Posted: 8 years ago
Ram came for dinner in sharma house as priya staying there bcz of ayesha we know ...Priya sleeping ...door bell ring sudhira ji open door ... Sudhira - ram . Ram- ji papa voh ma ka call aya tha dinner keliye .. Sudhira - arre andar toh avo an km mai sab kaise hai.. Ram - sab thik hai papa ( ram couch par bheta tha hai but uski aakhe priya ko dhuda rhi hoti hai ) . Sudhira- oh beta tum jise dhuda rhe ho vo soo rhi hai. Ram- ohhh I mean nahi ase kuch nahi hai papa ( maan mai kahi priya bimar toh nahi hai yaar kabhi thik se batati nahi dekhta hu ) . Ram- papa mai pihu KO dekha kar atta hu . Sudhira smile okk beta. Ram come in priya room aur dekhta hai priya sleeping aur ram KO bhota pyar atta hai priya par . voh jake priya ke paas beta jata hai an uske sar par hath rkhta hai .priya KO ram ke hone ka ehassa hota hai aur vo dhire se aakhe kholti hai an ram KO dekha kar uske face par smile atti hai. Ram- hii . Priya - hmmm hi..aap yha ? Ram - kuy ana nahi chiyta that kya an smile . Priya - nahi Maine ase hi phucha vaise km mai sab kaise hai an ayesha ne ... Ram stop her in middle shhh...   yha avo voh sab chodo mai sirf hmre bare bata Karna chta hu an tightly hug priya an kiss her on temple . Priya - ohhh ...kya baat hai aaj mere golu ji badi acchi mood mai hai . Ram- hey don't call me mota an pout . Priya KO hasi atti hai ram ki behavior par aur voh ram ki gaal par kiss krti hai an kehti hai Maine mota thodi kha sirf golu kha okk . Ram ohhh tightly pakdta hai priya KO aur kehta hai tum mujhe kuch bhi keha skti ho sirf ek chiza Dene ke baad.. Priya - accha ji aur vo kya . Ram- hmmm ...one kiss ... Priya shrmti hai . Ram- aur voh bhi Chick par nahi mujhe yha chiye pointing toward lip...    Priya - Mr .kapoor plzzz pihu sune gi toh plzz chodiye na . Ram- ohhh vaise mai door lock karke aya hu so tum. ... Priya ram ki aakho me dekhti hai eye lock.    Priya - vaise bolo na aap vha kaise . Ram- priya tum thodi bhi romantic nahi ho ...kitna romantic eye lock tha use toda toh toda aur kya phucha rhi ho ...tumhari maa ne dinner keliye bula ya hai mujhe... . Priya phir se ram ko tightly hug krti hai . Ram - oh god . Priya - hug break kar ke ram ki tarfa dekhti hai an kehti hai kya hua Mr .kapoor...    Ram- tumhe dekhte hi bhula jata hu yaar dekho. priya confuse hokar ram ki tarfa dekhti hai . Ram - tum thik ho ...matlab mai aya tab soyi thi tum kahi dard ho rha hai kya ...doctor ke paas chalte hai chalo.    Priya - nahi ase kuch nahi hai. Ram - toh soyi kuy thi . Priya - arre baba isa halta mai tiredness atta hai na isliye .. Ram- pakka na priya ...nahi toh chalo na jake atte hai doctor ke paas . Priya - mai thik hu na . Ram - okkk baba an phirse priya ko apne paas khich ta hai I miss u priya . Priya- I miss you too ram.    Ram - kya kha abhi tumne.. ? Priya - I miss u . Ram- uske bad . Priya - uske bad kuch nahi. Ram - ohhh kuch nahi kha hug break krta hai an priya KO kiss karta hai aakho par gala par jaise hi lip par karne wala hota hai . priya hosha mai atti hai.    Priya - plzzz ram aap ...koyi aa jye g na. Ram - tumhare muh se mera naam sune keliye mai kuch bhi kar skta hu madam ji phir ek bar bolo na. Priya shrmati hai. Ram- plzzz yaar plzzz . Priya - ram kehti hai an ram uski aakho mai dekhta hai an uske bada priya KO kiss krta hai lip par . thodi dera bad sab dinner krte hai. The end... I know bahot stupid likha hai maine. sorry plzzz bare this ...sandle ,tomato ,aur jo aap pheka ke mar skte vo sab bhi .thanks for baring my writing ...Edited by Mitwaa - 8 years ago
Posted: 8 years ago
so cute os ..
 thank u for ur pm.
 u should write more .. with such cuteness..but lil big please ..its too short 
Posted: 8 years ago
Very sweet n cute os n plss do write more
Posted: 8 years ago
so sweet n cute is.
do write more
Posted: 8 years ago
Short &a sweet os.
Thanks for pm.
Posted: 8 years ago
Hai... That was definitely not stupid... I feel like it is lovely..
Please do write more..
Thanks for PM
Posted: 8 years ago
Sweet and short OS
loved the attempt..bass dialogues ko ek ek line mein likho...
waiting for more from you
thanks for PM
Posted: 8 years ago
Very sweet cute OS
But itna chotusa kyu
Next time I want big one
Do write more
Thanks for Pm

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