The Greener Pasture....My first & final Story on my Sukor , my ado - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: katheriene

It is going good
Actually my marriage is on 21st feb so most of the time on mobile as there is nothing to do ,all the things are managed by my parents. I just do the work which only I can do


Prayers and Best Wishes dear 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: LuvSSever

Sumi dear..

superb update.
I am glad KY has a role to do here too😃

Good that chakor is aware of 3rd person.

Sukor-Raghav meet up similar to the epi but with the nuances of suraj added, so loved it more.

Thanks for the solace, waiting to read next. eagerly awaiting.


thanks so much Uma

yess your dosth How can I leave him

yes we want our chaturya chakoriya na

hmm yes dumbo could not think above that for their meet up but will try to scale up in the next chapter..

Thanks deary...
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: LuvSSever



Prayers and Best Wishes dear
😊

Thanks Uma
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44
Hey sumi...sahi chal raha Hain bey...
Fast paced is what i liked...

Read the 3rd and 4 th part of your story together again... enjoying it...

I am waiting to know how the "small" clicks in his mind and when. ...

Keep updating as and when you can...


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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sumsukor


thanks so much Uma

yess your dosth How can I leave him

yes we want our chaturya chakoriya na

hmm yes dumbo could not think above that for their meet up but will try to scale up in the next chapter..

Thanks deary...



No no dear,
it was good actually. you have wrote it lot better.

in show it was all of a sudden, but here it has gone with the flow, with backstory, with Raghav-Amma hving moments, all connected and icing on cake, he is suraj , his nuances added to raghav and those flashes of she is small..

i just loved it.
good going..awaiting next
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: sumsukor


Hey Maithuuu big big huggy 🤗

I was thinking of you when I wanted to pen,

I remembered your words! Sumi when you wanted to see Sukor in your way you write your own story.

did few OS but story is not my cuppa but my maiden attempt (bit scared though hush hush)

loved your words, a word from my Author.

😊

I am so so upset with the show yaar unable to move on but now everything is over but I want to have a happy ending for my adories and specially my dude😉

say my big hug and hi to my Rabbiii


Aww dear!

Thank u so so much for those words!
And I still mean it that you are my inspiration for lovely words and expression lines!

Will transfer the message to Rabi for sure!

So happy that you are writing and doing the story that the Udaan team should have done!
Wish you were in the crew !

Anyways, we r still getting to taste the happiness through your words!
So all cool!

Keep rocking dear!

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Posted: 6 years ago
#47
Another epic update dear!
Loved it!
Great!

Happy that Chakor is back with Suraj even if none of them know the truth!
Moon is still witnessing their togetherness!

Continue soon !
:-)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: maithu_

Another epic update dear!

Loved it!
Great!

Happy that Chakor is back with Suraj even if none of them know the truth!
Moon is still witnessing their togetherness!

Continue soon !
:-)


thanks Maithu

yes the moon is witnessing and you got it right

i will try to finish it soon as I am not sure how long we all will be here
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Great going Sumi
Loved their first meeting.
Eager to see how the story will progress.
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: katheriene

It is going good
Actually my marriage is on 21st feb so most of the time on mobile as there is nothing to do ,all the things are managed by my parents. I just do the work which only I can do


Congratulations Sonali and best wishes.

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