ChaVi FF- Part 18(B) Updated on Page 30 on 27th Sep - Page 8

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bichara devgiri sahi time bol diya me ck nahi hu warna pata nahi kya ho jata
superb update
countinue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#72
Shiv dutt he is really khunkhar and marich son...
Khatiye(bed) pe pade pade bhi use chain nahi...
Yeah CK is very intelligent but viru bhi kuch Kim nahi...
I love both updates...fabulous yaar...

"Devgiri, said Viru and kept looking at him.

"Aap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho? asked Devigiri.

"Chandrakanta ko main pehle baar isi kapde me dekha tha, replied Viru controlling his shyness.

"Rajkumarji, main rajkumari Chandrakanta nahi aapka aiyyaar Devgiri hu, said Devgiri embarrassingly and coming in his original form...

This was hilarious...🤣

Ragini become cupid for chavi...i like chavis moment...chalo achha hai CK ne khud hi khukharo ko sab kuch bats dia...viru must be proud of her...sorry for late reply dear...

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Posted: 8 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: superdil19

Hahahahaha again hilarious

SD starts feeling uneasy at CK's name.

He recalls Chandrakanta stabbing him on their dinner date twice while saying Tujhe kya laga ki main tujh jaise psycho se shaadi karungi ha? Bahot bardaasht kar liya tujhe. Aaj tujhe marna hi padega. In fact, tujhe bahot pehle hi marr jaana chaahiye tha, neech insaan Shiv Dutt'. SD feels more uneasy and start


Coma mai hai par sudhra nahi

Kutte ki dum aaj tak seedhi huvi hai kya?😡


Or viru - tumhe koi or na mila date ke liye

Viru geting jealous of ShivAnta dinner date😆


Devgiri become very intelligent

He is one of the best aiyyaars😊

Waiting for next

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Posted: 8 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: kaveriw2008


🤣 🤣 ohh god i just can't stop my laughing yaar...
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.bechara dev to sach mein dara gaya hoga...jitna dar usse kamini se nahi laga usse jyada usse vitu se laga hoga...haye viru ki wo katil nazaren...ladakiyon ko sharma deti hai lekin ladakon ki to halat kharab ho jaati hai...lol..
Vijaygarh me ladkiyon ke beech fasa hai aur Chunargarh me Viru use ghoor raha hai🤣.
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Wo kahawat suni hogi na...
'Rassi jal gayi lekin bal nahi gaya'...perfect for sd...death bed pe hai lekin abhi bhi ck ke khilaf evil soch raha...sudhar ja...agar ck teri ye halat kar sakati hai to viru kya kya kar sakta hai...dekh tera baap bhi darta hai viru se...lol.
Ek aur kahaavat suna hai- Kutte ki dum kabhi seedhi nahi hoti hai😡. This time if this lecher hurts CK then he will not only have to face CK but also Viru.
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I want to ask u kya ragini and JA ka koi scene hai kya ...
There was a hint in the 1st part only😉
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Lekin jo bhi i just love this stoey yaar...kya kamal ka likha hai...pura fevicol ka jod daal daal ke likha hai lagta hai...ek baar jo chipak jaaye wo chutata hi nahi...
Glad you are liking it😃

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: zyrah17

Bichara devgiri sahi time bol diya me ck nahi hu warna pata nahi kya ho jata
superb update
countinue soon


Viru even forgot that he danced with real CK just a moment ago🤣
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse


Shiv dutt he is really khunkhar and marich son...
Khatiye(bed) pe pade pade bhi use chain nahi...
Yeah CK is very intelligent but viru bhi kuch Kim nahi...
I love both updates...fabulous yaar...
Shiv Dutt will surely plan something dangerous for CK but this time he will not only face CK but also Viru. He is still in disbelief that he was nearly killed by 3 women.

"Devgiri, said Viru and kept looking at him.

"Aap mujhe aise kyu dekh rahe ho? asked Devigiri.

"Chandrakanta ko main pehle baar isi kapde me dekha tha, replied Viru controlling his shyness.

"Rajkumarji, main rajkumari Chandrakanta nahi aapka aiyyaar Devgiri hu, said Devgiri embarrassingly and coming in his original form...

