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Posted: 1 years ago
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The incident where it all began! Would love to read what you have in mind regarding this๐Ÿค—

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿฅฐ

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Posted: 1 years ago
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OMG !! The way you wrote this is truely amazing. You gave me back to the memories of the initial episodes of NUKSH. The innocence and the maturity just like melting ice and bursting fire the way ViDev is been shown you portrayed it in good way. Hats off . And so sorry for not reading your FF . These days I am not getting enough time yaar. My baby needs me much more ,so ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ’• when she allows me to be free๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚ that time I makes a visit here . Once I manages will try to read Pati patni wala FF. Thank you so much for tagging me always 

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Caught up with some work. I will update soon๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Thank you so much๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿฅฐ๐Ÿค— good to hear about your baby๐Ÿ˜ I can understand you must be busy, don't worry at all, read only if you find time ๐Ÿ˜ฌ๐Ÿ˜ฌ

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Part 2 :

Vidhi was contemplating to apologise to Dev for ruining his private moment earlier with his wife, but she notices him being tensed and decides not to speak up. She looks on as he walks away lost in his thoughts. Just as she is about to make a move, someone grabs her tightly by her arm and pulls into a room. As she was about to scream, she notices it is a lady, the lady with whom she earlier crossed paths with in an uncanny situation.

Amba : Tum.. how dare you? Tumhari himmat kaise huyi ki tumne Dev ko apni madad ke liye leke gayi.. tumhe pata hai woh kaun hain.. he is the Dev Raichand iss shehar ke sabse bada business man aur main unki wife Amba Dev Raichand. How dare you disturb us?

Vidhi ( trembling ) : Ma'am please mujhe maaf kijiye, maine jaan boojkar aisa nahin kiya. Main..woh .. beautician...

Amba : Stop it.. mujhe koi explanation nahin chahiye.. aur mujhe mam nahin Mrs. Dev Raichand kehke address karna

Vidhi : Sorry Mrs. Dev Raichand...main 

Even before Vidhi can complete her sentence, Amba walks away haughtily. 

Vidhi ( mind voice ) : Yeh donon pati patni mein kitna antar hain.. woh sir bina kucch kahe meri baat samajh liya aur yeh madam to kucch baat karne bhi nahin de rahi hai. Lagta hain unka koyi jhagda chal rahaa hain jiska bhadaas mujhpe nikaal diya. Jo bhi ho mujhe involve nahin hona chahiye.. bas jaldi se yeh kaam nipatloon aur chali jaaon.. par woh sir ko itna pareshaan dekhkar mujhe itna bura kyun lag raha hain.

Finally deciding to get over the matter, Vidhi follows Dev's instructions to get down to the lounge area, where chachi has already started pedicure for some ladies. She gave Vidhi a disapproving look as she entered late. 

Vidhi : Chachi, main kucch madad karoon kya

Chachi : Oh maharani aagayi tum, itni jaldi aane ki kya zaroorat hain, shaadi ke baad aajaati aaraam se

Vidhi is thoroughly embarassed as all the ladies laugh at her. As she is about to explain her situation, she hears someone speak. She turns around to see a very elegant lady dressed in a simple but classy saree approach her.

Lady : Kya tum sab bhi bechaari dekho kitna dari huyi hain.. beta tum theek ho.. kya hua.. pareshaan mat hona.. main Satyavathi Raichand, dulhan ki maa hoon

Vidhi is confused but still manages to speak up.

Vidhi : Mam.. I am sorry, woh actually main rasta bhatak gayi thi aur..

Satya : Relax beta.. koi baat nahin.. abhi shaadi ke rasam start hone mein bahut time hai.. yeh sab tab tak ready ho jaayenge

Damyanti : Arre choti , tum isko support kyun kar rahi ho.. ab isne galti ki hain to daant to padegaa hi na..

Satya : Didi.. rehne do na aap bhi.. waise aap ne mere bete ko kahin dekha kya..

Damyanti : Haan, Abhi to Priya bahu ke saath andar decoration check karraha hai

Satya : Nahin didi..Abhi nahin woh Dev kahin nazar aaya kya

Damyanti : To seedha poochon na tumhara sautela beta kahaan hain.. agar beta kahoogi to logon ko yahin lageega ki apne sage bete ke baare mein baat karrahi ho

Vidhi is now cleared of her confusion about how Dev and Satyavathi looked almost the same age. She does not understand why the resentful talk about Dev is making her low.

