Parth Vibha - Creative Story Part XV **complete**

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Who all can't wait for this part??
Spoiler - No Vibharth dance... Or maybe... Dream sequence!!


So as Parth keeps dreaming of her beauty reflecting in a timeless ethereal white saree, and the song plays in his mind, he sees himself dancing away with her, effortlessly and magically. His romantic sequence is prematurely halted by an impatient Utkarsh who asks him to not waste time and get ready as fast as he can as everyone else is waiting to start the couples dance. Parth looks at himself in the mirror with a stern face, as he is clearly not happy for his short dream to end, but then smiles as he thinks about the evening to come.

The final speeches, announcements, felicitations are on their way as Anwesha does the honours. And it is finally the time for the group dance - the much awaited couples dance. Everyone puts their hands together to welcome all the students who play the song, appropriately chosen for their time in Warrior High. The boys and the girls start coming onto the stage one by one, from opposite directions and join in the centre to form couples and take their positions.

Song plays in background...

Aasmaan ke paar shaayad aur koyee aasmaan hoga
Baadalo ke parbato par koyee baarish kaa makaan hoga
Mai hawa ke paro pe kaha ja raha hu kaha
Kabhee udata huwa, kabhee mudata huwa
Meraa raasta chala o ho ho ho

Mai hawa ke paro pe kaha ja raha hu kaha
Mere paanv ke tale kee yeh jamin chal rahee hai
Kahee dhup thandee thandee, kahee chhaanv jal rahee hai
Iss jamin kaa aur koyee aasmaan hoga, hoga aasmaan, ho aasmaan hoga
Mai hawa ke paro pe kaha ja raha hu kaha

And as the song comes to an end, there is a huge round of applause by everyone, and Vibha smiles as she looks at Parth. This time around, she is not jealous at all, her emotional heart and her newly found strong-willed mind has an assertive belief that he is only hers. And no matter how close he is to someone else or how far he is from her, his heart will always only beat for her, and hers for his.

But before the students can go and indulge in the annual day delicacies, Anwesha makes an announcement that there is a one final surprise. A performance by a very special ex-student of Warrior High, who is now an assistant teacher in the school. She praises Vibha for her young age and tremendous work as a teacher, she says that Vibha has managed to get support of students in such a short time and is the most popular, most loved, equally by students and teachers in the school. Parth is surprised that she didn't tell him, but he joins along in clapping to welcome Vibha on the stage, who dances gracefully to a classical song.

And as Parth his completely mesmerised by her breathtaking dance performance, he starts dreaming yet again. This time he holds her in front of everyone, on the same stage, with all bright lights on them, today they have no fear, no regard, no concern for anyone watching them and passing any judgement, they are just lost in one another and expressing their love, dancing with the sonorous song.

Song plays in background...

Surkh wala, sauz wala, Faiz wala love
Hota hai jo love se jyada waise wala love
Ishq wala love

Hua jo dard bhi toh humko aaj kuch zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Ye kya hua hai kya khabar yehi pata hai zyada hua
Ishq wala love
Agar ye usko bhi hua hai phir bhi mujhko zyada hua
Ishq wala love


And he reminisces all the special moments he had spent with her in the past...

Meri neend jaise pehli baar tooti hai
Aankhein mal ke dekhi hai maine subah
Hui dhoop zyada leke teri roshni din chadha
Ishq wala love

Jhanke badalon ki jaali ke peechhe se
Kare chandani ye mujhko ittala
Leke noor sara chand mera yahin pe hai chhupa chhupa hua
Ishq wala love


And as the real song finishes, a visibly out-of-breath Vibha grabs the microphone to thank everyone for the applaud and cheers and says there is one more surprise hidden in her act. She welcomes another ex-student of this school. Everyone looks anxiously, and as he gets on the stage, all the girls cheer and the boys keep clapping on. Parth is shocked - its Manik! Manik walks across the stage towards Vibha and hugs her and then grabs the microphone himself. Parth feels it was one thing Vibha not telling her about her surprise dance, but it was totally not cool to hide from him that Manik was going to be there tonight. No matter how many times they'd cleared the air about him, he couldn't help but get jealous of him each time. He had after all been so close to Vibha all these years, and they shared a special bond. He has also become so popular with the young kids, girls and boys alike due to his singing talent and his charm. Compared to Manik, Parth feels he has absolutely nothing to offer to Vibha. But isn't his love for her enough?

Manik starts talking about his journey in the school with Vibha and how times have now changed, how they'd been apart but still they form a special bond till date, and that he is lucky to have her in his life. This puts more doubts in Parth's mind, why is Manik saying all this? Why now? Why on the night he wants to make special for Vibha? Manik goes on to say if the students can do a couple's dance, then so can the ex-students. So he asks for music and he sings one of his tunes, holding Vibha and dancing along with her...

