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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: naturesk


I just read your teaser LOL it is funny...Viru kaise sweetly CK ko pata raha hai hai 😆.
Viru even called her as female khunkhar and naagin😆

Mere pyaare shivu ko tumne kya kardiya 😭 whyyy is he hurt 😭😆😆. But keep shivu positive yaar kahin toh banda positive ho usko ragini ke sath pair kardo LOL
Don't worry, SD itna jaldi nahi marega😆. Sorry but SD can't be positive and paired with anyone. Making SD positive will be like making Raavan and Duryodhan also positive😆. He is better as negative only.

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Part 1: Mission Chandrakanta Aur Shiv Dutt Ki Shaadi Roko, Chandrakanta's Evil Plan

It was evening. The haldi was still hurting her body even after applying lep. She understood that Shiv Dutt spiked it with something to torture her. Such a bas***d he is. She went out in the evening to take a walk near a lake. As she walking she heard someone calling her from behind.

"Chandrakanta," came a man's voice.

CK looked behind to find Jai Aditya, that bas***d's paternal cousin.

"Jai Aditya tum?" asked CK.

"Haan main," replied JA, "Main tumse bas itna kehne aaya hu ki tum kal Shiv Dutt se shaadi mat karna. Vo bahot hi ghatiya insaan hai. Usne kaha ki vo shaadi ke baad tumhe Naugarh ki Nagarvadhu banaayega.Usne tumhaare haldi me sharab milaakar usme aag laga di thi tumhe takleef pahunchaane ke liye. Vo haldi ke din bhi unn ladkiyon ke saath raas-leela racha tha aur keh raha tha ki shaadi ke baad bhi vo aise hi karega. Tum please use shaadi karke apni zindagi barbaad na karo. Tum Virendra se naraaz ho par uss naraazgi ki vajah se Shiv Dutt se shaadi na karo. Tumhe yaad hai na usne tumhaare saath kya kya kiya hai? Main tumhaari madad pehle bhi karna chaahta par nahi kiya kyunki tumhaare saath Virendra tha aur mujhe yakeen tha ki Virendra sab kuch thik kar dega. Par ab Virendra yahan nahi hai to tumhe hi kuch karna padega. Kabhi kabhi hume khud ki raksha khud karni padti hai kyunki har waqt hume bachaane ke liye koi saath nahi rehta hai. Tum Virendra ko ek mauka aur do. Pyaar sabke naseeb me nahi hota hai. Maine apne pyaar ko apni galti ki vajah se kho diya jiske liye main aaj tak pachta raha hu. Isliye Virendra ko ek aur mauka de do aur Shiv Dutt se shaadi na karo."

CK was shocked at his reply. So that bas***d is planning such a disgusting thing to make her a wh**e for the entire city and he was the one who spiked her haldi. She hates Shiv Dutt to the core but she can't forgive Virendra. Its because of him, Shiv Dutt came in her life. Her father agreed to Shiv Dutt's marriage proposal after what Virendra and his gang did in Jwaar Ghaati and also because according to her father Virendra's eyes fell on her so she needs to marry Shiv Dutt who will protect her from Virendra but it became other way round with Virendra always protecting her from that bas***d Shiv Dutt. Even though she has some other plans instead of marrying Shiv Dutt, she needs to disagree with Jai Aditya as she can't trust him because who knows he came here to spy and test her on Shiv Dutt's orders. By the way, how can she even trust him when she is talking with him for the first time? Ready for acting, Chandrakanta.

"Tum bakwaas kar raho, Jai Aditya. Tum apne khud ke bhai ke baare me aisa kaise bole sakte ho? Usne vachan diya tha ki vo mujhe kuch nahi karega. Tum jhoot bol rahe ho. Tum sirf Shiv Dutt ke khilaaf mujhe bhadkaana chaahte ho kyunki tum usse nafrat karte ho. Tum khud takht(throne) haasil karna chaahte ho isliye Shiv Dutt ke khilaaf aise ilzaam lage rahe ho. Rahi baat Virendra ki, main usse nafrat karti hu. Usne hum sabke saath vishwaas ghaat kiya hai. Usne mujhe talvar se maarne ki bhi koshish ki. Vo mareech ka putra hai. Ye sab jaanne ke baad bhi tum chaahte ho ki main use ek aur mauka du. Aisa nahi ho sakta hai," said CK.

"Mujhe nahi lagta hai ki Virendra tumhe sachmuch maarta tha, Chandrakanta. Vo streeyon(women) ki bahot izzat karta hai. Agar vo sach me bura insaan hota to tumhaare saath pehle hi bahot kuch kar sakta tha par usne aisa kuch nahi kiya," said JA.

