Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15*

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KBS

@oKBSo

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#31

I dont have words i can practically feel her pain
arnav u scumbag jerk.rotten tomato
helee make 5 shot

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PSharada

@PSharada

Stunner

+ 10

Posted: 12 years ago

#32

You wrote so beautifully the pain that Khushi felt on seeing Sheetal together with Arnav. Now I just wish Khushi stages a walk out and moves out of RM. Let Arnav figure out where and why he went wrong. This is no way to fight for the girl he claimed he loved.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#33

Loved it!

Arnav came out to be an escapist and super jerk but what I liked the most is that Khushi didnt go and try to hide her feelings like in the show. She spoke and stood up for herself. I hope she raises herself from this misery even if it means to stay away from Arnav. Everything he said-he didnt mean it but what he did mean was that he was ashamed of her! How pathetic is that!

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Suni

@Suni

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#34

I love angsty stories when Khushi stands up for herself. I hope the spoilt Selfishzada grovels and she she takes a while to forgive him ( we know she will forgive - this is Khushi after all )...

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#35

Awesome Update.

I really feel sorry for Kushi 😭

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Samyxx

@Samyxx

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#36

Oh please dont make it a Two-Shot...

Please continue.. Soon...

Please...

This story is awesome.. Your writing is awesome..

Edited by Samyxx - 12 years ago

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Anisha

@-Aniisha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#37

wow both the parts were beautifully written 😳

poor Khushi... Arnav shouldnt have said all that

do continue soon

thanks for the PM

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@...OceanEyes...

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#38

Fantastic..fab..awsm..i was feeling her pain while reading it..loved it<3

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Deepti

@deepti1906

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#39

Plz plz plz don't bring out the criminal in me...😒 You know what I wanna do right now?? I really wish I could pull his hairs till nothing's left on his beautiful head or I could strangle his delectable neck or kneel him on his guts...😡 Or better, I could burn that Sheetal to ashes.. Damn it!

But how dare he say THAT to Khushi? I know she was a bit insecure but it was all his fault in the end.
"MAYBE I SHOULD HAVE! I can, even now, you know! But I am stuck with you!"
This line brought shudders to me... He's going to regret this really bad and I know he didn't mean it but it's too late. Those words are already out of his mouth. Anger took better of him, this time too. Nk was right after all. He takes his dear ones for granted.

That was really really heart breaking..🥺 Poor Khushi..😭 Does he really have to be this insensitive...😭 I really wanna know what's going to happen next and I CAN'T wait for that..

Do you really write this good during your exams??😲 If yes then I wish... ahh umm I better not say that...😆

Helee, I hate you for making it so painful (Pun intended) but I really love you for writing this so wonderfully. I have seen many stories on Sheetal's Plot but I must say this is the best one I've ever read.

Bang on update.. Couldn't help but comment on this part first before unresing my previous res...😃

Update soon..😊

XOXO...🤗

P.s- Waise, when is your last exam??