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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: LuvSSever



sorry dear




which i want to do with full heart, i keep it for last, no in hurry burry will do.. thts why delayed.. coming soon.😊

even when i go for some invited lunch, i finish off what i dont like first and will eat what i like at last to relish the taste i like .
but i will be refilled with dish i dont like, bcoz they think i finished off fast bcoz its my fav😆

sorry for this irrelevant example and eating your time ..you might be thinking for this big one, i could have commented on story only..lol


aaawwwhahahaha so so cute you are and that little one too🤗

dont feel sorry😭

Sumi will always wait patiently
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sumsukor

The Final Chapter

The Dark Knight rose with his armor shining thou.

Dare touch! Hell will break loose for they area phoenix to rise from the ashes...

KY was on his way to the Haveli.. he was carrying the sketch of the culprit as described by the girls.

He just could not believe himself... Oh god we were milking the snake in our yard!!

How come Chakorji could not read the eyes???

How did my police brain fail...God if anything had happened to Rajoo... to Anjor

He was driving fast... at the same time calling Chakor... Chakorji please why am I not able to reach you???

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Raaghav held the collar of Aakash... He was so close to Aakash... He was shocked...

You... he started but...

Aakash smiled... as Raagahv was hit in his head from behind...

He was carried away in a van...

Chakor heard some noise... she saw a van leaving... and she saw...

Her eyes froze in shock...

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KY reached the Haveli shouted , Chakorji, Chakorji, Raaghav

Jyoti and Rohit came down along with Rajjoo and Girija

Inspector, all are in the hospital, as Anjor has taken sick,

Tejaswiniji has gone with Aakash to the hospital

What... Aakash is not in the Haveli...

He quickly called the control room, check all the vehicles with the sketch I am sending now on MMS and WA.

Jyoti could not understand anything...

KY showed the sketch to her...saying this is the culprit...

Jyoti couldnot move her lid... It was the sketch of eyes and brows with the birthmark covered with a mask. Its Aakash, No how can it be,,, no no something is wrong, she broke down...

Do you know anything about your husband? Whats is his background? No he is very sweet, he said his mother and brother died in an accident and in memory of them he helps all children and accident victims..

KY shouted, bakwaas he is the second son of the evil minister Rajeshwari Dev and brother of Vikram, the heartless trio along with BP scarred and marred so many young children and made girls victim and preyed upon their modesty. Last week he had injected the children with the harmone injections and one of them gave this description. Please I am going to the hospital, I am leaving two of my constables here for your safety. If he comes here please call me immediately. He asked Rajjoo to say safe..

Lets go to the hospital... He called Chakor again

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Chakor saw the van, her eyes froze, shocked, it was the same black van which had the symbol of the evil trios. She sensed danger...

So the evil was here at the hospital... Wait a minute... birthmark???

Oh god she visualized, oh god how can it be...How did I not find it???

She ran outside to see the van vanish... she called Raaghav, Raaghav but no sound, no he must have taken Raaghav with him. He has hurt Anjor now its Raaghav...

The moment she came out she saw numerous missed calls from KY... She called him... Inspector Sir, Chakorji... Its Aakash she said... KY was shocked, yes Chakorji, I am coming to the hospital... She said everything is over, Anjor is traumatized and is in the ICU but but but Raaghav, Raaghav has been taken away by Aakash, please save him she cried profusely... I am coming..

She ran inside the ICU... Called Teju and told her everything very short... she said I have no time, please take care of Anjor, Rajjoo came running... didi, yes I know... You stay safe, be with Ma and take care of Anjor... I am going to save Raaghav

Raaghav I am coming... Daak baba please save that innocent soul... Why my heart is cringing... I am unable to breathe too... what is happening to me... Oh god please give me strength... She ran and took her car, she called KY to track the car which started from the hospital...

The control room checked the cctv of the hospital and found the car no. and were trying to locate it... but they lost track...