"Vo isliye kyunki use chaabhi nahi mili thi tab tak. Jaise hi use chaabhi mili usne mujhpar talwar chala diya. Tum Virendra ka support karna band karo. Mujhe abhi jaana hoga. Kal meri Shiv Dutt ke saath shaadi hai jiske liye mahal me taiyyaari ho rahi hai," said CK and left from there.

JA stood there disappointingly. A dove flew near him and came to his original form as Tej Singh. He was watching Ja and CK's conversation by sitting on a tree as dove.

"I am sorry. Maine bahot koshish ki," said JA.

"Maine bahot badi galti ki uss din Virendra ko sabke saamne expose karke aur Chandrakanta ke liye Shiv Dutt ka rishta laakar. Meri badkismati aur majboori hai jo main Shiv Dutt jaise neech insaan ka aiyyaar hu. Main kis muh se Chandrakanta se ye sab kehta. Isliye maine tumse kaha. Par fir bhi koi faayda nahi hua. Tumne apni taraf se koshish ki, Jai Aditya. Tum bahot acchhe insaan ho. Tum Shiv Dutt ki tarah bilkul nahi ho," said Tej Singh.

"Mujhe mere mata-pita aur chachaji ne acchhi seekh di hai humesha streeyon ki izzat karo aur tumhaare saamne kisi ke saath galat ho to koshish karo use thik karne ki. Mujhe bahot dukh ho raha hai ki mere saamne ek ladki ki zindagi barbaad hone jaa rahi hai aur main kuch nahi kar paa raha hu. Humesha kuch na kuch sochna padega," said JA.

"Haan hume kuch bhi karke ye shaadi rokni hogi," said Tej Singh.

"Mere paas ek idea hai," said JA.

"Kaisa idea?" asked Tej Singh.

"Hume Virendra se baat karni chaahiye," replied JA, "Vahi kuch kar sakta hai."

"Par Vijaygarh ke log use nafrat karte hai meri galti ke vajah se," said Tej Singh.

"Hum koi raasta nikaal lenge," said JA.

"Thik hai chalo," said Tej Singh.

Tej Singh transformed into a big eagle and JA sat on him before he started to fly in the air.

Virendra rescued Ratnagarbha and kept her at his fort in Chunargarh which is not the palace of Mareech. He don't want Mareech to know where she is. Since RG is unwell, Viru appointed a vaidya and a nurse to take care of her in a secret room which opens from a secret door. Also he requested some of his khunkhaar friends whom he got to know hates Mareech and also a khunkhaar's sister named Ragini to take care of RG. Viru went out of the fort for horse riding.

Tej Singh who was searching Viru in Chunargarh spotted him riding on a horse at an isolated place and started flying down. He came before Viru's horse and came in his original form. Viru was shocked to see Tej Singh and JA before him and stopped before him.

"Virendra, hume tumse ek jaroori baat karni hai," said Tej Singh.

"Mujhe poore Vijaygarh me badnaam karke ab kya kehna chaahte ho?" asked Viru.

"Chandrakanta ke baare me," replied Tej Singh.

"Chandrakanta ke baare me kya kehna chaate ho?" asked Viru.

"Kal Chandrakanta aur Tej Singh ki shaadi honewaali hai," replied JA.

Viru was shocked at his reply.

"Ye kaise ho sakta hai?" asked Viru shockingly.

"Sab meri vajah se hua hai," replied Tej Singh guiltily and told him the entire matter.

Viru was angry and grabbed his collars.

"Tumhe mere saath jo karna tha kiya par tumne Chandrakanta ki zindagi barbaad kar di uss Shiv Dutt ka proposal dekar," said Viru angrily as he left his collar.

"I am sorry, Virendra. Maine bahot galti ki. Maine tumhaare aur Chandrakanta ke saath galat kiya par main apni galti sudhaarna chaahta hu. Tum ye shaadi rokne me humaari madad karo isse pehle ki bahot der ho jaaye," said Tej Singh guiltily.

"Tum apne hi swami ko dhokha de rahe ho," said Viru.

"Main badkismati aur majboori se Shiv Dutt ka aiyyaar hu par main kuch anarth(disaster) hone se rokna chaahta hu. Ye ek ladki ke zindagi ka sawaal hai," said Tej Singh.

"Please Chandrakanta ko bacha lo, Virendra. Maine usse tumhaare paas aane se pehle kaha ki vo Shiv Dutt se shaadi na kare par vo nahi maani," said JA and told him about his talk with CK.

Viru was shocked and wondered why CK is marrying that creep.