This was hilarious...🤣

Viru even forgot that he danced with real CK just a moment ago🤣


Ragini become cupid for chavi...i like chavis moment...chalo achha hai CK ne khud hi khukharo ko sab kuch bats dia...viru must be proud of her...sorry for late reply dear...

Ragini doubted in the 1st part itself that Viru loves her. CK knows that they too hate SD so she can tell them. Its okay dear😊. At least reply to kiya😃.

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Teaser 3: Chandrakanta, The New Maharani Of Vijaygarh

Jai Singh, Kamini and Mayur comes in the main hall and are shocked to see CK sitting on the ruler's throne in a black dress wearing a small crown and holding a sword in her hand.

"Chandrakanta, ye kya hai? Tum maharaj ke jagah kyu baithi ho? asked Kamini shockingly.

"Kaunsa maharaj? Kaisa maharaj? Yaha koi maharaj nahi. Yaha sirf maharani hai, maharani Chandrakanta. Humne aapke pati ka taktha palat kar diya hai, replied CK with a smile.

The trio as well as others are shocked. Just then, Viru enters with some khunkhaars and also Ragini who was covering her face with a scarf like other khunkhaars.

"Maharani Chandrakanta ki jai ho, said Viru bowing his head.

"Apne dost ke saamne sir nahi jhukaate hai, Viru, said CK with a smile and came to him.

"Chandrakanta, tum hume dhokha kaise de sakti ho? asked Jai Singh shockingly.

"Dhokha maine nahi, dhokha aap sab ne mujhe diya hai mere shaadi Shiv Dutt ke saath dobaara tay karne ke liye itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi. Aap log meri shaadi Shiv Dutt se karvaane chaahte the na to maine socha ki hum bhi thoda Shiv Dutt banle aapka taktha palat karke. Chowkne ki jarurat nahi, Jai Singhji. Aapko laga ki maharaj Surendra Singh isliye nahi aaye kyunki unki tabeeyat thik nahi hai. Par sach baat ye hai ki unhe unke khud ke bete Shiv Dutt ne taktha palat karke karavaas me dalva diya hai, replied CK.

"Tum apne pitaji se aise kaise baat kar sakti ho? asked Kamini raising her voice, "Tumne Virendra aur baaki khunkhaaron ke saath milkar humse gaddaari ki.

"Maine apne pitaji se baat kar rahi hu. Baaharwaalon ko beech me bolne ki jarurat nahi hai. Aur ha, mujhse oonchi awaaz me baat mat kar. Gaddaari maine nahi tune ki hai, Kamini. Jiss Shiv Dutt se main nafrat karti hu tune mujhe uski daasi banne ke liye emotional blackmail karne ki koshish ki jab Naugarh ka senapati mujhe lene aaya tha. Jaise hi maine tere pati ka takht na sambhaala tujhe takleef hone lagi. Tune ye bhi nahi socha ki main takht par kyun baithi hu aur mujhpar kya kya khatra hai. Tu meri shaadi Shiv Dutt se dobaara karvaana chaahti thi vo bhi uske aur Viru ke ladaayi ko 24 ghante bhi nahi huve the tab. Ab meri shaadi kya tooti ki tu aur Mayur mujhe roj thoda thoda zeher dekar maarne ki saazish karne lage, replied CK firmly.

"Ye kya bakwaas hai? asked Kamini in a scared and angry tone.

"Mere paas bahot saboot hai tum dono ke khilaaf, replied CK, "Agar abhi aur jhoot bola to main tum dono ka vo haal karungi ki tum dono maut ke liye tarsoge.

Mayur being a kid got very scared.

"Didi, hume maaf kar do, said Mayur in a scared tone and started crying.

"Main teri koi didi nahi hu. Dekha aap sab logo ne ki humaare mahal me kaise kaise log hai, said CK aloud shocking others especially Jai Singh who looked at Kamini and Mayur angrily.

"Wah Jai Singh Ji! Aap mujhe uss din bahot kuch suna rahe the lekin aap to khud ki apni beti ke dushman nikle. Aapko sirf apni dossri biwi aur aapki doosri aulaad pyaare hai, said Viru.

