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Posted: 14 years ago
wonderful updt kinza
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
beautiful kinza...

loved it ...

and ur signature just wow...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow Kinzyu- it was wonderful update hun... too good
loved the convo b/w Zeeshan and Maheen...
it was so nice
fantastic job
keep it up
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Posted: 14 years ago

Beautiful update Mehak. I love the description of love which Zeeshan gave to her. It was beautiful. Very well written. :)

Do update soon :D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Incredible update honey.

I am at loss of words, because I really have nothing to counter what Zeeshan said. i don't quite know what this whole ordeal about love is, but probably when people say these things, it must be true. Let me tell you one thing though, I loved it. This chapter.

Because of those intense interactions, Maheen forgetting to be concealing, and revealing her problem in one go. It takes courage and probably it only happens when you somehow have a instinct that the person who you're sharing it with, will not harm you in any way. I really loved their conversation.

Keep updating, honey. :)

Love,
Akki :)
Edited by You-Know-Who - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
amazing update...i love the part most how easily nupur .i mean maheen actually told her problem to zeeshan without even knowing .& he got to understand it so easily ...love their covo abt love!!!!!

update soon magician!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
can someone really be a fountain of love?
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Posted: 14 years ago
hello sweets!! ..
Thank u all for making my birthday so special .. i truly feel blessed .. thank u .. dil se ..
so in return of your affection ,.. i decided to give u all a small treat .. i updated !! .. 😳 .. hope u all enjoy! ..
and the use of smileys is inspired from nidzzy! .. 😳

Chapter # 8:

"You don't need to find love, it'll find you", he pressed her hands and another tear trickled down her cheek, "when?",- another question, this time her voice was even weaker and hope vanishing.

"when you will allow him to", he further pressed her hand, "when do you want your love to enter your life?", he asked, making sure the eye ' contact was broken for even a second,

"this very minute, I am tired of staying alone", and finally she let out her deepest desire, something which she hadn't even shared with herself and Zeeshan felt like a huge glacier breaking down and water flowing after it.

"alright, I am sure he has heard, he will come soon", he smiled slowly leaving her hand and maheen was shaken out of the trance.

Totally shocked over her honest confessions, she lowered her eyes, wiping off traces of tears.

"it's okay maheen, it's alright to feel weak", he said observing to the extent she was shocked, while she looked up at him again and tried to smile, "it's not alright to feel weak, you fall apart"

"not when you have someone to always hold you", he replied crossing his arms around his chest while she gave a painful smile to him, "yes, but I don't have that person to hold me, so I can't afford to fall weak", she replied sternly and got up from the seat, "I am sorry for all this .. i..

"I told you it's alright" , he said, standing up.

"and I said that it is NOT alright, so I am sorry", all the sternness was returning, this time with more intensity and zeeshan decided to let it go,

"it's alright", he said softly and maheen huffed, "what the hell!!, I said ..

"I said alright in response to your sorry", , he cut her immediately and smiled, leading her lips to curve a bit as well, "very funny", she grabbed her books and placed them in her bag again.

"what next do I have to do", she asked adjusting her bag on her shoulder.

"ummm .. what about we discuss all this outside this office, it's beautiful weather today, dinner?", he asked sweetly and maheen's mouth was left open, "dinner!??", her voice was shocked.

"umm .. yes dinner, is there a problem?"

"ofcourse there is!, why would I go on a dinner with you?", she was still shocked , with eeys wide opened.

"kyun?, I mean I eat halal food, you can.."

"oh stop it!, how dare you even asked me?, , she glared and zeeshan suppressed his smile, " I love forbidden things",

"you shouldn't!", she passed him an angry glare and turned to move out of the cabin.

"8. Pm at the River Thames, "I'l be waiting", he made sure she heard these words before leaving and she did.

As she left, zeeshan smiled and went to the window of his cabin. He saw her moving quickly moving through the gardens. She was shocked and stunned at his dinner offer.