"Shiv Dutt ne kaha ki vo shaadi ke baad Chandrakanta ko Naugarh ki Nagarvadhu banaayega. Vo haldi ke din bhi unn ladkiyon ke saath raas-leela racha tha aur keh raha tha ki shaadi ke baad bhi vo aise hi karega. Usne Chandrakanta haldi me sharab milaakar usme aag laga di thi tumhe takleef pahunchaane ke liye jisse uska chehre aur body pe rashes aa gaye aur use jalan ho rahi thi. Uske body pe abhi bhi rashes hai. Maine dekha hai. Agar vo aisa shaadi ke pehle kar raha hai to pata nahi vo use shaadi ke baad kitna torture karega. Tum to uske dost the na isliye please humaari madad karo Chandrakanta ko narak me jaane se bachaane ke liye. Agar tum taiyyaar ho to hum kuch na kuch jaroor sochenge," said JA.

Viru became angry on hearing what all JA said. Shiv Dutt is a monster who is crossing his limits. He can't let Chandrakanta suffer at his hands anymore. He needs to agree with Tej Singh and JA to help them. Tej Singh and JA smiled at each other seeing him angry.

"Dost to main uska abhi bhi hu, Jai Aditya par vo mujhse nafrat karti hai. Humaare beech sab kuch pehle jaisa na raha. Main taiyaar hu tum dono ki madad karne ke liye," said Viru.

Tej Singh and Jai Aditya got happy that he agreed.

"Chalo kahi chalkar baat karte hai," said JA.

The trio covered their faces with their scarf and went to a a small hotel to talk.

"To hume kya karna chaahiye?" asked Viru.

"Maine kuch socha hai iss baare me. Maine tumhe aur Jai Aditya ko kisi tarah kal Vijaygarh laaunga baraat aane se pehle. Fir Jai Aditya Chandrakanta ko mahal ke pichwaade(backyard) me bulaayega kuch jaroori baat karne ke bhaane jaha tum bhi rahoge. Tum dono Chandrakanta ko samjhaoge ki vo ye shaadi na kare. Vo maani ko thik aur agar na mane ko to tum use agvaah(kidnap) karke Chunargarh le jaoge ek raat ke liye. Main apne kisi aiyyar dost se 1 raat ke liye Chandrakanta ki jagah lene ko keh doonga," replied Tej Singh.

Viru and JA were shocked at the idea.

"Ye kya keh rahe ho tum?" asked Viru shockingly, "Kisi ko aise agvaah karna galat hai vo bhi ek ladki ko. Main ye nahi kar sakta hu. Kuch aur sochte hai hum."

"Yahi ek raasta hai agar vo nahi maani to. Tum use torture karne ke liye thodi na agvaah karoge par uski zindagi barbaad hone se bachaane ke liye," replied Tej Singh.

Viru remembers SD saying him that he will make CK his daasi when he went to SD at his tent and did arm wrestling with some of his soldiers, SD saying CK that he will undress her in front of everyone, SD forcibly dragging her with him before CK injuring him with his own dagger and then trying to kill herself with the same dagger only to be stopped by him.

"Main ye karunga par agar jarurat pade to hi," said Viru.

"Tumne ye idea maankar acchha kiya hai," said JA.

CK in her room writes a letter for Shiv Dutt.

Raj Kumar Shiv Dutt,

Humaare beech bahot kuch thik nahi hua. Par hum sab kuch bhulkar kal nayi shuruvaat karne jaa rahe hai. Main chaahti hu ki hum ek doosre se milkar akele me baat kare. Hum aaj raat 8 baje Vijaygarh ke seema ke kuch doori par jungle hai uske paas ek khuli jagah hai vaha milenge. Isse tum dinner date samajh lena. Mere paas tumhaare liye ek surprise hai. Agar tum mere saath date pe aane ko haan kehte ho to muje jaldi reply karna.

Tumhaari Shubhchintak

Chandrakanta

She folded the letter and gave it to a pigeon.

"Ise Rajkumar Shiv Dutt ko de dena," said CK.

The pigeon flew away holding the letter.

Scene shifts to Viru going to the door of secret room where RG is being treated.

He looks at RG's sleeping form from far and says, "Kal aapke saath aapki beti hogi."

He recalls his talks with Tej Singh and JA on how CK did not listened to JA when he told her not to marry Shiv Dutt but instead was talking in favour of Shiv Dutt.

"Kal tumhe mere sawaalon ke jawaab dene hai, Chandrakanta," said Viru.

Scene shifts to the pigeon reaching SD's window and giving him the letter. SD read the letter and smiled happily. He told the pigeon to wait for sometime as he writes the reply.

"To Chandrakanta hume date pe bula rahi hai. Wow," said SD with a smile.

He writes a letter in reply to CK's letter.

Rajkumaari Chandrakanta,

Mujhe khushi hai ki tum mujhe date pe bula rahi hai. Main nahi jaanta ki maine tumhaare saath jitna bhi bura kiya uske baad main tumse kaise nazrein mila paaunga. Fir bhi main 8 baje pahuch jaaunga.Main tumse jitna bhi maafi maangu vo kam hoga par main umeed karta hu ki tumse umeed karta hu ki tum mujhe ek din maaf kar do. Main tumhaari maafi paane ke liye humesha koshish karunga. Main tumhaara acchha dost, premi aur pati banker dikhaaunga.Ye vaada hai mera tumse. Mujhe tumhaare surprise ka intezaar rahega.