Chakor was stuck... She drove to the place ...

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He was motionless, he was tied to a pillar ... the goons hit him again and again and one hit him in his head...he could not move his head, he was lifeless...

AAkash was seated, smiling beside the pic of the evil Trio.

Ma, bro and friend, I will now take revenge of Chakor as she will be alone...

I could not kill Rajjooo as she escaped because of that inspector but now she is harmless.

Anjor now knows the truth so she will hate Chakor and also Raaghav.

This Raaghav looking at him, why man, why did you come into my web like an insect.

I was happily moving my coins to close down on Chakor and kill her and inject Anjor again. Those stupid guys got those three girls and Anjor was not there. But since they saw me so I injected them, they must have been dead by now...

I thought Chakor is alone, but you turned into her savior, protecting her, I sent my goons when she was returning form lucknow to kill her but from no where you came in and spoiled all my plans.

Now see your plight, just because you are looking like Suraj does not mean you can become Suraj... Poor Suraj is already dead and gone... and now for helping Chakor though I don't have any enmity still you are going to be dead. I pity you, laughed the evil.

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Anjor slowly opened her eyes... Mumma, daadi... Dadee dadee she was palpitating.

Teju hugged her she cried, Anjor beta please donot strain yourself, everything will be fine.

No daadee nothing is fine ... This Raaghav is not my daddee, he fooled fooled all of us... and that man said that my daddy my daddy is no more... I donot want any one I want my Suraj daddy... she cried ... Doctor were attending to her...

No beta, Teju said, he did not fool any of us...Yes he came for money but your love Changed him completely , he became very affectionate to you. Did you see any false love in him? Did he ever made you feel short of Suraj?... but dhaadi he is not your son or my father na...

He came here to save you, and lived selfless only for you. Whenever you were in trouble who rushed to you first!! He practiced all that you wanted him to do to become a perfect father...

Yes no body can take Suraj's place, my son but he is also like my son, he had no reason to change but he changed for you dear..

Beta, keep your hand in your heart and close your eyes... Think through the days of him with you and feel and tell if he is good or bad...

Anjor playedback her times with Raaghav, how he braided her hair, danced with her, made her happy at every stage, played with her, exercised with her and always supported her when Chakor was strict with her... Tears flowed... she said daadhi yes he is good still he is not my father, I will not hate him but I will respect him as a good person but will not accept him as my daddy she cried... Hugging Teju and Rajjooo... she wanted to see Chakor, she was shouting asking her to be taken to Chakor as she was fearing her mom also may be killed...

She asked Teju, daadi mumma always says that bhurai never wins only sachaai wins but if daddy helped the village why did god kill him?? for which Teju could not give any answer...

They did not know what to do... but she was adamant...

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Chakor went to Rajeshwari's bungalow it was ruined...she had a gut feeling that Raaghav must be here... She went to the basement...

She cried, praying to her Daak Baaba, why are you testing your chakoriya..

She saw the men there outside and she broke the window and saw, she was shocked to see Raagahv tied to a pillar lifeless, his head was bleeding and he was hanging his head...

Raaghav she called, she slowly went inside not to create a noise, hugging him, crying inconsolable, Raaghav please open your eyes...

She is hugging me crying inconsolable... Her tears all over me... I cant see her face, she is small but fit into me perfectly... Why is she crying, why is it shady, not clear, she is hugging but I am unable to move my muscle too... Who is she...

Raaghav please don't go away like my Suraj... Please... I need your help... Please forgive me as I hurt your feelings by not accepting your love. But I will be only for Suraj... What they have done to you... Oh god I will take you from here.. She tried to

Surajjj... she is hugging me and crying... whats is happening to my head, its swirling, my blood is gushing...

She skipped and the goons heard the noise came running... AAkash walked in smiling evil...

Chakor Baabhi... I should appreciate you as you are not easy you found me out here. I am really surprised as you never accept your defeat but always fight back.