Khwaabon bina, nigahen meri jee rahin thi
Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi
Khamosh tha honthon pe baatein nahin thi
Koi nahin tha yeh akeli meri thi zindagi

Tum mile toh mil gaya yeh jahaan
Tum mile toh har pal hai naya
Tum mile toh sabse hai... faasla
Tum mile toh jaadu chaa gaya
Tum mile toh jeena aa gaya
Tum mile toh maine paaya... hai khuda


And as Manik hugs Vibha once again, they both thank the entire audience for a wonderful evening and ask everyone to enjoy the dinner. And as the girls crowd around Manik for autographs and the guys want to know about his songs and life, Vibha's eyes start searching for Parth. She notices him standing in a corner, all by himself, looking rather glum. She walks up to him and places her hand on his shoulder.


Vibha - Parth, tum yaha akele?
Parth - (looks up at her, looking rather displeased) Aap, yaha?
Vibha - Kya hua?
Parth - Mujhe laga aap Manik ke saath...
Vibha - Parth, phir se Manik!
Parth - Apne bataya tak nahi ki woh aur aap...
Vibha - Parth, it was a surprise!
Parth - Mujhe aise surprises nahi pasand hai. Aur aap dono... itna close dance... Mujhe bilkul achcha nahi laga.
Vibha - Parth, oh ho, dekho meri taraf... Woh mera dost hai!
Parth - Dost hai toh...
Vibha - Parth, bahut ho gaya, tum mujh par bharosa nahi karte? Huh?
Parth - Aap pe karta hu, par us pe nahi! (his eyes get angry and he closes his fist and imagines landing a big punch on his face)
Vibha - Theek hai, toh chalo.
Parth - Maam... (he thinks he cannot let Parth win and take his Vibha away from him)
Vibha - Ha Parth...
Parth - Aap mujhe terrace par milengi?
Vibha - Parth, now what is all this?
Parth - After 10 minutes, please?
Vibha - Theek hai!

She smiles and then goes away. Instead of following her, he goes upstairs and waits for her to come. It is fifteen minutes since Parth told her to meet him at the terrace. Vibha is talking to Urmila and then excuses herself to head upstairs. She steps into the terrace and finds it lit up by lots of small candles, all around. The sparkles from the glowing candles and the surreal atmosphere is something she'd never imagined. How could something so simple be so enchanting? So romantic? So divine? Was this really magical as Parth had done this for her? She looks around anxiously for Parth...

Vibha - Parth... Parth... Arey, Parth kaha chala gaya...

Parth smiles behind her and slowly walks towards her and puts his hands on her eyes. She holds his hands on her eyes...

Vibha - Parth?
Parth - Sh...

Vibha listens to him and walks along with him.

He makes her sit right in the middle of all the candles, and as they are surrounded by the emanating, glowing lights, he gently opens her eyes and she looks around.

Vibha - Parth, this is beautiful... par yeh sab...
Parth - Yeh apke liye...

He gives a rather small looking packet, that contains something long and thin. She takes it, wondering what it could be.

Vibha - Yeh kya hai?
Parth - Aap khol kar dekh lo...
Vibha - Abhi...
Parth - Ha...

She opens it to find a bhutta inside and her cannot contain her excitement!

Vibha - Bhutta! Wow! My favourite!
Parth - Main jaanta hu

Vibha - Lekin Parth...
Parth - Mujhe pata hai aap kitne questions puchengi... jaise yeh bhutta main kaha se laya?
Vibha - Nahi, main kuch aur puch rahi thi, lekin ha, yeh bhutta, kaha se?
Parth - Woh Utkarsh ne canteen wale uncle se dosti kar li hai, toh woh hi mere liye...
Vibha - Achcha, aur yeh sab...
Parth - Yeh candles?
Vihba - Ha...
Parth - Yeh sab peon se... Ab yeh bhi puch lo ki yeh terrace kisne banayi, yeh hava kaha se aayi...
Vibha - Nahi, woh sab mujhe pata hai! Chalo bhutta khaye?
Parth - Aap khaiye...
Vihba - Nahi, hum share karenge...

She gives the bhutta to him to take the first bite, and he stares at her while he remembers the time when she told them about how bhutta was her favourite... He remembered her words so clearly... "Bhutta, mera favourite... Aur main kisi ke saath share nahi kar sakti"... And now here she was, she wanted to share the only bhutta he was able to get for her!

Parth - Share? Bhutta?
Vibha - Ha, kyun, tumhe nahi pasand hai?
Parth - Nahi, woh baat nahi hai...
Vibha - Toh phir?
Parth - Woh, aap hi ne kaha tha ki aap share nahi kar sakti...
Vibha - (she remembers how she used to be when it came to chocolates and bhutta, wanting it all for herself, she herself didn't know how times would change and she would be ready to share those very same things with someone else... and in fact she was asking him to take the first bite) Ha Parth! Main tumhare saath har khushi share karna chahti hu, aur especially woh, joh tum meri zindagi main lekar aaye ho... Aur yeh khushi, sirf aur sirf tumhari wajah se mere chehre par hai.
Parth - Par main chahta hu ki aap hamesha khush raho, aur aap hi is bhutte ko enjoy karo...
Vibha - Nahi, hum dono khayenge... Idhar aao...