-Tumhaara Shubhchintak

Shiv Dutt

He folded the letter and gave it to the pigeon.

"Ise Rajkumari Chandrakanta ko de dena," said SD.

The pigeon flew away holding the letter.

"Main tumhaara kitna acchha dost, premi aur pati banker dikhaaunga vo to tumhe shaadi ke baad hi pata chalega, Chandrakanta," said SD with an evil laugh.

Scene shifts to Viru sitting near the fireplace. A girl comes to him.

"Virendra, tum pareshaan lag rahe ho," said Ragini.

"Kya kisi ko agvaah karna sahi hai agar ye uski zindagi barbaad hone se bachaane ke liye ki jaaye to?" asked Viru, "Kya ye karne se vo insaan bura ban jaayega, Ragini?"

"Main ye nahi jaanti ki tum mujhse ye sawaal kyu kar rahe ho par agar kisi ko agvaah karne se uska bhala hota hai to ye kuch had tak thik hai," said Ragini.

Viru first decided that he will kidnap CK only if she does not listens to him and JA but now he decides to kidnap her anyway so that she can meet her mother and answer his questions.

"Main kal ek ladki ko yaha agvaah karke laaunga. Yaha tum hi ek ladki ho jo uske saath dost bankar reh sakti hai aur uska khyaal rakh sakti hai. Vo ladki meri dost thi aur humaare beech kuch aisa hua jisse humaari dosti toot gayi. Ab vo ladki kisi galat aadmi ke saath shaadi karne jaa rahi hai jo uski zindagi narak se bhi badtar bana dega," said Viru.

"Kaun hai vo ladki?" asked Ragini.

"Vijaygarh ki rajkumaari Chandrakanta," replied Viru.

Ragini's eyes becomes wide as she hears the name. She then smiles.

"Ye to bahot khushi ki baat hai, Virendra. Hume uske liye ek acchha sa kamra taiyyaar rakhna chaahiye aur uske liye kuch kapde aur baaki jaruri saamaan rakhna chaahiye. Vo yaha aaraam se rahegi jaise ki ye ghar uska hi ho," said Ragini with a smile.

Viru's eyes become wide on hearing Vo yaha aaraam se rahegi jaise ki ye ghar uska hi ho'. He did not knew why he felt different on hearing that line from Ragini.

"Mujhe tumhaari aur Chandrakanta ki poori baat batao," said Ragini.

"Thik hai," said Virendra.

Viru met Ragini only 2 days ago when she came to live with her brother some days. She teaches yoga in her area where she lives with her family while her brother is a Khunkhar.

Scene shifts to the pigeon reaching CK's window and giving her SD's letter. CK tells the pigeon to leave. CK reads the letter and could not help but get disgusted at his acting to be nice.

"Shiv Dutt, aaj ye date tere zindagi ka aakhri date hoga," said CK menacingly as she removed a dangerous looking dagger from a box, "Mujhme tere itna bal(physical strength) to nahi hai par main fir bhi tujhe apne bal(physical strength), akal(brain) aur chhal(deceit) se tujhe haraaungi."

Scene shifts to SD getting ready in lovely clothes and spraying lots of perfume over himself.

"Aaj Chandrakanta ke saath date pe maza aa jaayega," said SD happily.

He goes outside his room and sees JA sitting on a chair in the corridor looking sad.

"Tum itna dukhi hokar kyun baitho ho, Jai Aditya? Kahi tum firse uss ladki ke khyaalon me to nahi khoye ho jisse tumhe pyaar hua tha?" asked Shiv Dutt with a taunt.

"Bhaiyya, mujhe akela chhod do," replied JA, "Aap kya jaanenge pyaar kya hota hai? Aapko to sirf ladkiyon ki izzat se khelne aata hai. Main abhi aap se keh raha hu baksh do Chandrakanta varna aap bahot pachtaayenge. Abhi bhi waqt hai sudhar jao."

SD laughs and says, "Tu bada ladkiyon ka rakhwala ban raha hai ha. Sorry Jai Aditya, main teri tarah mahaan nahi hu. Main Chandrakanta se shaadi karunga aur use Nagarvadhu banaaunga. I am sure uski gori chamdi par mar mitne ke liye bahot mard milenge. Aur to aur Chandrakanta jaisi itni khoobsurat ladki ka ek raat ka rate bhi bahot high hoga."

"Bhaiyya, aap itne neech kaise ho sakte hai?" asked JA angrily as he got up from the chair, "Aapko sharam aani chaahiye kisi ladki ke baare khaas karke aapki honewaali biwi ke liye itna ghatiya baat karte huve. Agar aapki koi behen hoti to aap uske bhi baare me aise hi baat karte the kya? Agar aapki koi beti hogi to aap uske baare me bhi aise hi baat karenge kya?"

