The Greener Pasture....My first & final Story on my Sukor , my ado - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: katheriene

So Suraj is still unaware


yes Raaghav doesnot know that he has lost his memory too...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear🤗

its hard to detach present emotions and read story on new note dear.

so this line
She is small but she fits into me so well!!!

made me so emotional again.. those hugs, where she perfectly fits onto him😭 , sorry for spamming dear.

coming to story.
well written, exactly the way i wanted to see Sukor's story.. she devastated, sad to see her like tht..and he seeing her in his thoughts but not clearly seeing her.. too good

akash and mamaji clan made appearance here too..ok..lol

anjor, let her be in that state only..with current emotions,i dont want her to getup at all😡😆



Uma I am a very positive person but I found my sensitive side only with Sukor and Suraj and the way they butchered my adories and my dude (be it SR or Raaghav) I am just not able to comprehend it.

SO like Chakor says If we donot accept it, we need to fight. So fighting my own way to bring solace.

Akaash mamaji clan little change only one son and daughter and son in law...and for a purpose...

Hope I am able to bring the need soon...

When I wrote about Anjor I was thinking of you...honestly.

no spamminig, I love it.

thanks for the hug I need it, as i am not emoting but keeping it within myself.






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Posted: 6 years ago
#33
Hola Sumi!
After ages reading a story!
And it's yours!
I didn't even notice until I finished the first part!

As always, you created your magic!
So happy to see you writing stories!


Coming to it!
Just amazing, how it's flowing with ease and feelings all over.


Keep on rocking girl!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: maithu_

Hola Sumi!

After ages reading a story!
And it's yours!
I didn't even notice until I finished the first part!

As always, you created your magic!
So happy to see you writing stories!


Coming to it!
Just amazing, how it's flowing with ease and feelings all over.


Keep on rocking girl!


Hey Maithuuu big big huggy 🤗

I was thinking of you when I wanted to pen,

I remembered your words! Sumi when you wanted to see Sukor in your way you write your own story.

did few OS but story is not my cuppa but my maiden attempt (bit scared though hush hush)

loved your words, a word from my Author.

😊

I am so so upset with the show yaar unable to move on but now everything is over but I want to have a happy ending for my adories and specially my dude😉

say my big hug and hi to my Rabbiii
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Posted: 6 years ago
#35

Chapter 4

The Crossroad... The new journey...

Her phone rang , it was Inspector Kaushal Yadav.

Chakorji please come to Lucknow, I have to show you something...

Amma and Raaghav boarded the bus to Lucknow

Chakor came with Rajoo to meet the Inspector...

He took them to the town hospital...

She got shocked ... there were 3 girls who were comatised just like Anjor

Chakorji, it's the same harmone injection that has been given to these kids..

She was shocked who is that still at large even after RVB was killed???

She quickly told Kaushal to get the antidote which Anjor is being given and to send to the lab to find the formulae and administer the same.

He asked Chakor to be careful.

Rajoo and she were returning back, Teju called telling Anjor is much better but she is asking about Suraj!

Teju sounded tensed too!

Chakor was perplexed not knowing what to do next!!!

She has to return back to AZ along with Rajoo, pale, shattered, with wet eyes...Daak baba what should I do? It was getting dark...


Raaghav was happily talking to his Amma.

They were walking down and he saw a marriage procession going on...

She took him to a small house inside a narrow street...

The dwellers were surprised to see them but did not talk anything, and she was happily yelling out My son is back. They were indeed happy for the old lady as she was smiling and talking which she was otherwise not and they all loved her due to her affectionate nature. They also called out arey Raaghav kaise hai Bey!!! Kahaan thi itni din?? She chided them smiling, he was not well, but now strong as bajrangbali!!

Raaghav smiled back... he was enyoing himself at all the plain love.. he just went around to the bazaar where the procession was going on.

It was so lively that the new friends called him Raaghav thum tho acha se nachthey ho na nacho!!! He went on danced himself carefree... with the latest number... untill...

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Chakor was coming in the car... it stopped as there was the procession going on, all the sparkles and crackers were burst, with smoke around.

The driver stopped and said they cannot go further as its too crowded and may take time...

She got down from the car going towards the crowd...

It was smoky ... she couldnot see, but saw somebody dancing, with all happiness... swirling around...coming towards her...forgetting himself... she could see... she saw and her head started swirling...

