ChaVi FF- Part 18(B) Updated on Page 30 on 27th Sep

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Index

Prologue

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep

Teaser 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=2

Part 1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=5

Part 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=6

Part 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=7

Teaser 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=8

Part 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=9

Part 5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=10

Teaser 3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=11

Part 6(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=12

Part 6(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=13

Part 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=14

Important Note

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=14

Part 8(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=16

Teaser 4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=16

Part 8(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=17

Sneak Peek of Part 9(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=18

Part 9(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=19

Part 9(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4849442/chavi-ff-part-18-b-updated-on-page-30-on-27th-sep?pn=19

Part 10(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142728694

Part 10(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142728694

Teaser 6

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/142970815

Sneak Peek of Part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143023113


Part 11

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143031761


Part 12

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143093230

Part 13(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143229844

Part 13(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143422741

Sneak Peek of Part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143467104

Part 14

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143537312

Teaser 7

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143582061

Part 15

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143629623

Part 16

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143747681

Part 17

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/144093038

Part 18(A)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/144096311

Part 18(B)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/144136932

Link of Season 2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/143319759


Prologue

The carriage driver stopped at some fort in Chunargarh(not the palace of Mareech). Virendra was inside the carriage holding a struggling Chandrakanta who was in her bridal wear with one hand and covering her mouth with another hand. He had a tough time in handling her though her hands were tied in front of her. She tried to struggle a lot but she was no match for Virendra's strength. She was angry with him for kidnapping her from the backyard of her palace and also angry at Jai Aditya for calling her at the backyard to say something important but to her shock Virendra was with him. She turned to leave but JA pulled her and pushed her to Virendra who held her tightly. She tried to scream but he covered her mouth still holding her with another hand while JA tied her hands in front of her. JA told Viru that his work is done and he has to handle the rest. CK looked angrily at JA but he only smiled and said that he is doing this for her own good and then said seriously that she should not make any stupid mistake like he did with his love and lost her. CK comes out of her thoughts only to be pulled by Virendra out of the carriage. Before she could say anything, he threw her over his shoulder.

"Chhodo mujhe, tum paagal ho gaye ho," shouted CK as he took her inside the fort gate.

"Paagal main nahi, tum ho gayi ho," said Viru as he reached the ground area of the fort.

CK who was still on his shoulder looked around and saw half a dozen of khunkhars sharpening the weapons. The khunkhars stopped their work and looked up to see their friend holding a woman in bridal wear on their shoulder and that woman was repeatedly shouting to let her go. No one knew she was CK. Viru make CK stand on the ground and untied her hands.

"Virendra, ye galat hai. Ladkiyon ki izzat karni chaahiye," said one of his friends.

"Haan ye galat hai. Iss ladki ko vapas uske ghar chhod aao," said another khunkar.

"Main nahi kar sakta," said Virendra.

"Vaise ye gehno ki dukaan kaun hai?" asked 3rd khunkar and laughed with other khunkars.

"Agar aap sab ka bakwaas ho gaya hai to main jaati hu," said CK.

She turned to go but Viru held her hand to stop her.

"Tum yaha se nahi jaogi," said Viru.

She pulled her hand and pushed him.

"Main jaa rahi hu," said Ck and turned to go again.

Viru held her hand and made her sit on a chair in the corner. He started tying her hands.

"Tumne mera liye koi aur raasta nahi chhoda," said Viru as he finished tying her legs and said to his friends, "Iska acchhe se dhyaan rakhna. Ye yaha se dobaara bhaagni nahi chaahiye."

His friends nodded.

"Maine tumhe apna dost samjha aur tum ye sab kar rahe ho," said CK.

"Tumhaara dost main abhi hu isliye to maine tumhe yaha laaya," said Viru.

"Jhoot," shouted CK, "Tum mujhse uss din ke liye badla lena chaahte ho jo maine tumhaare saath kaidkhaane me kiya isliye to mujhe yaha pareshaan karne ke liye laaye ho, Virendra."

Viru was hurt with her accusation as well as her calling him Virendra instead of Viru.