"Humne kuch nahi kiya hai. Ye jhoot bol rahi hai, shouted Kamini, "Sipahiyon, ise aur khunkhaaron ko karavaas me daal do. Ye khunkhaaron se mil gayi hai.

None of the soldiers moved a bit.

"Suna nahi tum logon ne maine kya kaha, shouted Kamini but still no soldier moved.

CK started laughing along with Viru.

"Ye tumhaari baat nahi maanenge, Kamini. Tu ab maharani nahi rahi. Yaha ki maharani ab main hu. Dekha Jai Singhji, aapki biwi mujhe karavaas me dalva rahi thi aur aapne kuch nahi kaha. Aapne aaj saabit kar diya ki main aapke liye kuch nahi hu, said CK seriously.

Jai Singh looked at her in shock. He was about to stop Kamini but CK thought of him wrong.

"Chandrakanta, tumhaare parivaarwaale tumse chhutkaara paana chaahte hai varna kaun apni beti ko itna sab hone ke baad uss bhediye Shiv Dutt se shaadi karvaayega. Shiv Dutt ne to shaadi karne se mana kiya par ye kal tumhaara shaadi kisi doosre Shiv Dutt jaise bhediya se karva sakte hai. Zindagi baar baar nahi milti, Chandrakanta. Isliye tum inn logon ke saath rehkar apni zindagi barbaad mat karo. Main tumhe humesha khush dekhna chaahta hu, said Viru.

"Tum mujhe meri beti se door kar rahe ho, said Jai Singh.

"Door maine nahi aapne khud kiya hai aapki beti ko khud se door, said Viru.

Jai Singh was speechless and looked down in shame.

"Ab innsab baaton ka koi matlab nahi, Viru. Sipahiyon, inn dono maa-bete ko sabse andhera karavaas me zanjeeron se baandhkar daal do. Aur mere pyaare pitaji ko nazar bandh kar do. Inhe zanjeeron se mat baandhna, ordered CK and the soldiers immediately came to the trio.

"Chandrakanta, tum ye kya kar rahi ho? asked Kamini angrily.

"Jo mujhe bahot pehle tum dono maa-bete ke saath kar dena chaahiye tha, replied CK coldly.

The soldiers put chains on Kamini and Mayur.

"Didi, humaare saath aisa mat karo, pleaded Mayur with tears.

"Kaha na main teri koi didi nahi hu, said CK angrily scaring him.

Jai Singh did not even said a word as the soldiers held his hands. He looked at CK who looked away while controlling her tears. The trio were taken out of her sight. CK broke down feeling shattered. Champa and Chapla came to either of her side to comfort her.

"Main jiss Shiv Dutt se itni nafrat karti hu aaj maine usi ki tarah ban gayi, said CK in tears.

Viru came before her and puts his hands on her shoulders, "Nahi Chandrakanta, tum Shiv Dutt ki tarah nahi bani ho. Shiv Dutt aur tumhaari koi baraabari nahi hai.

CK fell in his arms and cried bitterly as he hugged her back to comfort her.

"Tumhaare saath maine itna bura kiya fir bhi tumne apni dosti nibhaayi mera saath dekar par mere khudke pitaji ne mujhe dhokha diya, said CK while still crying in his arms.

"Jo tumne uss din kiya tha uss me meri bhi galti thi par main apni dosti nibhaana tumse nahi chhod sakta hu kyunki main tumse..., Viru was about to say something but stopped suddenly.

A/N: Such a shocking teaser. Isn't it? Is CK right in whatever she did? What do you think CK will do next? Has CK really turned out to be another Shiv Dutt?

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#78
😭 poor daughter ck...
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I hope sab thik ho jaaye...
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wow
Exciting

Maharani Chandrakanta ki jai ho, said Viru bowing his head.

"Apne dost ke saamne sir nahi jhukaate hai, Viru, said CK with a smile and came to him.


Viru become chamcha


Mayur is kid


Beautifully written everything

Waiting for next

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Woah superb chandrakanta maharani ban gayi
kamini or mayur jail me wow
very excited for next

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