"Bakwaas band kar," said SD angrily.

"Galat kya pooccha maine?" asked JA.

"Mujhe teri bakwaas baatein sunne ke liye waqt nahi hai. Main kisi jaruri kaam se baahar jaa raha hu," said SD and walked from her while JA still looked angry.

"Jarur kisi ladki ke saath rangraliya manaane jaa raha hoga. Hey bhagwan, aap Chandrakanta ki raksha karna," prayed JA.

He then again lost in some thoughts.

"Main tumhaari maafi ke laayak nahi hu par main tumse dobaara milne ke liye roj tarasta hu. Mujhe tumhaari bahot yaad aati hai," said JA as tears came in his eyes.

Scene shifts to Viru and Ragini. Viru finished telling Ragini about him and Chandrakanta.

"Tum dono jis tarah se alag huve vo thik nahi tha. Tum aaj bhi Chandrakanta ki bahot chinta karte ho. Kya tum Chandrakanta se pyaar karte ho?" asked Ragini.

Viru was shocked at her question. He recalls himself saving CK as she falls from the cliff and he holds her hand as they fall on the ground together, CK defending him from SD's humiliations when he was ordering him to drink the water with which he washed his feet, CK helping him dress for the function after he recovered from SD's poison attack.

"Nahi," said Viru, "Vo sirf meri dost hai."

"Vo sirf tumhaari dost hai ya nahi ye to waqt hi bataayega. Ye to waqt hi bataayega ki tum usse pyaar karte ho ya nahi. Pyaar bahot acchha ehsaas hota hai par kuch logon ko pyaar ke badle sirf dhokha, dard aur aansu(tears) milte hai," said Ragini getting emotional at the end.

"Tum thik ho? Tum udaas kyu ho gayi?" asked Viru.

"Kuch nahi. Bas baat karte karte emotional ho gayi," replied Ragini with a smile and then wiped her tears by looking away from him so that he don't see her tears.

Scene shifts Chandrakanta getting dressed in beautiful clothes and spraying little perfume over herself. She then wore some jewelleries and did some make-up.

"Aap uss rakshas ke liye itna sajh rahi hai," said Chapla.

"Aaj uss rakshas ka main ant karungi," said CK.

"Aap apna dhyaan rakhna. Hum aas paas hi rahenge," said Champa.

"Haan jarur," said CK.

Next afternoon, Chandrakanta was pacing to and fro in her room. Her wedding was in 2 hours. She was thinking about what to do next in her plan. She managed to kill Shiv Dutt yesterday night with her bal, akal and chhal and buried him in a nearby jungle with the help of Champa and Chapla. She then killed Shyamala today morning when she was returning from the mandir nearby the palace. Shyamala tried to kill her by biting her accusing her of snatching Shiv Dutt from her but she somehow saved herself from getting bitten and killed her with her dagger before dumping her in a nearby jungle. She can't let anyone doubt that Shiv Dutt is dead. She needs to act normal. While she was lost in her thoughts, Kamini entered her room.

"Chandrakanta, tum abhi tak taiyaar nahi huvi. 2 ghante me tumhaari shaadi hai," scolded Kamini, "Tum uss makkaar Virendra ki yaad se niklo aur jaldi taiyaar ho jao."

CK's blood boiled on her scolding and ordering her again not caring about her like always and also for telling makkaar to Virendra. She needs to get rid of this witch soon out of her way.

"Chandrakanta, tum sunn bhi rahi ho main kya bol rahi hu?" asked Kamini in a loud voice, "Aaj tumhaari Shiv Dutt se shaadi hai to tum jaldi se taiyaar ho jao."

Haan, main sunn rahi hu chhoti maa. Thoda dheere boliye varna log sochenge ki aap mujhse pyaar nahi karti hai kyunki aap meri sauteli maa jo hai," replied CK calmly controlling her anger.

Kamini got annoyed and left her room.

"Agar ise Shiv Dutt se itna pyaar hai to khud kyun nahi usse shaadi kar leti hai? Main aur bardaasht nahi kar sakti iss kameeni Kamini ko," said CK angrily.

She then all of a sudden recalls Viru saving her from the caves when it was shaking and caught fire by helping her run quickly out of it, Viru saving her from chandelier falling on her, Viru applying ointment on her feet which was red due to her doing taandav.

"Mujhe Viru ki yaad kaise aa sakti hai jisse main bahot nafrat karti hu? Kyun mujhe bahot gussa lagta hai jab koi use kuch galat kehta hai to?" asked CK to herself.

Scene shifts to Tej Singh reaching Chunargarh in big eagle's form with JA sitting on him. They reached the place where Viru told that he will meet them to leave with them.

