Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 4

res for chap 1
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The first part was SUPERB..
Poor khushi...I loved the part where khushi gave reasons for not talking wd family members... & NK is soo sweet..I used hate him before but started liking him when he came in show again & helped khushi to rescue Arnav...
I just love to read ur work..Edited by --JEWELS-- - 10 years ago

res for chap 2
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When i came online today the first work i did was reading part 1 & when it ended I was like-'Nooo!! I want to read more'...& the moment the pg reloaded after i liked the first part...I saw the very nxt post indicating part 2 updated..and at that time i became sooo happy...Ok!! Nw enough of my blabbering & coming to update..
Second part was Bang on!! As awesome as the first one..I LOVED the fight...& khushi again m feeling bad for..kash aisa serial mein hota toh maza aa jaata..sach mein..LOVED LOVED this part..
Bye!! Take Care!!Edited by --JEWELS-- - 10 years ago

I dont have words i can practically feel her pain
arnav u scumbag jerk.rotten tomato
helee make 5 shot

You wrote so beautifully the pain that Khushi felt on seeing Sheetal together with Arnav. Now I just wish Khushi stages a walk out and moves out of RM. Let Arnav figure out where and why he went wrong. This is no way to fight for the girl he claimed he loved. 

Loved it!

Arnav came out to be an escapist and super jerk but what I liked the most is that Khushi didnt go and try to hide her feelings like in the show. She spoke and stood up for herself. I hope she raises herself from this misery even if it means to stay away from Arnav. Everything he said-he didnt mean it but what he did mean was that he was ashamed of her! How pathetic is that!

I love angsty stories when Khushi stands up for herself. I hope the spoilt Selfishzada grovels and she she takes a while to forgive him ( we know she will forgive  - this is Khushi after all )...

Awesome Update.

Oh please dont make it a Two-Shot... Edited by Samyxx - 10 years ago

wow both the parts were beautifully written 😳 

Fantastic..fab..awsm..i was feeling her pain while reading it..loved it<3