Suuurrraaajjj!!! She was about to fall but lo he caught her in his arms...

He shuddered... She is small... But came off and called

Maidam!! Arey Oh Maidam,, helooo

Rajjooo came running shocked, frozen, could not open her mouth but her eyes were wide open, as though it was going to pop out!

He placed her down told Rajjoo to take care and went his way.

Chakor woke up, daced, how can that be possible!!! Suraj??? Rajjo was broken from her daze.. didi whats this????

Chakor looked around ran around asked around and found he was the street smart, rusty Raaghav... She felt a small shoot spring in her!!!

She enquired about him at the marketplace...

Rusty Raaghav, a carefree fellow who lives with his amma, does petty thefts, drinks and is very naughty.

Didi no, please don't, I know what you are thinking but please no said Rajoo.

Rajjoo I have to search him and she found him in a place she does not want him to find... at the bar, merrily drinking and having his way...But she is small... Shook his head.

She stopped him... he asked her... why are you enquiring about me, amma said dharoka is following me... are you from the special CID squad...

You are pale, eyes are like the riverl, why are you here in the midnight when the moon is shining? What do you want?

I want you to act?? What??? He asked. Yes act as father for my 8 year old daughter...You look like my husband...

Whatt??? She showed Her soul's photos, those memories that she has loads within her but only the few photos she could show him...

He was taken aback... shocked... father for a 8 year old daughter...your husband? How can I look like him?? Suraj?? Well amma did say there are 7 people like us!! So is it true... Should ask amma again... oh god hope someone like me doesnot do some theft and this dharoka catches me again!!!

She lived again, her journey from hate to love and divine love where her soul left her to save their daughter!!!

He listened carefully, calmly came down and asked her how much will you pay to act?

Rajjoo was shocked how can you be inhuman... She was hysteric

He said he is very piractical and he wants to settle in life so it's a mutual help.

He was very honest.. said I will help you but once the sunsets I need to have my wine... and for now I will tell my amma and come with you...but for 30 days..

He wants to drink!!! He looks like Suraj but... He too drinks... (she shoved her thought as the blast blurred her mind)

Rajjoo was against but Chakor told there is no other way to save her daughter and if she had met him it's the wish of god!

He came back with a small bag, he said he is ready to travel with her in the journey!!!

She saw the wound in his wrist... you got hurt? Yes I fell down the Va...

The cab driver called her and told that the road is clear to go

They met at the crossroad to start a new journey!!!

But why am I going with her!!! Why am I doing this??

The TWO EYES were behind them following...

Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#36
Beautiful update 👏
So here Chakor is aware that there is someone who is injecting harmone injection after the death of RVB 👏
The people in Amma's locality are just following what Amma told
Loved Suraj's antics as Raghav
Sukor meeting was same as in the show 😊
Akash is following them
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update 👏
So here Chakor is aware that there is someone who is injecting harmone injection after the death of RVB 👏
The people in Amma's locality are just following what Amma told
Loved Suraj's antics as Raghav
Sukor meeting was same as in the show 😊
Akash is following them
Waiting for next


Sonali deary

thanks so much

thats so so fast!!!

I love the way you enumerate...

@ red yes didnot want it too dramatic... hope you like it..

@ blue yes for a reason...

for sure I am not going to go with Molesting etc never.

hope its is going good





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Posted: 6 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: sumsukor


Sonali deary

thanks so much

thats so so fast!!!

I love the way you enumerate...

@ red yes didnot want it too dramatic... hope you like it..

@ blue yes for a reason...

for sure I am not going to go with Molesting etc never.

hope its is going good






It is going good
Actually my marriage is on 21st feb so most of the time on mobile as there is nothing to do ,all the things are managed by my parents. I just do the work which only I can do
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear..
superb update.
I am glad KY has a role to do here too😃

Good that chakor is aware of 3rd person.

Sukor-Raghav meet up similar to the epi but with the nuances of suraj added, so loved it more.

Thanks for the solace, waiting to read next. eagerly awaiting.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

It is going good
Actually my marriage is on 21st feb so most of the time on mobile as there is nothing to do ,all the things are managed by my parents. I just do the work which only I can do


Oh Wow Sonali

All prayers for a very very happy wedding!!!

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