Eagle ..Goal.. Finish Line - Completed page 16 added a missing para! - Page 6

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Kavi dear please no sorry as reading and hitting the like button makes me smile

a comment ofcourse make me know the effect of the story but not a compulsion at all.

Awww 🤗you come to check my updates.

yes missing Ragkor too much much... hope my writing brings a little of solace though nothing like seeing MeeJay on the screen but hope i am able to bring them in front of your eyes.

Jealous and possessive Raaghav ha ha he is already J as the little one is flirting his wify and kissing her eyes 😆😆😆..

Budda is way too much in love with Maidam...

And again Kavi no sorry please take your time

Edited to add:

Jealousy Rag-Kor ---- I will try to blend in maybe not a serious one (I will not as during the Vivaan time itself was so irritated with the makers) but a little cute one as I too want to see that 😉

Originally posted by: 77nikita

Sumi another awesome part 👏👏

Rover entry...zhakaas...full raghav style... loved it...

Sign board idea also fanta👏

Good finish to the races... exciting.

What all is done for publicity for money, staking goodness, innocent children's life...

Point to ponder!!!

Raghav babu and his demo👏 I am just loving it...😳

Rati intrigue is good...precap also interesting

As usual waiting for the next part 😳

Originally posted by: sumsukor

Kavi dear please no sorry as reading and hitting the like button makes me smile

a comment ofcourse make me know the effect of the story but not a compulsion at all.

Awww 🤗you come to check my updates.

yes missing Ragkor too much much... hope my writing brings a little of solace though nothing like seeing MeeJay on the screen but hope i am able to bring them in front of your eyes.

Jealous and possessive Raaghav ha ha he is already J as the little one is flirting his wify and kissing her eyes 😆😆😆..

Budda is way too much in love with Maidam...

And again Kavi no sorry please take your time

Edited to add:

Jealousy Rag-Kor ---- I will try to blend in maybe not a serious one (I will not as during the Vivaan time itself was so irritated with the makers) but a little cute one as I too want to see that 😉

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

Again a Nice update. I loved it all,

right from Aa asking Raghav to accompany, seeing Aa's love for Ar and chakor analysing all well before the events and notifies Raghav on time and our hero making an heroic entry with his anger , dont you dare to harm my cubs abd sorting out all,

the kids being kids part, understanding their wrong, one apologising and other forgiving. good to see.

Aa kissing chakor and telling Raghav, you cant do anything about it..lol

Then our Raghav babu, wanting his birdie, wanting to teach demo sorry. but his madam says no, gave a slight kiss and both getting into slumber being in each other's warmth. so cute and lovable they are.

i loved all...

then this statement..

"Worried about the ugliness. What all is done for publicity for money, staking goodness, innocent children's life..."

truly worrisome scenario but a true fact ..well said.

Rati part explained well and again evil waiting to spoil it for their own good

and the last intriguing precap, makes me eager to read next.

I hv some wild guesses with respect to Rati track..:)

lets see how it unfolds

thanks dear for the update.

Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting update🤗

It has everything romance, action, drama & mystery👏

Raghav was the hero of this part & Chakor was eagle😊

Ar won the race & Rohan-Ar rivalry ended😊

Rati's story is interesting

Waiting for next