Satya : Didi please aaj nahin.. aap jaante ho na maine kabhi bhi Dev mein aur Abhi aur Chitra mein farak kiya hai.. aur Dev bhi inn donon ko apna sagaa maanta hain.. to yeh baatein mat kijiye.

Damyanti : Woh sab uska dikhaava hain.. pata nahin tum log kab samjhoge

Satya : Didi rehne dijiye.. ek to main pareshaan hoon ki Dev kahin nazar nahin aaraha hai.. subah se bechara poora arrangements karne mein lagaa hai , kucch khaaya hoga ya nahin..pata nahin

Vidhi was trying to muster courage to say about her previous encounter with Dev, when she hears a similar commanding voice except that now it was sugar-coated.

Amba : Pranaam 

Amba is escorted there by Chitra and Satya receives them warmly.

Chitra : Maa.. yeh Amy mausi hai, Miss Amba Mehta.. Vikram ki maasi

Satya : Pranaam Amba ji.. aapke baare mein bahut suna .. aapse milkar khushi huyi hain

Amba : Aap mujhe sirf naam se bulaa sakti hain..waise bhi main aapse choti hoon

Chitra : Maa guess what aapko pata hain Amy mausi aur Dev bhai pehle se hi ek doosre ko jaante hain.. woh donon bahut acche dost hain, Amy mausi ne bataya

Satya : Really, yeh to sacch mein bahut acchi baat hain.. ab to hamare chinta aur bhi kam hogi

Amba : Chinta kis baat ki Satya ji.. ab betiyon ki shaadi to karni padegihi.. aap to aise ghar mein rishta karwa raheho jahaan par aapke bete ki jaan pehchaan hai

Satya : Sahi kahaan aapne

Amba : Satya ji tum kahiye mujhe

Satya : Haan tumne sahi kahaa

Amba : Waise Dev ki baat aagayi hai to pooch rahi hoon.. Dev ki shaadi ka kucch socha hai aapne.. uska bhi to umar badh rahaa hai.. aur ab to uske sar par bhai behen ke bhi zimmedaari nahin hain to jaldi uska bhi shaadi kardena chahiye.

Satya is stunned by the bluntness of Amba, yet chooses to ignore it.

Satya : Haan woh ab uske bhi shaadi karaana hai.. lekin woh Dev ki marzi se hi hoga hum use force nahin karenge

Amba : Kyun nahin force karenge.. agar uski sagi maa hoti to kya aise chod deti.. 

Satya is now too shocked to respond. Amba realises this and tones down immediately

Amba : I mean aap bhi Dev ki sagi maa ki tarah hi hai.. aap ka bhi haq hai uss par..agar aap kahoge to woh manaa nahin karega

Satya : Haan main baat karoongi

Satya excuses herself from there, while Chitra fawns over Amba. Amba arranges for top beauticians from Mumbai for Chitra and she can't stop gushing over her.

Chitra : OMG Amy mausi.. aap kitne considerate ho..how I wish aap jaisa koi hamare ghar mein bhi hoti.. Priya bhabhi ne to yahan ke top beauticians ke appointment miss kardi aur Dev bhai ne kisi local waalon ko bulaaya.

Amba : Chitra you relax.. tumhare bhai ne nahin kiya to kya hua ab maine uske badle mein yeh arrange kiya.. ab tumhari bhabhi hoti to yehin karti na

Chitra is too naive to understand Amba's intentions and Vidhi who has witnessed the whole scene is unable to process what has just happened.







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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sorry for the late update๐Ÿ˜”.Part 2 is here. Please do read and give your feedback๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sorry for the late update๐Ÿ˜” Part 2 is updated. Please do read and share your views.

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Sorry for the late update.. please do read and share your feedback๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

Edited by Srj9 - 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
#20

Very well written, its getting really interesting, has the scope of becoming a FF :) Chitra as always, not using her brains and Amba taking advantage of that.. Satya seemed miffed.. so she would likely spoil Amba's plans