The Greener Pasture....My first & final Story on my Sukor , my ado - Page 6

Originally posted by: meshmesh

Great going Sumi

Loved their first meeting.

Eager to see how the story will progress.

Chapter 5

The spark...

They met at the crossroad to start a new journey!!!

But why am I going with her!!! Why am I doing this??

The two eyes were following them

Thank you Raaghav for coming with me...

Rajjoo was not happy, she was all mouth, you have no heart? You are asking money for saving a child, how can you be like that.

Raaghav was so irritated he said why are you going on kain kain kain like a non stop loudspeaker. I am doing for Maidam and Maidam is giving me money. Thumhara kya parishaan hai bey... Arey maidam if she keeps on buzzing in my ears my head will head irritated and I will do something wrong...

Chakor asked Rajjoo to just stay calm.

He started off...

But Maidam, I don't know much about Suraj Babu so how to make your daughter believe?? Will she find out? will you tell your family? I will try to work it but only for 30 days as I need to go to Dubai

Chakor just looked at him, don't talk too much and think too much, I will do the thinking, you just do what I say...

He opened to say something but couldnot, Oh why I could not say anything back? Why her look just makes me keep quiet? When she sees my eyes why I am unable to move my eyeballs! Her tears !! why it makes me feel sad!!!

He kept quiet as he wanted money... He followed her... he passed the temple... Prayed to Bajrangbali... amma par dyaan rako bey!!!

They started the journey in the dark night with Chanduji witnessing!!! She looked up suddenly, tears rolling, but weird she felt as she did not see her Suraj in Chanduji today!!! Chanduji please help me to save Anjor!!

It was a long journey...in the car in the night... He was seated next to the driver while she was seated back... The moonlight was on her making her cheek shine more as it was coated with her tears which was non stop, she slept due to her tiredness but the breeze was moving her hair strands...

He was also asleep but the trauma,,,,, who is the lady hugging and crying... his head was heavy he woke up with a jerk to see her behind through the mirror above. His heart suddenly felt calm, looking at her face... She is indeed crying... She is vulnerable but still strong!! She woke up felt surprised, how did I sleep, I feel something different...

They reached the hospital directly, She briefed him about Anjor, how she is daddy's girl... he walked in saw Teju and Anjor... He looked at Anjor, she was fragile and week but was happy to see him. Daadeee she opened her arms wide, he walked in hesitantly walked to her and she clung to him and started non stop

Dadee where were you so many days? What happened to those villians? Why didn't you come earlier? Why aren't you not hugging me proper..

Arey yeh bachi yaa naani, itna bolthi hai bey!! Are Bajrangbali ... He said he missed his phone so could not call her and now that he is here everything will be fine.

But, he thought he will not be able to handle but indeed he handled well!!!

Chakor saw Teju who was very tensed. Ma what happened why are you so tensed. Doctor is discharging Anjor today so we will take her home. I shall prepare and come to take her. She said mumma you will come with dadee naa...

Rajjoo was in all very irritated but was constantly watching him.

She brought him to the Haveli...

They stepped inside he saw Girija with aarti plate, Chakor and he were invited suddenly there was gush of air and the bells rang he was had a weird feeling...he brushed it aside but was awed at the Haveli and its richness..

Chakor took her to their room... she was emotional about Suraj. He saw the photos of Sukor together, he saw that photo where she was resting her head in Suraj's chest and hugging her... Something tinged she is small and is fitting perfectly... He had the blurred mirage...his eyes fixed on that photo...

He asked about money, the richness was indeed making him look wide... In all this Rajjoo was getting irritated as he was talking about money.

Chakor gave him the money from the Haveli Chest and he realized that indeed Haveli is Wealth ridden. He had other plans... Chakor went to check upon Teju...

Teju was sad she spoke about the long last brother and their family, she told that the brother died pauper and the children are homeless.

Chakor asked her bring them home.

Welcoming the Unwanted Guests

Originally posted by: katheriene

Beautiful update👏

Everything was same as the show but Suraj being Raghav changed everything😊

Chakor is feeling a sense of calmness due to Suraj being their😊

Suraj is also feeling a connection with Chakor😊

The dialogue she is small fitting perfectly is so beautiful

So Akash is entering soon

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: 77nikita

👏The subtle changes in your story from the original one makes it interesting dear...

