Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15*

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey everyone!
First of all, thank you for the AMAZING response you have given to this story! I am completely overwhelmed by the comments and PM's I got!

(Note to self- write more angst 😆)

I know I said it will be a two shot, but after writing the second part, I realised it was coming close to 5,000 words and wouldn't fit in one single part. Hence, this becomes a three-shot.
This post is converted to a note for you guys and an Index.


Hugs,
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Edited by chibisuke - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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love the way you describe Khushi's emotions. We have seen it before how Arnav always take Khushi for granted. in fact the whole Raizada family fail to see the pain Khushi is hiding behind her fake smile.

Can't wait to read the next part. thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Marriage is not just about being in love with your partner, its also about being that one companion that one person who will bring the smile on your face and talk even non consequential stuff with you...khushi's insecurity is so well described...i am somehow glad she did t go in front of him at that time...she definitely shouldn't have to work to make herself visible to her own husband...
Loved it
Looking forward to Arnav's thoughts

Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
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yes in that part i wanted to kill arnav i can understand khushi
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUPERB...WAITING 4 D NEXT PART.
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res😃

I know I have to unres my res on your previous OS also..I'll do it tomorrow pakka...😊

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He kept ignoring her for so many days and when he found her like that he pounced on her? He behaved like the biggest jerk in the whole world..😡

How Khushi must have felt when he ignored her in the office and when she heard those women talking...😭

I have shown my whole frustration in the next comment.. So sorry for the late comment. But I really want to smack Arnav on his head...

XOXO🤗

Edited by deepti1906 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was so good!! looking forward to the next part.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful update.

Plz continue 2nd part soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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In the show, the whole Sheetal track didn't make sense... once they started with it, I hoped it would be treated with maturity: even if Aarav turned out to be Arnav's son, I hoped to see Khushi and Sheetal working things out in a way that didn't entail sacrifice on Khushi's part and turning into a vamp on Sheetal's! Maybe, Aarav remaining with Sheetal and getting his rights as Arnav's son and visiting Shantivan, etc. However, everything went downhill with Khushi's antics to get to the truth, her sacrifice and Sheetal's betrayal! The family's behaviour took the cake: who in their right minds keeps harping on the fact how a kid resembles an adult... even the most naive of wives is going to go bonkers hearing that [forget the fact that how many kids are mirror images of their parents?]!

Poor Khushi, day in and day out she keeps hearing how good Arnav and Sheetal and Aarav look together... having been told so many times by Arnav that her status didn't measure up to his must have left an indelible mark on Khushi, despite Arnav's love... seeing the ease Arnav and Sheetal share is bound to make Khushi feel that she doesn't belong to that world! Khushi in the business suit / skirt would have been a sight for sore eyes, but she shouldn't need to change herself for her husband to notice! Khushi was bang on about each of her family members' reactions if she were to voice her doubts and fears to them... commend you for making NK the person who understands her and tries to help her out... his comment about the pain felt when one's love and efforts are ignored seem to indicate his unrequited love for Khushi... behind his happy-go-lucky nature was a very sensitive, sensible and loyal soul. [This might be blasphemy, but I like him more than I do Arnav... he was always there for Khushi, no questions asked, unlike Arnav!] However unreasonable Arnav might consider Khushi in the circumstances, I think she should reveal her fears to Arnav, because nothing short of being hit over the head with the truth is going to open his eyes. He has been taking Khushi for granted, treating her like a personal assistant, with benefits! His interactions with Sheetal may be totally innocent, but he should know that spending too much time with her is bound to hurt Khushi [has he forgotten how jealous he was of NK?]! NK is right in saying that a little possessiveness and seduction on Khushi's part won't be remiss... she got proof of that when Arnav got a pleasant surprise when he walked in on her in her undergarments!

That was pretty mean of you to stop just when things were getting interesting [leaving us hyperventilating and with our imaginations running riot!] 😉... can't wait to learn what Khushi does... it would be fun if she has enough willpower to end that scorching smooch, leaving hubby dearest frustrated and having to listen to her 😈!

Edited by Maddy1270 - 12 years ago

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