"Tej Singh ke upar baith jao mere peeche," said JA.

"Thik hai," said Viru and sat behind JA on Tej Singh.

As he sat comfortably, Tej started flying in air to reach Vijaygarh.

Next- Part 2: Kidnapping The Bride

Precap: #Viru kidnaps CK with the help of JA and takes her to his fort in Chaunargarh. He ties her on a chair when she tries to run away and taunts her that no one will miss her as a male aiyyaar will take her form and pose as her. CK looks angrily at him but in her mind feels happy that he at least did some good thing due to which she don't have to sit for the wedding.

#Jai Singh gets a letter from SD which says that he will not marry his daughter Chandrakanta as he was just acting to be nice not being aware that the letter was written by CK herself. Jai Singh gets angry while Kamini gets unhappy that CK will not get married to SD.

A/N: Please bear with some english words here and there as its not easy to write everything in hindi. This part may look very big for some but hope you all don't get bored. I twisted some of the things in the story. CK's actions will not be unrealistic. Jai Aditya is helping his future bhabhi by taking the help of his real cousin unknown to him. CK is gone now after SD regains consciousness. Who will save her from father-son duo's wrath?

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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Arey wah itni long update
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Originally posted by: zyrah17

Arey wah itni long update
superb
countinue soon


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Wow...long and intresting update...
So ragini ka bhi dil tuta hai...
I'm eagerly waiting for next part...
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Originally posted by: Khushi_Dillse

Wow...long and intresting update...

So ragini ka bhi dil tuta hai...
I'm eagerly waiting for next part...


Thank u😊
I am used to write this much long or even longer as in QH forum this was the normal length for writers
Yes Ragini ka bhi dil toota hai
Next part will be funny with CK making Viru run a lot
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Part 2: Kidnapping The Bride, Shiv Dutt In Coma

Champa and Chapla enters CK's room. CK is still walking to and fro.

"Aage kya karna nahi samajh aa raha hai. Shiv Dutt ki to laash bhi kisi ko nahi milegi. Humne use jungle me gaada(buried) jo hai. Sabko lagega ki vo kahi bhaag gaya hai," said CK.

Suddenly CK gets an idea.

"Mujhe samajh gaya ki mujhe kya karna hai," said CK and took out a paper to write a letter.

"Kya karengi aap?" asked Chapla.

"Dekhti jao," replied CK.

CK wrote a letter on behalf of SD.

Maharaj Jai Singh

Ye patra zara sambhal kar padhna taaki aapko dobaara dil ka daura na pade aur aapki tabeeyat kharab ho jaaye. Mujhe vishwaas nahi hota hai ki aapki beti ko itna beizzat karne ke baad bhi aap iss shaadi ke liye haan kar di. Kya aap sachmuch apni beti se pyaar karte hai ya kisi tarah usse chhutkara paana chaahte hai? Beti ko aapke kisi kaam ki hai nahi kyunki aapka rajya to aapka beta Mayur ki sambhaalega na to isliye aapne tay kar di apni beti ki shaadi bhale ki vo aadmi Shiv Dutt hi kyun na ho. Chalo, ye sab chhodo. Seedhe mudde pe aata hu. Main aapse ye kehne ke liye patra likha hu ki main aapki beti Chandrakanta se shaadi nahi karunga. Meri koi baraat nahi aayegi. Maine to sirf acchha banne ka naatak kiya tha. Sach baat to ye hai ki main aapke poore parivaar se nafrat karta hu khaas karke aapki beti Chandrakanta se. Agar apni aur apni beti ki aur bezzati nahi chaahte ho to dobaara mujhse sampark bhi mat karna.

-Aapka Shubhchintak

Maharaj Shiv Dutt

CK showed Champa and Chapla the letter who smiled on reading it.

"Tum dono sahi waqt aur mauke pe ye patra Maharaj Jai Singh tak pahucha dena. Unhe thoda bhi shakk nahi hona chaahiye ki ye patra Shiv Dutt ne nahi likhi hai," said CK.

"Haan jarur, rajkumariji," said Champa.

They heard footsteps and CK hid the letter. Kamini entered the room.

"Tum ab tak taiyaar nahi huvi, Chandrakanta," scolded Kamini and shouted to Champa-Chapla, "Champa, Chapla, ise jaldi taiyaar karo. Iss ladki ne mujhe pareshaan kar diya hai."

Kamini left the room in annoyance.

"Pareshaan tujhe ab tak nahi ki hu par bahot jald karungi, Kamini," said CK, "Mare huve aadmi ki baraat nahi aa sakti hai par main uss baraat ka intezaar karne ka naatak to kar hi sakti hu."