Plus that cliffhanger😳

Also the way he feels at peace when he sees her is so soothing...I can actually imagine the scene, the night, the moonlight, they going in the car, both having a light sleep intermingled with thoughts which they are not able to fathom...😳😳

Waiting for the "small" to dawn on him😃

👏 Keep updating as and when possible.

Chapter 6

The Unwanted Guests Unwanted situations...

Teju was sad she spoke about the long last brother and their family, she told that the brother died pauper and the children are homeless.

Chakor asked her to bring them home.

The guests were there... The son Rohit, daughter Jyoti and son-in-law Aakash

(I donot want to describe much about Rohit and Aakash (the innocence goody goody one)

Rohit, and Aakash baiyya please feel comfortable and treat this as your home, Chakor said.

Anjor was all time trying to be with Daidee, while Raaghav was trying to feel ok but not ok kindaa with Anjor...

Chakor saw Raaghav and Anjor and felt the way he was managing her like her Suraj!! She smiled but the bomb blast came in front of her and she jerked.. Tears rolled , how will I tell Anjor that he will go away in another few weeks! Will she be strong enough to bear the loss? Will she able to manage it. Teju came by and asked kya hua beta, now a days you seem to be lost much and you and Suraj are not even talking much. Is everything alright with you both? Was there any problem during the mission. Chakor did not say anything but very plainly told no ma everything will be fine. Chakor said to Teju and went to take a call from KY.

Yes Inspector, Chakor said!

Chakorji, your idea worked and we got the antidote and the children are recouping. They will be sent home by next week.

Aakash was there and was asking Teju if he could help them with some Haveli work as he feels indebted to them, while Rohit was calculating the wealth of the Haveli...

Teju was telling that since Suraj is there he will take care... but to take care of themselves.

It was a week after the guests were home...

Raaghav was trying to get along with Anjor but was getting the images of the young lady crying and all the more getting confused at the photo of Sukor... It was taking his head heavy so he just opted for a wine to relax his boggling so he excused himself for some time out to Chakor and as she did not want him to drink in Haveli, adviced him sternly but allowed him to go.

Chakor was getting ready to go to the NGO as Aabha wanted to meet her too as she was working for the NGO in assisting Chakor. KY was making his investigations about the person who had administered the harmone injections.

Rohit was looking at the haveli richness and was eyeing to take away few of expensive antique items. He tried to take one while Rajjoo saw this and shouted on him. Aakash also joined Rajjoo and told Rohit to stay in sense and not to stoop down. But he asked Rajjoo, how long are you going to be here?? You helped Chakor in Dharampura right? Chakor passed by and heard this?

Aakash baiyaa how do you know that Rajjoo helped me in Dharampura? I have not told about this to you?

Aakash said Bhaabi, Teju bua said that Rajjoo helped you in Dharampura. He quickly went out. Thinking within Chakor went to meet Aabha.

Rohit was upset and angry that Rajoo and Aakash caught him red handed and as Jyoti was told about this she too apprehended him. So he just went away wandering.

Rajjoo was with Anjor and she was getting annoyed about Raaghav's talk about money and also about Aakash as he was asking about Dharampura.

Rajjooo was at home with Anjor and Teju went with Jyoti to the temple for doing her Pooja for Anjor's recovery but at the same time was worrying about Chakor... Anjor was sleeping...

Chakor was reaching her NGO in Lucknow and got a call from an unknown number. The person on the other side spoke to her and said he knows that Suraj is dead and Raaghav is imposting as Suraj, he asked her to send away Rajjoo back to Dharampura or she will not be spared and will be killed for helping Chakor. He said he has a person who has seen the events at Dharmapura and he will tell Anjor about it. Chakor was shocked terribly. Who is this who knows about Suraj's death? How does he know about Rajjoo? Rajjoo's life is at stake...

She called the home number to find if Rajjoo was safe but the phone was not responding. She called Raaghav but he was drunk so he could not hear his phone ringing. She tried calling Teju but by then her phone battery was dead.

Rajjoo was with Anjor and the home phone rang suddenly, she came down to pick the phone..

The person spoke hoarsely, await your death!

Rajjo was shocked... The haveli doors were locked...She tried calling Chakor but could not reach her.

She tried Raaghav too but went unheard!!

The advent of the evil!!!

Will Rajjoo be saved and Anjor be told of the truth?