ChaVi FF- Part 18(B) Updated on Page 30 on 27th Sep - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Are baap re ye to mast hai yaar...
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.yaha to viru ka patta hi cut ho gaya ...poora footage to girls hi le gayi...
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.lol viru sochega ...iss story mein bhala hero mein hoon ya nahi...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Are baap re ye to mast hai yaar...

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.yaha to viru ka patta hi cut ho gaya ...poora footage to girls hi le gayi...
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.lol viru sochega ...iss story mein bhala hero mein hoon ya nahi...


Viru bhi bahot dikhega kyuki vo hero jo hai

Relax, ye sirf prologue hai
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wa agar prologue itna dhamakedar hai to update litna jabardat hoga
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Teaser 1

Mareech feels uneasy regarding his son Shiv Dutt. He can't even tell Pandit Jagannath to show him Shiv Dutt in his CCTV as Viru had taken away Ratnagarbha and hid her somewhere. He still insists PJ to somehow show him Shiv Dutt. PJ chants some mantras and a screen comes on the wall. Mareech is shocked as he sees Shiv Dutt lying unconscious in a jungle with some stabbing marks on his body. He then tells PJ to show him Viru and CK but PJ could not show them as Mareech will be only able to see footage of his own blood relative not others. Mareech rushes to the jungle along PJ. He is horrified to see Shiv Dutt in such a wounded state.

"Pandit Jagannath, mere putra ko kya ho gaya?" asked Mareech.

PJ checks him.

"Ye zinda hai par inhe thik hone me aur hosh aane me kaafi din lagega," replied PJ.

"Ek baar ye hosh me aa jaaye aur mera putra bata de ki uski ye haalat kisne ki to main uss insaan ko jeevit nahi chhodunga," said Mareech in a loud voice.

Scene shifts to CK who changed into a grey crop top and black skirt. She wore wide silver cuff bracelets on both her hands and a thin kamarband chain on her bare belly. She wore kajal in her eyes along with smokey eye shadows. She then coloured her lips bright red.

"Chalo, khaana kha le," said Ragini.

"Main unn khunkhaaron ke saath baithkar khaana nahi khaaungi," said CK.

"Vo tumhe khaa nahi jaayenge," said Ragini.

"Thik hai chalo," said CK.

The girls went outside. They walked in style as they the entered the room where men were there. Viru is awestruck looking at CK while she gave him an annoyed stare.

"Hum sab ko acchha laga ki tum khaane ko aayi," said Viru.

"Main bhi insaan hu. Muje bhi bhook lagti hai, Virendra," said CK.

Viru was amused by what she said but was again hurt at her calling him Virendra not Viru.

"Tum iss get up me female khunkhar lag rahi ho khaas karke ye kapdon ke colours me," said Viru.

"Shut up," said CK.

"Maine galat kya kaha?" asked Viru.

"Jaroori hai sirf khunkhar aise colours ke kapde pehente?" asked CK.

"Arey haan, naagin bhi aise kapde pehente," joked Viru and laughed.

Others too laughed while CK stared at Viru irritatatingly.

"Main naagin rehti na to main sabse pehle Shiv Dutt ko dasti thi," blurted out CK suddenly.

Others were stunned wondering why she wanted to marry SD if she hates him.



Who attempted to kill Shiv Dutt? How come Chandrakanta and Ragini are at peace? I will use some words and dialogues in english as its hard to write everything in shudh hindi.

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Lol chavi and english is just awesome yaar
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Lol chavi and english is just awesome yaar


I am used to writing mostly in english as its easy even if grammar is not fully right. Shudh hindi me likhna bahut bhaari padta hai yaar. In Chhota Bheem cartoon too, english words are used😆.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Thank u😊

CK ka mann Viru ka bhi baal kheenchne ko kar raha tha gusse me par bechaari khunkhaaron ka group dekh ke darr gayi ki vo log uska Chandrakanta Tandoori na bana de😆

Viru CK se darega ki kahi vo uska hairstyle na kharaab kar de🤣

Hahahahaha viru ka big hath mai aa jayega
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hahahahaha again best dialogue
Mai bhi insan hoon mujhe bhi bhoonk lagti hai
And best part
Kewal blood relation ko live dekh sakte hai na ki others

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Posted: 8 years ago
#19
Interesting concept
Oops jai Aditya helped viru to kidnaped chandrakanta
Chandrakanta tried to free herself but viru is more strong then she
When chandrakanta called him virendra not viru it's hurt him
Somewhere viru is right why the hell chandrakanta agreed to marry such a horrible jerk ass shivdatt
Loll ragini & chandrakanta fight I couldn't stop my laugh
So shivdatt is marich son but who tried to kill him?
Continue plz
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey juhi...
This was marvellous update and teaser...
V and CK's fighting...what is nagarvadhu...??
Ragini khukhaar girl...she is right don't you dare CK you are in lions den...rajkumari chandrakanta k nakhare uff...yaar khukhaar always black hi kyu pehente hai...They don't like colours...
Please continue soon...love this...btw I also love buddy project and QH...

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