"Her anger is the most adorable thing in this world,", he smiled and came back to his seat.

This was a spontaneous offer , he thought and

by the way why did I asked for dinner?, 😲.. hmm . maybe because I love moonlight .😍. yes that is the reason and ..

WAIT!! .😳. if you love moonlight then what the hell is maheen's company going to do in that?"🤓

"nothing .😛. just .. umm ..'

Yeah you were flirting ..😉

"no I was not 😳, I just want her to talk and break that belief that she is alone.😊.i want to be friends..😊

"ohhh . . how sweeet 😳.. friends ? .😳. realllyyy?😳 😡

"ofcourse; .. she is my student .. main line tu nahi kar sakta na us pe..!!",😡

"yeah .. talking as if she is in Montessori and you are a PHD professor!!🤓

"OKAY!!,😡 I accept we both are young,😃 but still dude, she is my student!!😡

"okay then address her as "beta " from now onwards!😃🤣

"shut up!, 😡 why should i?,😵 she doesn't even addresses me as SIR?'😎

"that is it!, this is where you a re caught!, why didn't u ask her to converse properly with you .. you hypocrite!!😉

"I am not a hypocrite and you better mind you own business !!😡

"your business is my business dude..😎

'shut uppp!!'🤢

"you shut upp 😡and go get ready for your date .. you know she'll come .. 😳 🤗

"date! .😲. WHAT THE HELL!!😡

"don't u dare act innocent .. bcz u are not at all innocent 😉.. I know you well!!, wear that black and sweater of yours'👍🏼

"SHUT UPPP!!"😡

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If zeeshan was fighting with his conscious then maheen was siting confused in the center of her bed.

"how could he ask me for dinner like that!,, I mean no one else has down this before", she was tapping her fingers uselessly and huffing.

"this is not done, I cried in front of him and he is now taking advantage!, damn it maheen!, you are such a fool!":, he closed her eyes and tried to calm her raging nerves.

"but I'll not let him have his way so easily, I'll go and make him clear that he can't succeed!", she took a deep breath and decided, "urghhh !, this sucks!", she lied down and closed her eyes.

It was a beautiful night in London. The moonlight was on it's full shine and softly illuminating every single thing on the planet. The river water was sparkling under the moon and the whole aura was enlightened by a strange mystic feel.

Zeesham arrived sharp at 8, dressed in a black jeans and black sweater, with the white collar and sleeves making him look like simple yet irresistible.

He stood by the river barrier for some moments, and then absorbing every soothing vibe form there, he went to the restraunt, "maheen is punctual", he thought.

Choosing a nice table for two, on the side where they could properly view the river, he started waiting for her.

It was really strange ' Zeehsan was never like this 'NEVER!. Waiting for someone who was not at all interested in coming . DAMN! .. something is changing ' and it is changing at an alarming rate. Zeeshan Ali was losing himself.

"tumhain dil lagi bhol jani pare gi .. muhabat ki rahon main a kar tu dekho

"tadapne pe merey ne phir tum haso gey .. kabhi dil kisi se laga kar tu dekho"

Chap 9 - Pg 36

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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*edited*
haye! Haye! kinzu, i don't have space left for any more crushes... there's always so many i can have and you keep building up these characters who leave me sighing! Zeeshan!!! *siiiggghhhss*
I loved his dialogues with himself! he asked her out on a date and didn't even realize it... could he get more adorable??
and Maheen... amazing girl! pressed down with harshness of life and trying to portray a stronger self so that people can't hurt her if they don't know her weaknesses! I can totally relate to her!
A great update!!!
HAPPY BIRTHDAY TO YOU!
Edited by -Bushra- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
its strange how people find such unusual things as anger in this case, adorable. and talking about strange things people do in love, you cant find a stranger thing than love itself ever.no explanation, no reasoning, nothing- its just strange.

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