The Greener Pasture....My first & final Story on my Sukor , my ado - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thanks Ayur..😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: 77nikita

Do it do it do it😳

As if we need to tell😉


😆😆 I like that.. You have no escape😆
Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome start Sumi
Happy that Raghav is Suraj
Waiting for the next part.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Sumi dear🤗
superb.
Raghav being suraj..our unfulfilled wish.. so happy , waiting to read next.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Wah wah sumi...mast bey
All our unfulfilled wishes...

Keep updating whenever you can😳


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Posted: 6 years ago
#16
How I missed this?
Good start sumi
Eagerly waiting to next update
Ragav turn suraj Most wanted twist
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Even today Ragavs one dialogue resembled suraj
jo kahathehai vo karthehai"
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 2


The Desert...

Her phone rang!!! Teju shared the news that Anjor was terribly ill...She came to senses asked for daddy and flipped again.

Chakor, please what happened why are you not answering... Are you and Suraj fine? Come fast? Agonised the mummy..

She froze again... she has no answer, but she has to keep her promise to Suraj!

Thumey jeena hai, hamari Anjor ke liye... reverberated in her ears.

Chakooor, bol beta... Ma... ham teek hai... Suraj has gone nearyby... We will come soon... she gathered all her guts to speak these words.

She fell on the ground lifeless... as her soul has vanished...she did not realise when she woke... Rajjo was beside her and the village elders were there with a doctor!!

Didi please wake up... her head pained... Anjor!!! What happened.

Didi it's now a week didi... your phone is also switched off... we were all worried as you would not respond. Thank god you opened your eyes...

She shook with shock, what it's already a week Oh god whats happening to Anjor... Haveli will be worried! I need to go... She hurried holding on to her soul's possession. Those precious ones.

Rajjo came along with her, didi its already close to a week, and the weather is too bad, roads are bad too so we need to take a round about route...

She couldnot cry as she was dry... No tears... only puffed eyes... Everything seems pale... its dry... sand...everywhere.. her life is a desert but she has to keep her promise...

The cab started...

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The Oasis

The lady was still crying, Raaghav mera beta, aankhen kolo...

She was crying praying and looking at him, he laid still... Bajrangbali, Raamji mera beta ko bachaalo

Its already 7 days gone...

Suddenly his eyes moved... the old man was giving him herbal tonic and he suddenly coughed, he breathed aloud...

This is miracle... how can this happen wondered the old man

Raaghav beta ... she kissed him with all motherly love...

He opened his eyes, his head was paining... It was like a huge pile of stone on his head... he moved his hand which was bit burnt. He was bandaged in herbal pack...

The old man was happy extremely as he had lost all hopes but for his breathing, he thought everything has stopped but only a light flow of air... Something was holding him...

He coughed opening his eyes, scrunching, looking around...

Raaghav, mera beta..glad you are fine... I have been praying... you got hurt terribly, you fell off the valley... She went on and on...

Raaghav!!! He was confused...this is my mother? Where am I...

The old man told the old lady not to agonise him...He was happy for her too as she was smiling... Which she had lost since years...

He woke up, the old man said Raaghav, are you ok? Your mother is here, your wounds have healed well, just few more days you will be able to walk... I don't know whose grace it is you are really lucky to survive.

Raaghav beta get up have this soup and some food, you will regain your strength for you are the devotee of bajrangbali...nothing will befall on you

He lifted his head, why is she holding me and crying, who is this young lady, I can't see her clearly...she is like a shadow... But she is making me light... Who is she...??


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Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Girls
my aplogies... am unable to reply to your comments individually.

thanks for the encouragement..

grhh my senior leadership team is here.

but will try to update soon

just some solace to heal us!!!

Hope I could
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Posted: 6 years ago
#20
Beautiful update 👏
No words for it🤗
So one week passed since the blast
Chakor was unconscious for one week 😲
Chakor's life is now a desert 😭
Suraj gained consciousness 😊
Let's see whether he lost memory or not
Loved the way you are shaping the story
Wished this to happen in the show
Waiting for next
Edited by katheriene - 6 years ago

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