"Mujhe tumse badla lena rehta to main tumhe Shiv Dutt se shaadi karne se nahi rokta tha. Isse bada kya badla hota tha mera tumhaare saath, Chandrakanta," said Viru.

His friends were shocked to know that she is Chandrakanta.

"To ye hai Chandrakanta, Vijaygarh ki rajkumaari," said one of the khunkars.

"Virendra, kholo mujhe," said CK.

"Tum Chandrakanta hi ho ki koi aur ho kyunki jiss Chandrakanta ko main jaanta tha usme aatma-sammaan tha. Tum vo Chandrakanta ho hi nahi sakti jo ek ghatiya aadmi se shaadi kare. Lagta hai tumhe Navgarh ki Nagarvadhu banne ka intezar hai," said Viru.

CK was hurt and disgusted with his last line.

"Virendra, chup ho jao. Ye kya bakwaas kar rahe ho?" shouted CK angrily.

"Sach kadwa hota hai. Main bakwaas nahi sahi keh raha hu. Jai Aditya ne mujhe ye baat bataayi. Tumhe apni zindagi barbaad nahi karni chaahiye," replied Viru calmly.

"Aur tum kya kar rahe ho mujhe khunkhaaron ke beech laakar? Mujhe yaha nahi rehna hai. Mujhe yaha se jaane do," said CK and struggled against her bonds.

"Maaf karna, tumhe yahi rehna padega aaj raat," said Viru.

"Virendra," came a girl's noise.

Viru turned to look at her. A beautiful girl wearing a blue crop and blue skirt came to him. CK looked at the girl and was shocked. She kept looking at her unbelievably.

"Kisi ladki ke saath aise vyavhaar karte hai kya? Use aise baandh ke kyun rakha hai? Tumhe kya ho gaya hai?" asked the girl unhappily, "Hum sab aise nahi hai. Kholo ise abhi."

"Main nahi khol sakta ise nahi to ye bhaagkar uss Shiv Dutt se shaadi karegi," replied Viru.

"Virendra, ye galat hai," said the girl and untied CK's hands and legs.

"Main tumse Virendra ke taraf se maafi maangti hu. Mera naam Ragini hai. Main Raghav ki chhoti behen hu," said the girl pointing to one of the khunkhars.

CK only kept looking at her.

"Jab mujhe pata chala ki yaha ek ladki aayegi to maine tumhaare liye ek karma taiyaar rakha hai. Tumhe ye kapde aur gehne bhaari lag rahe honge. Tum almaari se koi bhi kapda pehen sakti hu. Maine mere kuch kapde rakhe hai vaha," said Ragini with a smile.

"Chalo," said CK but in her mid she planned to run.

Ragini took her to a room which was big and beautiful.

"Ye hai tumhaara karma aur ye tumhaari almari," said Ragini.

CK simply went to the window and was about to run but Ragini held her hand.

"Tum yaha se nahi jaa sakti," said Ragini.

"Tum rokogi mujhe?" asked CK and pushed her.

"Haan," replied Ragini.

"Main yaha se jaakar hi rahungi," said CK.

"Tum nahi jaogi," said Ragini and pushed her back.

"Dekhti hu tum mujhe kaise rokti ho," said CK and pushed her on the bed.

Before CK could reach the window again, Ragini held her from the back and pushed her against the wall. CK moved forward and pushed her on the floor. As CK walked towards the window, Ragini who was still on the floor pulled CK's feet making her fall on the floor near her.

"Tum mujhe jaane kyu nahi deti ho?" asked CK pulling Ragini's hairs.

By this time, Viru and his friends came hearing the arguments and were shocked to see both the girls fighting on the floor with CK pulling Ragini's hairs. CK stood up and making Ragini stand by pulling her hairs. CK pushed Ragini against the wall and tried to run again. None of the girls noticed the men standing at the door. While CK was running at the window, Ragini stepped on the flowing train of her lehenga making her trip and fall down on the floor. Ragini came on top of her and removed a dagger from the scabbard of her skirt. She pointed the dagger at her to scare her. CK caught both her hands and pushed the dagger out of her hand.

