ChaVi FF- Part 18(B) Updated on Page 30 on 27th Sep - Page 13

Originally posted by: zyrah17

Awesome good job
very interesting
let's see who marry chandrakanta ?
countinue soon

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Very interesting chapter maza aagaya Thank u😊

Wow chandrakanta is chupa rustam she hide her talent very well

Everyone so amazed knowing what chandrakanta did & were really proud of her

Still she will take time to become a warrior

Poor devgiri had tried of wearing chandrakanta short dresses

But he really cares for CK's well being and life😊

Wow what a plan chandrakanta made it to trapped kamini & mayunk

I just love how devgiri scared kamini in chandrakanta get up

Love kamini scared & shocked face

Kamini will get more doses in the next sub-part😆

Even chandrakanta father want her to be yuvrani of vijaygarh

Yes he wants her to be yuvrani but CK lost her trust in him due to SD's case

Chavi ck mom ragini laughed when they sad kamini scared face

They are getting free ka entertainment😆

Precap look interesting

Kamini aur Mayuk ki aur band bajeji😉

Ouch chavi didn't see that bloody monster shivdatt they just missed it

If ChaVi had seen him they would have killed him there only and SD being one of the main villains can't die so easily and early. He will surely play a big game later.

Continue plz

Originally posted by: superdil19

Beautiful update Thank u😊

Vo latest fashion hai, Devgiri. Tum ladke nahi samjhoge, said Chandrakanta.

Hahaha

Devgiri is hilarious

Poor guy is tired of wearing CK's clothes and jewelleries😆

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Hey bhagwan meine kitna kuch miss kar diya...gosh...my schedule huhhh

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I really want to clap for you dear kya kamal ka likha hai har ek part mujhe kheech kheech ke ck ke duniya mein le gaya ..and seriously aisa lag raha hai ke meine time travel kiya ho...ye feeling hi awesome hai...

Thank u😊. Qubool Hai forum itna stories likhkar thoda practice ho gaya hai.

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Haye kamini ka wo dara huva chehra with big big eyes..kamal hai yaar..

She will get more doses in the next sub-part😆

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Ck to ek no. Ki chupi rustam nikali...the way she killed all 10 people is just speechless.

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And among all this tandav of killing people she is true human being jo apne dost ke liye fikar karti hai...uska ye gesture mujhe bahot pasand aaya...

Still as I mentioned I did not showed her too much powerful now as it will be illogical but in future she will become more powerful with lots of practice. She cared for Champa-Chapla from Mayuk and his friends' evil eyes, saved Champa-Chapla's life from SD and then even got concerned for Devgiri when he ate the poisoned food to keep their secret. She even went to Marich's place with Viru for him not caring how dangerous that place is.

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And viru he is so cute...want to know each and every detail about his girl 😉 ...and usaki iss khubi ne usaki sasu ma ka bhi dil jeet liya...awww

Viru is always like tumne kisko aur kaise maara😆. RG is shipping for him and CK😃.

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And now ragini...yepiii meine jo socha tha wo sach huva...lekin usake liye ek aur thought dimag mein aa raha hai...mujhe ragini...old ck mein ko jo sadhya thi na waisa lag raha hai...jaise sabhya ne chot khayi thi sd ki vajah se wase hi shayad ragini ne bhi saha hai sd ke vajah se...

Maine old Chandrakanta nahi dekha hai. JA aur Ragini ka back story bahot common hai jo thoda sochne pe samajh jaayega. Iska thoda hint 1st part me hi hai.

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Mujhe na tumhari story kuch kuch the immortals of meluha ke jaisa laga...story nahi lekin story writing style...jaise ek old story ko new and language mein likha ho...just awesome

Maine vo book nahi padha hai. Par vo to Shiv Bhagwan ka story hai na?

Originally posted by: superdil19

Hahahaha

Brilliant

"Main tumhe ab se Chandra bulaaunga, said Viru with a smile, "Jaise tum mujhe Virendra ka Viru bulaati ho vaise hi main tumhe Chandrakanta ka Chandra bulaaunga.

Cute lines

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Omg this is seriously just awesome

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Mujhe to bada maza aaya isse pdhate waqt..kamini and mayuk ki vaat lagate dekh..

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Awesome hai yaar love it

Originally posted by: cuteariya

I totally enjoyed how chandrakanta torture kamini & mayuk

That was a brilliant idea

Very much enjoyed kamini & mayuk scared of chandrakanta

1st they were tortured by Devgiri and then CK herself😆

Hell that mayuk brought his friends to kill chandrakanta champa & chapla

But they were strong enough to kill all of them

That time it was Devgiri instead of CK. They left Mayuk alive but scared him.

Wow finally virendra got to hear viru from chandrakanta & that's made him very much happy

Awe even viru start calling chandrakanta as Chandra

It will be lovely to hear them calling these names to each other😃

Oh hell that bloody kamini how dare she slapped & insults chandrakanta in front of everyone

But later she took her revenge from that kamini very well bravo

Kamini ne sabke saamne khud ki bezzati karva di apna popat karke. CK is not someone to be quiet after being insulted and beaten by Kamini so she later showed Kamini her place.

Yippee finally the day have arrived & now chandrakanta is queen of vijaygarh

Seriously nobody had any answe when she asked questions

I really don't understand why CK's family and Vijaygarh people don't had problem with CK's marriage with SD but they insulted Viru very badly forgetting all his good deeds.

Even naugarh families were speechless

They are going to get a dose from CK

Hope soon chavi will find viru real family

CK will help Viru find his real family unaware that his real family is Naugarh family

Continue plz

Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

I'm very much enjoyed Chandrakanta's tortures on mayuk and kamini...they deserve this... Fir bhi sudhrenge nahi...

Kamini and Mayuk messed with the wrong girl😆

Chandrakanta improve her skill day by day...impressive...

No doubt she is beauty with Brian.., chnadra very nice given by Virendra and yes he is happy to heard viru from CK..

She will take time to become a warrior but still she will find it very tough to fight with people like SD. It will be lovely to hear them calling each other by these names😃.

Well finally Chandrakanta become maharani of vijaygadh...

CK is temporarily maharani before RG takes the place

Naughadh has no shame naa vapas aa gaye...

CK will give them a dose

i hope RG find Virendra's family soon...shayad sab tab hi Theek ho...

CK too will help Viru find his real family😊

Ooh I'm looking forward for JA and ragini's relationship wo kya mode leti hai...

JA seems to had some majboori to hurt Ragini but now he is regretting doing that

And yeah I forgot to say SD still want to marry Chandrakanta for revenge...ufff kya Karu main iss ka...

SD is one of the main villains so he will be there till the end

I love your writing so much you are fab...love you...

Thank u again😃