Parth hesitates but she pulls him closer to her and holds the bhutta between their faces. She then leans in to take a bite and signals him to eat as well. He smiles and slowly leans forward and they both take a bite together. And as he chews his first bite, he looks at her lovingly, while she smiles down looking at the bhutta. And as they finish eating it, Vibha thanks him again for giving her such a wonderful surprise and such a beautiful moment to cherish forever.

Vibha - Parth, are you sure is sab ke piche koi special reason nahi hai? Shayad tumhara birthday?
Parth - No, mera birthday April main hain...
Vibha - Toh phir... chale?
Parth - Haa...

As Parth realizes he's not even said what he planned to tell her, he stops and looks down. Vibha notices him standing in the middle of all the candles and walks back towards him.

Vibha - Parth, kya hua?
Parth - Main aapse kuch kehna chahta hu...
Vibha - Main kabse to tumhe puche ja rahi thi... Aur ab tum... Achcha bolo...

He looks into her eyes and gently lifts both her hands and holds them close to his face. She remembers how she'd dreamt of this moment the night he got drunk. He gently kisses her hands and then looks at her, leaning in closer. She closes her eyes in anticipation of a kiss, but he whispers in her ear...

Parth - Vibha...

Wait, she stops, to listen carefully if the 'Vibha' is followed by a 'Maam', but it isn't! Her heart begins to beat rapidly. He holds her face and says...

Parth - Vibha... I love you...

She doesn't believe it! Did he just tell her that he loves her? She stares at him as the past memories come gushing back to her...

Song plays in background...

O aisa lagta hai, jo na hua hone ko hai
Aisa lagta hai abb dil mera khone ko hai
Varna dil kyun dhadakta, saansein kyun rukati
Neende meri kyun udd jaati
O aisa lagta hai, jo na hua hone ko hai

Koi chehraa nigaho pe chhane laga, koi abb roj khabo mein aane laga
Aayi rut jo nayee jage armaan kayi, mausam koi ghajal jaise gaane laga
O o o aisa lagta hai, jaise nasha hone ko hai
Ho o o aisa lagta hai, hosh mera khone ko hai
Varna dil kyun dhadakta, saansein kyun rukati
Neende meri kyun udd jaati
O o o aisa lagta hai, jo na hua hone ko hai

She stands there in disbelief and he looks at her not knowing what to do... He wants to feel anger at her not replying back, but staring at her beautiful face, he just can't get annoyed. He says something that he himself hadn't imagined he would say, even though he knew he always wanted to be with her and keep her close to him.

Parth - Main janta hu ki yeh shayad ajeeb lag raha hoga, but it is truly how I feel about you. And now, it doesn't matter if you love me or not, I just want you to be happy. Ha, main yeh zaroor chahta hu ki tumhari khushi bhi mere saath hi ho, lekin agar nahi bhi hai...

She starts to soak in his words, each and every one that he speaks and she hurriedly puts her hand on his mouth. She leans in closer and stares deeply into his sad eyes...

Vibha - Parth, I love you too!

And now its Parth's turn to be stunned! Did she really just say that? Or did he imagine it! And as Vibha looks at him, she realizes he's in the same daze as she was a few moments ago. She hugs him and repeats.

Vibha - Ha Parth, I love you!

He hears her again and the warm embrace makes him spread his arms around her and hug her tightly.

Song plays in background...

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

They both hug each other like they've never hugged before, warm, passionate, intense and loving. A big radiant smile reflects on both their faces and they keep holding one another in the magical surroundings, the terrace floor gleaming with the glowing candles and the sky glittering with the sparkly stars!

Edited by rosabelle - 10 years ago

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serialenigma thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Meee waiting..
N dat pic is
ankusanu thumbnail
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PPlss complete it..
Dis ws cute bt dat manik 😡
Har jagah aa jata h ..
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

PPlss complete it..
Dis ws cute bt dat manik 😡
Har jagah aa jata h ..


yeah, you guys gave me the idea of parth hitting him!! so i did it!!
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Haga rose
Parth hitting manik...
Go fr it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rose its superb..
Manik n jealousy track was superb..
N confrontation.. Simply WOW..!!
Confrontation part was beautifully portrayed..
I really enjoyed reading this part..
Tats my fav part now (fromm ur ff)..!!
N u evn bugt tat bhuuta lol tat was superb !
N now... Next part plz. ;)
Again superb..
Tc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ankusanu

Haga rose
Parth hitting manik...
Go fr it


sapne main ek chota sa punch!
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Cho finally here cums confession..
Wow...so romantic setup by parth
N bhutta tooo ..grt ...
Thank u rose fr updation
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Waooow what an awesome fairy tale..kash Vibharth got such romantic and intense scene in s2
Brilliant job Rose👍🏼❤️

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