ChaVi FF- Part 18(B) Updated on Page 30 on 27th Sep - Page 3

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Modern take on CK... 👏 Please continue
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: SHINYSHREYA

nyc start
plz continue soon


Thank u😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: superdil19


Hahahahaha again best dialogue
Mai bhi insan hoon mujhe bhi bhoonk lagti hai
I tried to show something natural instead of CK doing bhook hadtal

And best part
Kewal blood relation ko live dekh sakte hai na ki others
Kuch to drawbacks dikhaana hi padega na kyunki Mareech humesha nahi jeet sakta aur Mareech ChaVi ka fort me tu tu main main dekhkar coma me chala jaayega😆

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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: cuteariya


Interesting concept Thank u😊

Oops jai Aditya helped viru to kidnaped chandrakanta I wanted to show at least one person helpful from Naugarh and I feel Jai Aditya will become positive later

Chandrakanta tried to free herself but viru is more strong then she
2nd episode to dekha hi hoga ki Viru ne Maan Singh jaise senapati ko kitne buri tarah haraaya to CK kya par aayegi? Vo to Shiv Dutt ke senapati ke saamne sirf 5-6 minute akele tik paayi thi which was really a huge thing and her defending skills were mind blowing.

When chandrakanta called him virendra not viru it's hurt him
Virendra ko khud hi naam se hurt hota hai jab CK uss naam se use bulaati hai. Use CK ke muh se sirf Viru sunne ki aadat lag gayi hai. He wants to hear Viru again from her.

Somewhere viru is right why the hell chandrakanta agreed to marry such a horrible jerk ass shivdatt
That Naugarh dialogue was hurtful but he needed to put some sense in her and be the same Chandrakanta with self-respect like earlier. Even I did not liked how cvs showed CK agreeing to marry SD after so much but I will change some of the things in this story.

Loll ragini & chandrakanta fight I couldn't stop my laugh
Wonder the mens' reaction seeing their catfight😆

So shivdatt is marich son but who tried to kill him?
Shiv Dutt itni jaldi nahi marega😆. You will be surprised to know who tried to kill him.

Continue plz

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse


Hey juhi...
This was marvellous update and teaser...
Thank u😊

V and CK's fighting...what is nagarvadhu...??
Bechaari CK ko Viru ne uthaakar khunkhaaron ke beech laaya. Gussa to hogi na vo. I made a post on Nagarvadhu a couple of days ago. Click this link to know Nagarvadhu .

Ragini khukhaar girl...she is right don't you dare CK you are in lions den...rajkumari chandrakanta k nakhare uff...yaar khukhaar always black hi kyu pehente hai...They don't like colours...
Ragini is not a khunkhar girl but sister of a khunkar. There was a reason Ragini said that Lion's den dialogue to CK. Don't know why khunkhaar always wears black. But Ragini was wearing blue. Its only CK who seems to be following their style in a feminine way😆.

Please continue soon...love this...btw I also love buddy project and QH...
TBP was a different show but did not watched it in the last 2 months of that show because it became boring after Piddi getting married. QH was just like any Gul's show.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank u😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_juhi04


Next time kuch words aur dialogues english me likhungi. Shudh hindi bahot bhaari padta hai😆. Maine dekha ki tune apna story poora english me likha hai.


I thought of writing in hindi but I did not have the patience, I just went for english LOL the main reason was I had written that story six months back and it was in english ab usko hindi mein kaun translate kare yaar 😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I just read your teaser LOL it is funny...Viru kaise sweetly CK ko pata raha hai hai 😆.
Mere pyaare shivu ko tumne kya kardiya 😭 whyyy is he hurt 😭😆😆. But keep shivu positive yaar kahin toh banda positive ho usko ragini ke sath pair kardo LOL
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zyrah17

Fentastic
plzzz countinue soon


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Detox

Modern take on CK... 👏 Please continue


It's not a modern take but wrote only few words and dialogues in english as it's very hard to write everything in shudh hindi and it also takes a lot of time.

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