"Tum bahot sundar ho. Agar tumne muje yaha se jaane nahi diya to tumhaare chehra ko ek hafte ke liye chand me daagwala chand ka chehra bana dungi," threatened CK.

"Main darr gayi," said Ragini and laughed.

They got up and held each other's hands trying to push each other down.

"Tum dono ladkiyan apni kushti band karo," said Raghav.

"Bhaiyya, isne shuruvaat ki hai. Ye khidki se bhaag rahi thi," said Ragini.

She signalled the men something with her eyes. 2 men came to them.

"Pakdo isse," said Ragini pushed CK and those 2 men held her hands.

"Chhodo mujhe, tum sab paagal ho," said CK.

"Tumhaare andar bahot gussa hai jo tum galat insaan ko dikha rahi ho. Jiska gussa hai tum usiko dikhao. Agli baar ladaai itne bhaari kapdon aur gehnon me mat karna," laughed Ragini.

CK pulled out her hands from the men's hold and grabbed Ragini's collars.

"Main tumhe nahi chhodungi," said CK while shaking her.

The men caught her hands again this time more tightly. Ragini picked her dagger from the floor and came near CK. Viru and his other friends were shocked.

Ragini pulled her hair and said, "Maine kaha tha na tum nahi jaogi."

She smirked and placed the dagger on her neck as she said with a taunt, "Sher ke gufe(cave) me hi unse ladna bewakoofi hoti hai. Lagta hai tum bhool gayi ki tum kaha ho."

Ragini puts her dagger away from her neck. CK had a look of hurt in her eyes as stared at Ragini and then at Viru. CK struggled to free herself in vain.

"Akele aur nihatte(unarmed) ko taakat dikhaana bahot aasaan hota hai. Tumhaare saath yaha tumhaari toli hai isliye tum bahot udd rahi ho," taunted back CK.

"Chhodo ise," said Ragini.

The men left her.

"Tum bahot acchhi ho isliye tumhe bahot acchha kamra diya hai. Dobaara bhaagne ki koshish ki to tumhe kaidkhaane me zanjeeron me baandhkar band karva dungi," threatened Ragini.

Instead of getting angry, she was controlling her tears. Ragini and Viru saw it.

"Chalo yaha se," said Ragini to Viru and his friends.

Ragini and the men went outside.

"Yaha se bhaagna mat," said Ragini and shut the room from outside.

CK stood at her place looking hurt. Others went outside.

"Ragini, kuch jyaada nahi tha ye?" asked Viru.

"Nahi," replied Ragini coolly

Viru's friends got back to doing their work of sharpening their weapons while Viru sat in a corner after giving Ragini a furious look. Ragini went to him and had a smile on her face.

"Virendra," said Ragini with a smile.

Viru did not looked at her as he did not liked her smiling after troubling CK.

I am Juhi. In this story, CK will have several secrets hidden which will surprise Virendra but impress him as she will not be what she shows. Jai Aditya will be positive who will trick CK letting Viru kidnap her while saying that he don't want her to do any stupidity like he did and lost his love. I am trying something on this show. I usually write for AsYa of Qubool Hai and in the past wrote on all the main lead couples of The Buddy Project. I am trying on ChaVi for the 1st time. Hope it turns okay. Who is Ragini? Why she is smiling at Viru?
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Arie wahh wahh Juhi... awesome keep coming with brilliant chapters. Looking forward to read more re... Is shivu also part of your FF? Please let my beloved shivu be a part too 😆😛


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Yes he is but he will come later due to a twist in the story in the beginning itself
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Love to read cute fight between chavi
But i am laughing during ck or ragini fight

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Awesome awesome, looking forward to reading more good luck 😃


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Love to read cute fight between chavi

But i am laughing during ck or ragini fight

Agar aisa scene aaye to viru ke kya reaction honge
Viru ck se kahega mujhe ni ladna tumse tum baal khechti ho hahahahaha
Ragini or raghav interesting character


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