(Flashback of last night only for the readers)

As CK leaves with Champa and Chapla after burying Shiv Dutt, Mareech suddenly feels uneasy regarding his son Shiv Dutt. He can't even tell Pandit Jagannath to show him Shiv Dutt in his CCTV as Viru had taken away Ratnagarbha and hid her somewhere.

"Pandit Jagannath, kisi tarah pata lagao mere putra ke baare me," said Mareech.

PJ chants some mantras and a screen comes on the wall. Mareech is first shocked to see a spot in jungle and then the spot is scanned as he sees Shiv Dutt lying unconscious buried inside the ground with some stabbing marks on his body and red strangling mark on his neck.

"Mujhe mere putra ke paas le chalo," said Mareech.

"Par Chunargarh paar karne se aapki shaktiyan kam ho jaayegi," said PJ.

"Vo hum dekh lenge par abhi mujhe Shiv Dutt ke paas le chalo," said Mareech.

"Thik hai, chaliye," said PJ.

"Mujhe Virendra aur Chandrakanta ko dikhao ki kya kar rahe hai," said Mareech.

PJ tried but could not show them to Mareech.

"Maaf karna, iss upaay se aap sirk apne khoon ke rishtedaaron ko dekh sakte hai," said PJ.

Mareech gets disappointed.

"Shiv Dutt ke paas chalte hai. Shayad vo abhi bhi zinda ho," said Mareech.

"Ji chaliye," said PJ.

They rushed to Vijaygarh in a rath in great speed. As Mareech crossed Chunargarh, he felt weak but kept on walking towards the jungle with PJ. They found the spot and immediately started digging out the mud. They remove SD. Mareech and PJ are horrified to see Shiv Dutt in such a wounded state with his hands and leg tied and his mouth tied with a cloth.

"Pandit Jagannath, mere putra ko kya ho gaya?" asked Mareech.

PJ checks his breathing and pulse whether he is alive."Ye zinda hai par inhe thik hone me aur hosh aane me kaafi din lagega," replied PJ.

"Ek baar mera putra hosh me aa jaaye aur mera putra bata de ki uski ye haalat kisne ki to main uss insaan ko jeevit nahi chhodunga," said Mareech in a loud voice.

(Flashback of last night only for the readers)

So CK is unaware that SD is alive but in coma.

"SD se to peechha chhuta. Ab mujhe Kamini aur Mayur se peechha chudaana hai. Shyamala to isliye maari gayi kyunki vo mujhe maarne jaa rahi thi," said CK.

"Aapne kaha ki ye vahi vishkanya hai jiska vish Shiv Dutt ne liya tha Viru ko maarne ke liye. Uski vajah se Viru zindagi aur maut ke beech lad raha tha," said Chapla.

CK recalls Viru fainting and fighting for his life due to SD's poison attack. Her eyes became moist thinking of his condition. She then blinked her eyes to avoid tears falling out.

"Mujhe Virendra ke baare me baat nahi karna hai," said CK looking emotionless.

Viru reached Vijaygarh along with JA. They had covered their faces with the scarf. Tej Singh became a horse from the big eagle and Viru along with JA reached CK's palace sitting on it. Tej Singh came to his original form after reaching the palace and covered his face as well. Viru's aiyyar Devgiri met them in Vijaygarh. He was the same aiyyar who created a smoke ball for him. They decided that they will use Viru's aiyyar to take CK's place instead of Tej Singh's aiyyar friend as Viru can spend a lot of time in explaining to his aiyyar on how to act like CK.

"Bhaiyya kal raat se ghar nahi aaye. Pata nahi kal kaha itna sajdhajkar aur perfume ki bottle se nahaakar kaha gaye. Mujhe lagta hai ki vo rangraliya mana rahe honge," said JA.

Just then, the trio's saw CK dressed up as a bride standing with Champa and Chapla who were also dressed. Viru was mesmerized by seeing her dressed as a bride looking very beautiful but then realized for whom she has dressed up as the bride and became unhappy.

"Virendra, ye thik nahi ho raha hai. Chandrakanta bhaiyya ke liye dulhan nahi ban sakti hai. Bhaiyya use bardbaad kar dega," said JA and told him what SD said last night before going out.

Viru's blood boiled.

"Main jaan le loonga Shiv Dutt ki," said Viru angrily, "Koi insaan itna neech kaise ho sakta hai? Chandrakanta Shiv Dutt se vivaah nahi karegi. Hum aisa nahi hone denge."

JA took out a paper and wrote something on it and then made a rocket out of it. He uncovered his face and flew the rocket in CK's direction. CK picked up the note and looked down to see who threw it. JA waved at her signaling her to read the note. CK nodded at him. She opened the note and left the balcony to her room with Champa and Chapla.

"Kya vo aayegi neeche?" asked Viru.

"Aana to chaahiye," replied JA.

CK reads the letter.

