The Greener Pasture....My first & final Story on my Sukor , my ado

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Posted: 6 years ago
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The Greener Pasture

Maidam ... please aap aisa math dekho bey!!

Kyon Gyaan Dev, dar gaya kya?? They both had their hands in their waist laughing!!!

Hum kiss baap se bi nahi darthey... Suraj Raaghvanshi Hai mum...

Acchaaa!!!!

Na na beta naa please math !!

Walked in Inspector Kaushal Yaadav...


Shall we write our own closure of our Super performers!!!!

Thanks all for those likes and comments..


Just to ease. I am not a pro in story writing but...I wanted my adories, my sukor to be happy forever...They are destined to be happy...


Index

Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 3

Chapter 3 - Page 4

Chapter 4 - Page 5

Chapter 5 - Page 7

Chapter 6 - Page 8

Chapter 7 & 8 - Page 9

The final chapter - Page 10

Epilogue and Bonus😉 - Page 11.




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Posted: 6 years ago
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Continue it
Looks interesting
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Continue it

Looks interesting


Thanks Sonali

will wait for few more response too😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Surely do it dear, I will erase what they show, Visualise MeeJay in this and will have our own closure with gladness and happiness
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Do it do it do it😳
As if we need to tell😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yes, please Sumi, it's much needed.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Please carry on, dear!

I needed it much as today precap break my heart

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks girls...

Am not good at story writing only done few one shots.

Let me try.

Chapter I

The Sunset November 19, 2019

She was shocked, numbed, ran like mad, she ran searching for her soul.

Suuuraaajjj... where are you, aajaa hamara saamne, I will not talk to you, tears flowing her eyes.

It was chaos everywhere, Bhawri told that may be Suraj can be found in the valley nearby the blast area...

She ran, ran like mad shouting her heart out!!! Suuuraj...

She smiled, his torn damaged wallet was there, she got a bit of confidence... She ran and found his one shoe his favourite brown shoe and his broken mobile phone.

She was numbed when she was hit with the harsh truth that her Suraj has set, not to be seen, eclipsed...

She held his belongings to her heart she froze.. She couldnot breathe...

Her phone rang!!! Teju shared the news that Anjor was terribly ill...

She froze again...

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The Mirage

November 23, 2019

Yeh hamara beta!!! Cried her heart out... the old lady was crying herself holding him to her...

It was dense forest, at the foothill was a small village with little huts all over...

He was lying with cuts, burns all over...his hands covered with blood

He was placed on the altar which had the herbs and the small hamlet was around him...

The old man who was in his 70 plus was applying herbal ointment and was trying to sew the wounds with a needle heated in the candle with was lighted.

The lady cried inconsolable...

One of the onlooker who was new to that place asked, poor lady her son is wounded so badly, sad

The village man said no its not her son, she lost her son in the valley, he fell there and died, but she is shocked ever since and has forgotten her son is dead but anyone who is found in the valley hurt, she calls him her son, but as her curse whoever is brought here dies!!!!

The elderly man closed his eyes, felt his pulse, spoke he cannot survive...

The lady was still crying, Raaghav mera beta, aankhen kolo...


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To continue soon!!!

There will be no twists or turns as we are having enough, i am trying to do it a logical way... Hope this is fine.


Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting start 👏
Loved the route you have taken
So here Raghav is Suraj only
Waiting for next
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: katheriene

Interesting start 👏
Loved the route you have taken
So here Raghav is Suraj only
Waiting for next


Thanks Sonali

yes trying to make it logical though...

will try to update alternate days...

will not delay.

😊


and thanks for liking and not feeling bored

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