See what I have done to you, Raaghav will be killed, I will kill you too and will take Anjor into my custody and do whatever I want to.

Dare not talk about my daughter, donot spell her name also from your mouth. You cannot do anything to me. You are a big fool and you did a mistake coming into my path. When I could ruin your mom and your brother you are a small fry. Evil can never win she raged angrily, holding on to a stick nearby asking Raaghav to wake up.

Evil cannot win Aakash laughed, you could not do anything to me though I was under your nose... And where did good win, Suraj was killed in the bomb...

Surajjj... why is my veins gushing... she is crying...

Aakash dare not to any harm to him for I will burn you alive.

Aakash asked the goons to catch her and beat her...

She tried to defend and beat the goons, turned into that tigress to save the wounded tiger...

He said your Suraj is dead, Anjor will die too soon and Chakor will also be dead.

She shouted bleeding, Suraj is not dead he lives in my heart, in my nerves, in my breath, in every part of mine.

Don't even try to do harm, god will never allow evil to thrive.

Aakash was laughing saying Suraj is dead and this fellow who came to help you is also going to die now... He is lifeless...

She cried, please wake up, see Chakor is being harmed... your maidam is harmed... Suraj's Chakor is being beaten, they slapped her that she fell on Raaghav holding him.

Surajj... Suraj's Chakor is being harmed... She is hugging me and crying... she is she is ...it... was getting clearer, its her, her, maidam, no no my Chakor... She is being harmed... No No... she is crying while I am being lifted... She is crying no I have to go to her. She cannot cry... I cannot see her cry...

She clung to him crying wake up please, mere liye... Remove her and stab her shouted Aakash she has done enough destruction to me..

The blood gushed gushed... his veins protruded, his fingers twirled, his eyes opened slowly, his blood was flowing, she was clinging to him... with all power he breathed ...he broke the chains he was tied to...

The goons tried to pull away Chakor. He held her by her waist tight to him no air could come between them, suffocating her,,, one hard hit at the goon, he saw stars all over and the next one he lifted his legs and bashed the other sending him to the corner of the walls.

It was Thunderous,

Dare touch Chakor... Don't touch Suraj's Chakor... that voice, that rage, that anger, that eyes, broke hell loose.

AAkash was shell shocked, he saw the goons near dead without a sign of life. He came to him hey Raaghav ... leave her.

Chakor slowly woke, coming to her sense, she was lifted by him, his left hand holding her safe towards him.

With all his might he shouted AAkasshh... Raaghav nahi... Suuuraaj Suuraj Rajvanshi hai Ham raged the sun.. roared the Lion... reverberated the walls...

Hamara hothey huey hamara Chakor ko koi haath nai lagengey..

Haath laga kar dekho kaat daalenge... His eyes emit that fire that Aakash was thrown towards the door.

Chakor was trying to sense his hold his hold... Raag...Suurajjj...How is it possible, How is it... She was smiling but crying...

He was to throttle Aakash, bahut bahut burai kiya thum ne hamara pathni ki saath aur hamara beti ke saath. Aaj thu marna hai...

Aakash could not breathe...

Right enough KY came in with his squad arrested Aakash.

Aakaash was confused... How did you know its me and how did you find my hiding.

You don't know with whom you have waged the war it is with Chakor Rajvanshi, she had shared her GPS with me and I could track and come here. And the girls whom you injected are not dead, they are alive, they gave your description and the town is full of your sketch... You cannot escape bacha!!!

Enough of your play now get to going to your real sasural house. He arrested him..

Chakor could not understand anything but was feeling dazed...

Chakorr that chakorr brought her to senses, inconsolable tears were flowing...

She hugged him tight tight fusing into him... Chakor ham aagayee thumhara Suraj aagayeee

An ambulance came to take Chakor and Suraj

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They were at the same hospital,

Anjor came running to them... she smiled at Raaghav (she did not know that it was Suraj) and said, I am sorry I cannot take you as my daddy but will respect you and thank you for saving me and helping my mom..