Rajkumari Chandrakanta

Mujhe tumse bhaiyya ke baare me koi jaruri baat karni hai. Vo kal raat se ghar nahi laute. Tum mujhe mahal ke backyard me chhupke se milo.

-Aapka Shubhchintak

Rajkumar Jai Aditya

"Jai Aditya mujhse kyu milna chaahta hai? Vo mujhse Shiv Dutt ke baare me kya baat karna chaahta hai?" asked CK.

"Vo to milne par hi pata chalega," replied Champa.

"Aap chhupke se chali jaaiye," said Chapla.

CK went to the balcony and signaled to JA that she is coming.

"Vo aa rahi hai," said JA.

"Chalo, taiyaar ho jao," said Viru.

CK came in the backyard by hiding to meet JA. She was shocked to see Viru with him as well.

"Virendra tum?" asked Chandrakanta shockingly, "Jai Aditya, ye tumhaare saath kyu hai?"

Viru was shocked that she called him Virendra instead of Viru.

"Chandrakanta, aap bhaiyya se shaadi mat kijiye," said JA.

"To tum mujhe ye jaruri baat bataane ke liye bulaaye the. Tum fir se shuru ho gaye Shiv Dutt ke baare me. Bekaar me mera waqt barbaad kiya," said CK.

She turned to leave but JA pulled her by her hand and pushed her to Viru who held her tightly from back.

"Nahi Chandrakanta, tum kal sham ki tarah aise nahi jaa sakti meri baat ignore karke. Yaha se tum andar nahi Viru ke saath Chunargarh jaogi," said JA.

Tej Singh and Devgiri were hiding behind a tree and watching.

"Kya bakwaas hai ye? Main Chunargarh nahi jaaungi," said CK in annoyance.

She tried to free herself from Viru's hold in vain. JA tied her hands in front of her to make it easy for Viru to handle her.

"Tum dono kya kar rahe hai ho?" asked CK in disbelief, "Mujhe andar jaane do. Main kisi ki dulhan hu."

"Dulhan andar jaakar kya karegi jab dulha hi kal raat se gaayab hai to. Bhaiyya kal raat kahi sajdhajkar aur perfume ki bottle se nahaakar gaye aur ab tak nahi laute," replied JA amusingly.

CK recalled calling SD for dinner date and smiled inwardly but then came to reality.

"Aur rahi baat tumhaare andar jaane ki to andar tum nahi par mera aiyyar Devgiri jaayega tumhaare roop me," said Viru with a smile.

"Virendra nahi, tum...," she tried to scream but he covered her mouth so that no one hears her.

Devigiri came in front of them and transformed himself into CK right before her only and smiled at her. CK shook her head signaling them not to do this and let her go.

"Devgiri, maine tumhe samjha diya hai CK ki tarah kaise act karna hai. Agar kuch poocchna rahe to tum mujhse baad me poochh sakte ho," smiled Viru.

"Haan jarur, Rajkumar Virendra," said Devgiri in CK's voice.

"Uss lecher Shiv Dutt se itna mushkil se kal peechha chuta aur ab iss idiot Viru oops Virendra ke chakkar me phas gayi main," thinks CK irritatingly in her mind.

Devgiri smiles at CK and goes inside. CK stares angrily at JA but he only smiled at her.

"Main jo kar raha hu tumhaare bhale ke liye kar raha hu," said JA with a smile and turned serious, "Tumhe koi bewakoofi nahi karni chaahiye jaise maine mere pyaar ke saath kiya aur use kho diya. (smiling again)Tum apna khyaal rakhna aur khush rehna."

Viru held CK in his arms still covering her mouth.

"Mera kaam ho gaya hai aur aage tumhe sambhaalna hai," said JA.

"Haan," said Viru and walked inside the carriage with CK by which Devgiri came.

JA smiled seeing them go.

"Chalo Chunargarh kille pe Chunargarh mahal nahi," said Viru to the carriage driver.

Next- Part 3: Welcome To Chunargarh, My Friend

Precap: #CK is shocked on seeing half a dozen of khunkhaars sharpening their weapons. She pushes Viru and runs from him. Viru runs after her. She makes him run a lot as he is not able to catch her. He gets irritated and shocked that how she could run so much in her wedding dress and jewelleries. They are literally playing pakda-pakdi with each other.

# Jai Singh gets a letter from SD which says that he will not marry his daughter Chandrakanta as he was just acting to be nice not being aware that the letter was written by CK herself. Jai Singh gets angry while Kamini gets unhappy that CK will not get married to SD.

A/N: So SD is alive but in coma😲. Mareech is already furious and waiting for SD to wake up and tell the name of his attacker. Why CK is calling her father as Maharaj Jaisingh to Champa and Chapla instead of Pitaji? CK is making Viru burn calories in precap😆. This part was smaller than the last part but I may write longer part in the next update😊

Edited by angel_juhi04 - 8 years ago
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