Three's a Crowd *Last Part P15*

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ashw99

@ashw99

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#51

Loved it H very touchy...
I am feeling sad for khushi for all that he said to her, but truth to be told, seriously her antics sometimes use to blow me up i myself use to feel so embrace, she was too much at times.
But still i didn't expect Arnav to go so harsh on her he could have handle it bit softly.
Lets see further, you must have planned something good for them.
waiting thanks.

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vinu.sr

@vinu.sr

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: vinu.sr
holy cow!!! that is as realistic as any fight between husband and wife would be if it was over a third person in the relationship...

the lyrics of Beyonce's song suits this so well:

If I were a boy, I think I could understand
How it feels to love a girl
I swear I'd be a better man.
I'd listen to her
Cause I know how it hurts
when you lose the one you wanted
Cause he's taken you for granted
And everything you had got destroyed
...
"why are you so jealous, its not like I am sleeping with the girl"
...
But you're just a boy
You don't understand

Hey this is me again can you please include me in your pm list? Or let me know if I should buddy you?

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Preethi

@blackdove

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#53

Hey...

U r gonna make it a three shot???!!!! Yay...

Feel so sad for Khushi...Why is only she hurt everytime...

Did Arnav just say that he will marry Sheetal?????I hate u...For now...

Lets hope everything is back in place...

Do continue soon !!!!!

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Sarah

@P4rveen12

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Amazing, yet very emotional, painful and heart breaking update.

Written exceptionally well and a brilliant read,

So glad Arnav actually realised something was wrong with Khushi and actually asked her.

Wow there confrontation was really intense and heartbreaking, I can't believe how cruel Arnav was and Khushi is suppose to be the woman he loves.

I can't believe Arnav is letting his ego get the better of him and he actually said he should have married sheetal.

I don't even know if they can even resolve this problem, as Arnav said some really hurtful things to Khushi and he left her distraught and heart broken.

I honestly would not mind if Khushi actually left Arnav and then he could happily spend his time with sheetal.

Loved the update, amazing writing.

Eager to read more, hopefully this will be turned into a short story.

Please continue soon and thanks for the PM xx

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shree10

@shree10

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#55

OMG! I hope you continue this. You just cant stop here!
It was so heart-wrenching to read about Khushi's pain. You wrote this quite well and I can't believe Arnav said that! What a jerk..
I felt sad all over again!

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-Mistletoe-

@-Mistletoe-

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Amazing update! Im so happy Khushi made an effort to communicate. Thank you for not butchering her character like the creatives did during the end of the show.

I want to see Arnav repent, beg and grovel if possible to get his Khushi back. He deserves it.

Continue soon please. I will be stalking this thread.

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rakhee12

@rakhee12

Navigator

Posted: 12 years ago

#57

gosh i am so upset with Arnav right now... How can he so blind and stupid, I hope Khushi doesnt forgive him and gives him back big time... God I am too upset to even comment properly

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chibisuke

@chibisuke

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#58

Here's a question for you guys- I have written the next part. Do I upload it tonight, or wait for a few more comments? 😒

Oh, and just so you know- the next part is divided into two parts- part "a" is done. Its still a three-shot, technically! 😆

Lemme know.. I'll wait for a couple of hours- enough.. ahem.. enthusiasm, and I shall upload (twice in the same day, I must be crazy). If not.. well, there's always tomorrow!!

Love,

Helee

P.S.: Sorry if I sound too vain or something, but this time, I DO want to know!! Please oblige me by 'demanding'! Pretty please?? 😕

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Nidsubh007

@Nidsubh007

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 12 years ago

#59

Thanks for such a quick update, I was checking to see if you posted and just now realized that you posted it quite awhile ago!! 😔

I loved the 2nd part! I wasn't sure what to expect when you left the 1st part with him kissing her. But i'm glad that Khushi told him how she was feeling, that she was able to get it out there.

Arnav not getting it and overreacting was totally expected, because that is just the way he is. He never gets it until its too late.

Can't wait to see what the 3rd part holds. Please update soon, this was a great read.

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Anupama

@Anupama.

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#60

What?! You have it ready! Then UPDATE PLEASE! =) I had inferred from your previous update that you have it ready and i had been waiting for the next one since morning.. So yes, update.. Thankiee. 8-)