Suraj and Chakor smiled... arey he said my daughter has grown big, like her mother, big at heart, accepting me but not as her daddy... He laughed, extending his hands lifting her high above and saying, hamara bacha... Saanvi ya Anjor... Tears flowed down Anjor's eyes, she clung to him tightly... daadeee...

Teju was in tears... Mummyyy that mummy brought everything back... all were happy as both were taken into the treatment ward...

Daadeee Anjor shouted running to the ganesh idol at the hospital... Mumma is always right, Evil can Never Win only Truth Triumphs...

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Some sukor moments...aham aham a bonus



Finally 😃...
I relished your story one more time dear and here to comment on this lovely final part that fulfilled almost half of our wishes.

First lines in red

totally agreed, dare touch and how we waited for phoenix to rise from the ashes.

And the next part on Kaushalji


I loved he being having a good role in all this Akash case. as always good as an inspector and supportive of chakor.

And he explaining all that in haveli..reacting fast, i am like 👍🏼😊


Then Chakor seeing Raghav taken in car, connecting the dots, finding its akash, telling it to KY before he informs her and taking actions immediately, quickly reacting to circumstances, thats what chakor is know for..



Seeing Raghav/suraj beaten kike that by akash, reminded of raghav beaten in epi and suraj left us im epi and was like



And when akash was going on and on, i was like wait for the lion SR inside him to wakeup, then you will see your state, wait and watch



Then teju explaining anjor about raghav and current to things , ahh hiw realistic, and hiw much we wanted it to be that way. she is the exact one who could have made that happened.
both to teju and sumi for writing this




And the entire sequence of chakor reaching there, feeling for him, trying him to wakeup telling your maidamji in trouble.
he in his mind having a struggle to recollect who that small girl and the words of chakor,her voice,her crying, waking the memories inside him..
too good and when he finally got it back , that dare touch moment.
seeing SR back in him , I was like

happy happy tears ... :)

Then his words Suraj Rajvanshi hai hum, ahh what a power it has. and the action followed, his trademark dialogues, dare touch her, he will cut them into pieces, you cant harm her..
i was enjoying most visualising it like


And the final happy moments is hospital , its



over all , superb sumi dear..I just loved the way he got his memory back and all characters having a good part to play sticking to their characteristics.
just loved it and reading this i was like

yayyy..Happy ending for sukor



Thanks for it dear.. thanks for this solace.




for bonus part coming up..😊😳

Edited by LuvSSever - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
Umaaa ji for my story such a lovely emojiirary



Sumi going bonkers

Well a wait is always worth the wait and ofcourse when it comes from the Umojii,,

loved everything and minion i felt so happy seeing them...


and the impact of SR glad you could visualise it... so feel very happy.

And about Kaushal yesss how can I leave your Dosth...

A big hug yes yes I am feeling warm in there grhhh Chennai Weather...

Thanks yaar so so much and you are doing for the bonus too


awww thats a double treat!!!🤗
Edited by sumsukor - 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumsukor

The epilogue and the Bonus

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The pasture is green.. everywhere...

Love is in the air everywhere...

And...

She is small, beautiful and fits into me perfectly!!!! Everytime!!!

They rose again, high above as they are divine not to be doused!!!

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Chakor could not understand anything but was feeling dazed...

Chakorr that chakorr brought her to senses, incessant tears were flowing...

She hugged him tight tight fusing into him... Chakor ham aagayee thumhara Suraj aagayeee

An ambulance came to take Chakor and Suraj

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After their initial emotional moments with Teju and Anjor, they were taken into the treatment room.

The hospital ensured they were in the same room as Suraj was insistent and chakor was dizzy too...

