and demand nothing in return", her tears had dried and so did her voice.

"stop it maheen, and now lets have dinner, nahi tu thanda ho jaye ga , and you will again complain k..

"go kill urself zeeshan!!" 😡

Zeeshan immediately cut his words while maheen looked down with a painful smile playing on her lips, "yeah , nahi tu I will again complain .. that is what I do all the time, right"?, she looked up and Zeeshan cupped her face, "just shut up", he said softly and kissed her, deeply and passionately, while she kissed back in sheer desperation and pain.

They kissed endlessly when in life-threatening need of oxygen Zeeshan pulled back, "and after today, we will NOT discuss this again, I am sorry, very very sorry for being such a jerk", he said in a breathless voice and saw maheen's lips about to say something when he silenced her with another deep kiss.

This time when he pulled back realizing maheen in need to breath ,"and for your kind information, Zeeshan Ali is in love Maheen Malik", he said and she opened her eyes, with disbelief and shock evident, "deeply and hopelessly", he added these adjectives and kissed her again ' and this kiss was different from all the previous ones.

Chap 13 - pg 51

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
kinzuuu!!!!!! i was waiting for this since morning!!!!! :p and yes it was beautiful as ever!!!!! zeeshan and maheen's passionate romance and behind it an hidden effort to understand!!!!! as for the forbidden part, i have more thn one ideas !!! eagerly waiting for upcoming updates!!!! an overall wonderful update kinzu!!!! love u bestie!!! *hugs* oh btw the things we wr discussing yestrday, u gave me some idea on one of thm through this part!!!! ;)
Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update.i hope maheen won't hold herself back and loose zeeshan.i just love him.and maheen she reminds me of a scared kitten.scared to be alone,scared to love,scared to lose.she is not that strong as she potrays herself to be.and please don't end it on sad account.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update.
loved it.
like maheen n zeeshan romance.
i hope, everything ll sort out soon.
maheen is lil scared, i hope ll express herself...n zeeshan ll reciprocate her feelings too.
update soon.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow ... so nice...
beautiful update...! loved the whole part...
but wats forbidden???!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
honestly, i've no idea why its forbidden.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome part...
thanks 4 the pm

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