Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15* - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
Awesome update
feeling bad for khushi
thanks for the pm
Twinkle
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
holy cow!!! that is as realistic as any fight between husband and wife would be if it was over a third person in the relationship...

the lyrics of Beyonce's song suits this so well:

If I were a boy, I think I could understand
How it feels to love a girl
I swear I'd be a better man.
I'd listen to her
Cause I know how it hurts
when you lose the one you wanted
Cause he's taken you for granted
And everything you had got destroyed
...
"why are you so jealous, its not like I am sleeping with the girl"
...
But you're just a boy
You don't understand

Edited by vinu.sr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
Extremely wonderful 2 shot...
The emotions are very well described..
Very eager for next
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Feeling very bad for her how he say such hurtful words to her. Hope she leave the house and then he realize his mistake. I have one request plz make 5 shots instead of 3 i want to read more. Nice update. Thanks for quick update.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
nice dear😊

arnav does nt understand even he hurts hr😡

khushi hurt very much ths time what arnav told hr
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
I just checked my pm!
And my, oh my!!

This is just mind blowing, jaw dropping awesome.
You know what?

I dont care that Arnav said the stuff he said in his guilt or in anger.
I dont care that he didnt mean them.

I believe that he is a super-jerk and Khushi is far far too good for him.
Its what he has always done. Taken her for granted.

And no, I dont agree that he does that with everyone else.
Anjali for example, just has to sneeze for him to come running to her.

So why Khushi then?
And him behaving as if he has been short-changed by getting married to Khushi??

If I had known Khushi, I'd ask her to leave.
He needs to realize how extremely lucky he is to have a wife who understands him, AND loves him, after everything that he did to her.

And he just cannot move past her education or her background.

Has he forgotten, that she was the one who saved his company from those con-men?
Pretty smart for an uneducated, embarrassing wife, yes?

I don't care if it is Arnav and Khushi, I just don't condone such behavior.

Oh, she's my wife! That's alright then. she HAS to take care of all my whims. So why not spend all my time with the hot Sheetal and make my wife feel like shit? Oh, and also, when she questions me about it, I'll just show her, her aukaat, and that will shut her up. And for the cherry on the cake, I'll even tell her, I wish I had married Sheetal.
Such a prize for a husband, aren't I??
Arnav Singh Raizada, the multi-millionaire.

Oh, yes Arnav! We can clearly see that you are. ._.

Anyways, I will go on and on, if i don't stop now.

Also, update soon please???

Richa.

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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
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Edited by luv_panipuri - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
loved the concept. I wish serial me aisa kuch dekh ne ko milta. I'm a sucker for angst and dark stories. 3rd part tomorrow i guess?
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Hey!
This was heart touching both the parts...
U knw this is the thing which actually happens with people...
Whenever a wife questions her husnband..he gave her tag of insecure..and weak woman...
But our khushi isn't weak..she will fight i knw...and will make that ASR repent for his words and for his deed...
I know helee...the next part is gonna awsome...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
oh sad,loved your work ,please do pm me.😊😊😊😊

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