ChaVi FF- Part 18(B) Updated on Page 30 on 27th Sep - Page 11

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Posted: 8 years ago
wow juhi both parts was amazing...i don't understand itni superb story ko zyada likes or comments kyu nahi mill rahe hai 😒...sad I don't like this... 🥱

Smartly CK kill shyamla...CK try to convince her but stupid shyamla she can't understand and still believe her liched husband to fir bhugto...bicchu kanya don't mess with rajkumari Chandrakanta she is more dangerous than you...😉

Back to second part...
Finally RG meet CK...very emotional reunion of mother daughter duo...RG feel bad for CK she is not with her when she need her mother more but happy to see how Virendra take care of CK, after knowing tejsingh help her Chandrakanta still hate him..??? And JA if he loves ragini then why he told her that bitter words...devgiri bechara jab se Chandrakanta bana hai sab uski taang khichne main lage hai... First V now champa thank god she believe him and ready to help him...sword fighting practice was awesome and precap to super se bhi uper hai...yaar Koi to V or CK ka romantic scene do...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Hahahaha once again beautiful update
Kitni ajeeb hai ye. Tilchatta(cockroach in hindi) se darke chillaati hai par bicchu se ladna jaanti hai. Bhagwan ka shukar hai bicchu tumhe kaat nahi paayi, said Viru with a smile looking at her.

Hahaha
This conversation was hilarious

"Kuch jyaada hi sochte hai. Aaj main unke saamne rajkumari ke roop me gaya to mujhe ghoorte hi jaa rahe the aur poochhne par bole ki unhone rajkumari ko pehli baar usi kapdon me dekha tha. Unke chehre ka expression ab tak yaad hai mujhe, said Devgiri.

Champa started laughing at this.

"Tum has kyu rahi ho? asked Devgiri embarrassingly.

"Ye soch kar ki tumhaari kya haalat huvi hogi jab rajkumar tumhe ghoor rahe the, replied Champa still laughing, "Tumhaare to hosh hi udd gaye honge.

Everything is perfect

Continue...

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Posted: 8 years ago
Important Note:

1. My dear readers, I made this post to let you all know that I will be making few changes in this story for which I will have to even edit some lines from previous parts of this story. In yesterday's episode, Mayur's name was actually mentioned as Mayuk and he is not really a kid but old enough to marry a girl. So I will make changes with showing CK's physical fight with her step-mother Mayuk. Mayuk will not be much strong like Viru and SD but okay type enough for CK to match with him in fighting without spiking his drink. Remember, how she fought with Naugarh's senapati which was really unbelievable and I really don't believe it was her first time for fighting or that she never picked any weapons before that.

2. In this way, it will be easy for me show what to do with Mayuk instead of thinking like earlier on what I will ultimately do with a 12 year old kid. There will be no dilemma for me whether to show him change into a good person or let him remain evil.

3. There will be decrease in numbers of love letters that CK will get from people to marry as it was shown in the first episode. Now very less people will want to marry her as people from several kingdom will actually think her as an villain to put her stepmother and step-brother in jail(and may be kill them which I have not decided till now) and her own father in nazarbandh to become a queen and not to forget her friendship with Virendra's team of khunkhaars(another team of khunkhaars is of Marich). Still several people will still hope to marry her but obviously only 2 men will come forward to marry her that is Virendra and Shiv Dutt- one due to loves her and the other for revenge and destroying her.

I hope you all like these idea for changes😊
Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Muje bhi kal hi Pata chala his name is mayuk and his letter to his mom he want to marry a girl who he loves...to obviously he is mature...oohh come on you wrote anything I always love...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Yes i like the ideas
Continue please
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: zyrah17


Ck RG scene was really emotional Yes it was

awesome update Thank u😊

devgiri and champa scene was really funny poor devgiri He is really tired acting as CK😆

thanks for the pm Welcome😃
countinue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse


wow juhi both parts was amazing...i don't understand itni superb story ko zyada likes or comments kyu nahi mill rahe hai 😒...sad I don't like this... 🥱
Thank u😊
Here there are hardly any active people. Also if you see in majority forum then you will the stories where heroes torture heroines gets more response than stories like this.

Smartly CK kill shyamla...CK try to convince her but stupid shyamla she can't understand and still believe her liched husband to fir bhugto...bicchu kanya don't mess with rajkumari Chandrakanta she is more dangerous than you...😉
CK would have spared her if she listened to her but she kept on blaming her, saying her dirty words and trying to kill her so CK had to kill her to save herself

Back to second part...
Finally RG meet CK...very emotional reunion of mother daughter duo...RG feel bad for CK she is not with her when she need her mother more but happy to see how Virendra take care of CK,
CK will now make sure that she and her mother will get everything they deserve. Viru will always help her. CK too will always help him when needed.

after knowing tejsingh help her Chandrakanta still hate him..???
In this part, she did not said anything bad for Tej Singh and JA but her hate for Tej Singh was justified as he exposed Viru due to which he would have been killed publicly if she had not saved him and he brought proposal of her marriage with that monster Shiv Dutt

And JA if he loves ragini then why he told her that bitter words...
There is more what JA's insults whose hint can be seen in the 1st part

devgiri bechara jab se Chandrakanta bana hai sab uski taang khichne main lage hai... First V now champa thank god she believe him and ready to help him...
Devgiri is really tired of acting as CK.vChampa is happy that CK is in the safe hands.

sword fighting practice was awesome and precap to super se bhi uper hai...
This sword practice will be of more use later

yaar Koi to V or CK ka romantic scene do...
Its too early to give any romantic scenes but I gave their dancing scene earlier and also their many conversations with each other especially in this part😃

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: superdil19


Hahahaha once again beautiful update Thank u
Kitni ajeeb hai ye. Tilchatta(cockroach in hindi) se darke chillaati hai par bicchu se ladna jaanti hai. Bhagwan ka shukar hai bicchu tumhe kaat nahi paayi, said Viru with a smile looking at her.

Hahaha
This conversation was hilarious

"Kuch jyaada hi sochte hai. Aaj main unke saamne rajkumari ke roop me gaya to mujhe ghoorte hi jaa rahe the aur poochhne par bole ki unhone rajkumari ko pehli baar usi kapdon me dekha tha. Unke chehre ka expression ab tak yaad hai mujhe, said Devgiri.

Champa started laughing at this.

"Tum has kyu rahi ho? asked Devgiri embarrassingly.

"Ye soch kar ki tumhaari kya haalat huvi hogi jab rajkumar tumhe ghoor rahe the, replied Champa still laughing, "Tumhaare to hosh hi udd gaye honge.

Everything is perfect

Continue...


Thank u😊
Viru is drawn to CK more day by day😃
Devgiri ki haalat kharab ho rahi hai CK ka acting kar karke😆
Champa bechaare ka mazaak uda rahi hai🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Muje bhi kal hi Pata chala his name is mayuk and his letter to his mom he want to marry a girl who he loves...to obviously he is mature...oohh come on you wrote anything I always love...


I think either the cvs for got the name or they found Mayur name less classical so changed it
If I have motivation then I can write well😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: superdil19

Yes i like the ideas

Continue please


Thank u😊

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