Suraj was badly wounded but he was not leaving chakor's hands who was in the next bed.. the doctor was smiling and treating his wounds. He said the head wound is too much so I shall give you anesthesia as it will be painful. He outrightly said No, no making me unconscious as I had just come to consciousness and can bear any pain just holding my Chakor. The doctor finally finished dressing his wounds and

She was dizzy but her brain was thinking, how can this happen??? I searched him everywhere!! How did he turn to Raaghav and her heart shuddered had I accepted his love as Raaghav... What will he think of me... her mind was boggling..

Her hands which was held by him shook... he knew there was too much going through her... She opened her eyes and saw her hands held tight by him...

Suraj!!! She just went near him... DP... Don't think too much... I know whats going in your mind... he spoke without opening his eyes...

Jungli billi thum sirf hamara hai aur hamesha hamare hi rahehi...

(your are just mine and will always remain mine, I will rise from ashes, to ensure you are mine in any form)

I know you love only me and cannot love anyone!!

I love you Paakandhi for this, as I know you will never leave me!!. Thank You once again...

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It was few days gone by and the Haveli was decorated to ensure that the King returned from exile... all were waiting for SuKor... Anjor along with Rajjoo, Giria had made special arrangements.

But...

Sukor and Teju were travelling towards the village in Lucknow...

The old lady was eagerly waiting for her son's return... its going to be more than 30 days... no sign of him... have I lost him again...

He came to her... standing at the doorstep, Ammaa...

She was confused... his SR attire...along with Chakor and Teju besides him.

Raaghav, mera beta, she went running to him, hugging. Teju was all tears...

Who are they? Where were you? Why did you not come early?

He hugged her made her sit, he said Amma you have to come with me as you are no more to stay in this house... the people around gathered... they were all awe to see them.

She could not understand, chakor explained about the happenings, Teju hugged her and was thankful for taking care of her son, no their son as she said Suraj is now son to both of us...

The old lady was at loss of words, she went to bajrangbali and thanked him but was hesitant to go along as they were from the rich family...

Chakor was very sweet in making her understand that if she had not been there Suraj would not have been with them now.

The old lady thanked god saying she got not only a son but a family too... She said I will come with you but I can stay close by not in your Haveli as I am not to used to that luxury living. Chakor said she can stay in Mai's house..

Happily they went and thanked the Ved who treated Suraj. He blessed them and said to Chakor your love is too strong that he refused to leave this world though he was brought here lifeless, but I knew something was holding him back. He blessed them and was happy that they took the old lady along with them.

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Ajor and the whole village was waiting along with KY...

All were happy and Anjor was happy that she got two grannys to play with... She went with them..

Teju ensured Sukor spent some time together after all the hardship..

KY said Chakorji, a happy news the Minister of Urban development has sanctioned a huge amount for the AZ unnati project and we can work a schedule for the same. She thanked and asked but Inspector why did you refuse your promotion and your new posting!! Why you wanted to be in AZ...?

Suraj noticed it ... Arey dumbo Chakoria.. Inspector saab wants to be in AZ as his interest is in AZ..

Haa?? She saw Rajjoo blushing... Oyee aisaa !!! KY went to his jeep asking Rajjoo to take care...

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So !!!

So!!!

She asked!!! Knowing what he was upto !

So we now need to start planning about AZ development!!

Arey DP always in jagat mata mode...

PP and you always in "that" mode.

"That" mode which mode.. Their room was fully lighted with candles with roses strewn all around..

She was in a beautiful yellow saree with a jacquard blouse..

Suraj was in his white and was mesmerized at the beauty in front...

She went up to Suraj with the small silver container... He understood and filled her maang with sindoor and held her very close to him..

Achcha tell me one thing!!! Hmmm, he was just drawing his hands over her cheeks... and held her bare back, playing with her doris...she was loosing herself... My man all myself...

What to tell...

How much you missed me!!

