Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15*

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#11

Brilliant...
Actually i feel Arnav came long way for khushi, he did changed 360 degree what he was before just for khushi.
I totally understand her being insecure about his ex and feeling avoided.
Didn't we see this insecurities once before when she was flaunting with Nanneji and Arnav left fuming.
Its the same, where there is love jealousy follows.
Waiting for next part come soon H.

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ipkknd_hazel

@ipkknd_hazel

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#12

yeah i can understand khushi - when this episode was airing i swear i cud have cursed arnav to death! 😡
believe me when i say, i have still not watched that bball scene. the day it aired i watched it online and skipped that part right off! talk abt torture! -.-

waiting for you to update... 😳

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#13

Feeling bad or khushi how he do this to her. U describe khushi pov very well. Waiting for arnav pov. Its nice that Nk is their to support her. Nice story. Loved it continue soon.
Thanks for writing the new story.

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#14

Hey...so well written and please continue this :) Only wishing this was more than just a two shot!!!

You have reasoned out Khushi's insecurities so well and this makes so much sense!!!! I really hope that Arnav experiences the same frustration😡

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Happytwinkle

@Happytwinkle

Sparkler

Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Awesome one

cant wait to read more

thanks for the pm

Twinkle

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ShikhaKhushi

@ShikhaKhushi

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Heleeji!!!! *looks away and secretly laughs at Helee's flabbergasted expression*

Are you kidding me????

Why didn't you write this before!!!! O.M.G.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I so wanted Khushi to take back on Arnav for behave so shittily with her durng the Sheetal track!!!! I SOOO WANTED THAT!!!!!!

And your story seems just perfect!!!!!

Hayye my pyaari Khushi! She tried to change herself for him! And that asshole *pardon my language, but at times, Arnav's behaviour DEMANDS it!* So, where was I? Yes! The Asshole! Who had promised her he would always love her for what and who she was [!!!!!], who had assured her she need NOT change for him [!!!!!!] HE drove her to change [even if it's for a few minutes, he still did!!!!] and he did not even NOTICE his WIFE????

Seriously, man? Is Sheetal that dazzling, that she blocks KHUSHI KUMAARI GUPTA SINGH RAIZADA out???? Well, maybe that's for you Arnav Stupid-Moron Raizada, not for us! Hah! Take that, you mongrel-faced Laad Governor!

I am SO glad that Nanhe darling is there for our sweetheart! ILY, NK!!!! <3

My Khushi is soo heart broken...<3 My heart goes out to her...<3

Oh???? So, Mr Arnav Douchebag Raizada, it's when you get back home Sheetal-less, and walk-in on your wife changing [while her heart bleeds because of your crappy ignorance of her] that you FINALLY notice her????

AND! You are not even ashamed to take advantage of her shock and... ahem... almost-nakedness????? You... What can I call you??? Wait, let me call on to some super power... yeah! Cockroach! Rat! Lizard!

Khushi, you know what to do, right? Push him away and land one tight slap on his arrogant face!!! That's what he deserves! And tell him, he can go snog Sheetal since he spends all the rest of the time with that... *controlling my language with a lot of difficulty* WITCH!!!

But I know my Khushi is too soft to do that... </3

P.S. I am soo sorry Helee! I ranted on too much, right? But I was too frustrated with the way the CVs had structured Khushi back then!! They made her look like stoopid... D: Please don't make Khushi give in to HIM so easily!!!!

Did I mention, I just love you? No? Well I do!!!! Update this SOON okay?

'Cause I WANT MORE! RIGHT NOW!!!!

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-Mistletoe-

@-Mistletoe-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#17

Hey, I stumbled upon this OS while searching for something else. And oh boy, am I glad I did! 😊

You wrote Khushi's point of view with so much sensitivity, I loved every bit of it. This OS was .. was beautiful. Reading about Khushi's insecurities was heart-wrenching to say the least. I remember this was a particularly difficult track for me to watch on TV. Difficult, since Arnav was acting completely indifferent to Khushi and Khushi's sadness was evident. I had a hard time tolerating it. I wanted Arnav to regret, and realize how his ignorance was affecting Khushi and then make it up to her. Alas, that never happened in the show.

However, your OS touched me. Khushi's pain was palpable. And I now seek that redemption from Arnav's side from your story.
I'm hoping the next parts would be something along those lines. 😳

Also, I loved how NK supported Khushi. He was really a true friend. He was in love with Khushi in the show, but never felt bad for A-K's relationship since his love was not selfish.
The last part was surprising. I await the next. Bookmarking this thread.

I have never read any of your works, but judging by this OS you are a superlative writer and among the few who can translate real emotions on paper effortlessly. And, my next stop is going to be your index. The reader in me is excited. 😃

Update soon!