Miss you!!! Pouting her lips, scrunching her eyes ...Haan actually I was better with Raaghav, he was so cute, giving all respects...very careful... he was tigheting his grip...mmm

Achcha he pushed her on the bed... so Maidam wants Raaghav, he teased her... She laughed no no I like only my PP my Suraj, that rough, tough who handles me with love, that love which makes me forget everything...that love which heals me, her eyes was turning dark with lust and so was his...

He made her lay on him holding her and brushing her strands!!! Chakor, I had those nightmares, the image of you shady crying holding on to me, which I could not just get off... I could not figure it too..I was lifeless, with wounds all over, but my soul knew someone was waiting for me, I cannot go away...

She closed her eyes placing her head in his chest, for she was getting into tranquility,,, but Suraj how come the bandhuva mohar is not there... If it was I would have sensed it... but somehow I too got the vibes but the jitteriness of the blast made me go numb... I searched for you the whole valley but... He said yes his right hand was burnt thanks to the herbs...

She became so emotional that she started to shake... He held her tight... she went into him...

He wiped her tears... No more tears my dear, only cheers...

But Suraj what made you hold on to that the shady one was me... He lifted her chin, slowly kissed her lips very slowly very lovingly...and kissed all over her face sending shivers to her spine which she had been craving for... If I have to die let me die this moment in his hands... That thought which made my soul lingering and holding on to for was

Was...

That...

He took her completely into him saying you are small, beautiful and (his voice turned husky with full of lust) you perfectly fit into me...devouring her completely!! And indeed she went into him as they went into another world!!!

Chanduji was happy shining at his adories through the window and ensured that the breeze drew the curtains while he was too turning pink...

Sukor love is divine... No one can love each other like Sukor...

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Surajjj!!!! Chakor stared at him angrily...

Maidam ... please aap aisa math dekho bey!! He turns into Raaghav whenever she gets into the Jungli billi mode...

Kyon Gyaan Dev, dar gaya kya??

Chakor and Anjor both had their hands in their waists laughing!!! They were getting ready to go to their respective classes... Chakor was going to the sports centre as a coach training the children for the oncoming marathon.

Anjor was ready with her swimming sessions as she was participating in the Asian swimming competition...

Hum kissi baap se bi nahi darthey... Suraj Raaghvanshi Hai mum... he said...

Acchaaa!!!! They said in one voice

Uaaannn cried six months old Aarav from his baby cradle...

Na na beta naa please math !! I can manage anything in the world but not your cry,,, I go crazy...

Mummy, Amma please come ... both the granny's came rushing at the hearing their grandson's cry... lucky is he who has them to cuddle always...

Anjor go down and wait I shall come with my coaching bag said Chakor...

bye daadeee, mumma come soon...

He came and backhugged her, nuzzling, Suraj chodo please I have to go... Anjor is waiting and you don't leave a moment to ...mmm he closed in her with a sweet kiss.

Yes DP, I go all the more crazy looking at you... Mission Dozen is yet to complete..

She ran away from ...hmmm...

Hey marathon runner take care and coach the kids well!!!

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Walked in Inspector Kaushal Yaadav... Suraj ji the plan for the next phase of development is all ready for the Unnati Project. We may go to meet the investors.

He waved to his mothers and kissed Aarav and went along with KY and Chagan.

A sense of satisfaction as he drove as AZ was developing... happy faces... As there were well laid roads, well lit houses, proper housing, sanitation, schools and hospital.

He was now going to take it to the next level of bringing investors to invest in the silk industry and handicrafts to reach to the international markets.

He walked in his blue and white full tuxedo...with style and attitude...

Press, industrial powerhouses were waiting and so were the investors.

They were extending their hands to him and he was shaking them... Thank you

Suraj Raagvanshi Hai hum, the husband of Chakor Rajvanshi...

The media was covering it live as it was first of its kind for a small village to rise to the international level..

Chakor was in her coaching centre watching the TV, looking at her MAN with full of Pride.

My Suraj...

My Sun who rises for me and never sets till I want him to...

(thanks girls I rest completely in peace - My first and the last story and my final post)


Dear, I am back with comment for the epilogue:)

first
Those words at green..


Then the followed Sukor scene, scene while they are treated..he doesnt want anaesthesia and hold her hands


Then that DP,jungli billi and Paakandhi


Then what I see, wow, thats a nice closure for amma track and for sure Sukor would have done this only.



Sumi dear

for showing this too , that too so apt good closure to amma track..

Then what comes omg KY ji with Rajjo and AZ development.

you fulfilled this wish too🤗


Then she in yellow saree and he in white, in their green room.


she teased him using Raghav, he tightened the grip, then their moments. he explaining how he hold on to life ,she turning emotionally, he telling no tears only cheers


He took her completely into him saying you are small, beautiful and (his voice turned husky with full of lust) you perfectly fit into me...devouring her completely!! And indeed she went into him as they went into another world!!!



reading that part,me with happy happy tears

Then what I see , another surprise.
Chakor as coach, Suraj developed AZ ..my reaction on reading it and people at home seeing me..lol

Aww , how I wished to see her in those tracks again and doing something on sports..thanks dear for making it fulfilled in your story.

then a small prince in their lives, journey towards dozen😆, their lovable nokjhoks,
And the last lines

Chakor was in her coaching centre watching the TV, looking at her MAN with full of Pride.

My Suraj...

My Sun who rises for me and never sets till I want him to...






Entire Epilogue was

moment...

And reading this sukorians would be happy dancing



Sumi dear...


and




for such a sukor story, beautiful epilogue and bonus.


superb and thanks for the solace

Edited by LuvSSever - 6 years ago
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Umaaa
a big big hug

He He (just copy pasted from yours, me dumbo in this)



I am so so so happy, emotional, going bonkers with your emojirary...


when I saw your name I thought Uma has already commented now anything new😃

wow then I remembered and sweetheart thank you so so much for those lovely gifs everything. and snoopy (my favo)

happy I could fulfill those wishes

and KY and Rajoo he he How can we leave him alone... 😆😆


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yes dear, you fulfilled more than I could ask for🤗
both sukor and Ragkor..chanceless..nice stories, perfect ending to each.
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yes dear, you fulfilled more than I could ask for🤗

both sukor and Ragkor..chanceless..nice stories, perfect ending to each.



😳🤗
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Just finished reading the story. It was beautifully written. My eyes are filled with tears. Tears of joy, of peace. I wish if you write the last part of actual show it will be awesome. The small changes you made from original epi it made the story more interesting &more realistic. Loved all the parts spclly the car scene of chap-5, from where Raghav's feeling aroused, you changed the rape case to attempt to murder case which is nice. Loved Chakor -Teju maa scene after the truth was revealed,where she felt guilty for not sensing her son was in danger & console Chakor . Liked how Teju maa explained Anjor about Raghav's good nature and his selfless love. All I wanted to see in actual show but you fulfilled our many insatiable desire. In your story Anjor is more sensible than original. The epilogue is just impeccable. From the Rajjo Inspector love story (I too thought about their pair) to the sukor romance, sukor son, the mission 12, Chakor 's coaching classes , Suraj managing AZ development project , everything is so perfect. I could visualized it. We all wanted such type of ending with so much love & happiness in Sukor life, the progress &prosperity in AZ. Sorry it became a little longer bt I couldn't control. And thanks for writing and sending me the beautiful story.
Thanks so much Smita on twitter
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Posted: 6 years ago
Sumi... you fulfilled Rabia's sukor son dream. 😊 But sadly she cut ties with the show.
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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: BeeSandy

Sumi... you fulfilled Rabia's sukor son dream. 😊 But sadly she cut ties with the show.


Hey Sandy thanks so much

yes I miss so so much Rabbi...😭😭


thanks for reading . means a lot...

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