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The Uncontrollable Feeling part 4

Heyaaa... beautiful people, there I am with the part 4 of this story, I'm sorry it's quite lengthy and may be you'll get bored reading it... but still hoping that you'll like it

Please ignore the mistakes😛

Place: The Seduisant abode @ Airport road Andheri East (he texted her)

Time 9.00pm

Message Received

PACK UP

The time director shouted these words kapil rushed towards his vanity

Director: what had happened to him, is he alright today (with a confused look she asks to her crew member) he took a lot time to learn his script and today we'd to take so many retakes because of him, god knows what has happened to him, hope everything is okay.

Kapil: bhag kapil bhag vaise hi tu late ho gya h (earlier he was thinking to concern with his stylist as he want to look good for the date tonight and he also remembered what had happened in the morning, he doesn't wants to look stupid again in front of her but because of so many retakes he's already late, so he puts a light grey color coat with a black t-shirt and matches it with a pair of blue jeans, brush his hair and run towards his car)

He reaches to his car and breathing heavily as he's tired

Driver: sir kha jana h ?

Kapil: khi nhi jana mere bhai, tu ghar ja

Driver: pr sir aap ghar kaise jaenge? (with a confused face the driver asked him)

Kapil: are yaar tu jana mujhe car chalani aati h, chala jaunga m

After getting this order from his sir with a gloomy face he was leaving the place

Kapil: oye sun

Hearing this voice driver stops there and turns back, kapil come towards him and hug him

Kapil: shi se jaiyo bhai ghar

This act of him brings a huge smile on driver's face, these are the small things done by kapil which always make him endearing.

Kapil drive his way to reach the place

Kapil: shit yaar hope she'd not reached yet

(he reaches to the restaurant and have attended by the manager )

Manager: good evening sir, we are glad to have you here, it's an honor that you've selected our place I'm sure you'll gonna love this place

Till the time manager is busy praising about the restaurant

(kapil's eyes are busy finding sumona)

Kapil interrupts the manager and asks him has she come"

Manager: your wife? Yes sir she is waiting for quite a long time for you

This sentence from the manager has made kapil feel miserable (shit kya yaar suruvaat hi bakwaas hui h, kya musibat h)

Manager takes him to the table, all of the sudden his eye falls on her

(Kapil just couldn't take his eyes off; she is looking like a fairy wearing a light pink plain saree paired with a sleeveless and backless white blouse, she is in minimal accessories, diamond earrings, and a watch, pink light falling on her, making her more beautiful, her pinks luscious lips and baby curls falling on her face beautifully making kapil go crazy for her... she is looking simply stunning and icing on the cake the view of her milky white waist is making kapil's imaginations go wild, he whacked himself) control kapil control pagal ho gya h kya... (after seeing this beautiful and gorgeous woman in front of him he just want to cry) bhagle yaar yahan se, ye aurat tujhse nhi patne ki, look at her beautiful word is also not enough for her and look at yourself kapde bhi dhang k nhi pehan kr aya (at this moment he's hell nervous and want to run out of this place, but he gathers himself take a deep breath and walk towards her).

Kapil: hi...

Sumona: hii (with a small smile on her face)

Sumona pov

My...my...my... sumona how can you even imagine that he'll ever have any type of feelings for you, look at him so HANDSOME, and god his smell makes me insane, or kuch nhi, is admi ko thora tere upar taras aa gya hoga tabhi tujhe dinner pe bula liya and you are thinking , it's a date, IDIOT... this man can only be yours in your dream, asli m teri aukat nhi h iske layak ki (with that she try to console herself but she also knows that these dialogues of her are making her feel more miserable)

Kapil: sorry I'm bit late actually shoot jyada lambi ho gai

Sumona: o...it's okay I can understand

(long silence, they both do not have any idea what to say)

Kapil: kapil breaks the silence, kya khaogi?

Sumona: aaa... I'll have chargrilled quail and parsley salad

Kapil: okay... I'll go for charred romaine and spaghetti with strawberry with tomato sauce

Waiter takes there order and ask them "would you like to have drinks too"

Kapil: no

Sumona: yes

They both say it together

Sumona: are you sure you don't want any drink

Kapil: no, I mean want ... I want (abe yaar kya kr rha h kapil, bhai barbaad h tu, he wants to hide his face he is totally embarrassed at this moment)

Sumona: so should I order Americano for you?

Kapil: han thik h (he's still nervous)

Sumona: (to the waiter) one Americano and one Paloma

Waiter: sure maam, anything else

Sumona: no, thank you

With not even exchanging single word to each other they are having there dinner... an unwanted silence is actually killing them from inside, they wanted to break that silence but don't knon.. how to do it

Kapil pov

Kapil I think you should say it, come on man you can do it just say it... be a man (he opens his mouth to speak)

Manager: sir I hope you are enjoying your dinner

Sumona: yes we are, thank you soo much the atmosphere is really very beautiful and I love this silent atmosphere.

(even she knew it this silence is hell disturbing for her because it is leading to bad thoughts about her baseless life)

Kapil: (this sentence from her made his heart broke into pieces, the thought that she is enjoying this silence) simply means she doesn't want me to open up my mouth, let her enjoy the silence then

They have done with their dinner and left the restaurant, they both are unsatisfied with tonight's soo called date...they failed to break the silence between them and failed to tell about their uncontrollable feeling for each other... they both are unhappy and hell irritated with their unpleasant date experience.

To be continued...

Hope you like it

Ooopsss... I'm sorry guys ye to fir se popat ho gya dono ka😛

But pakka next update will be very exciting and I'll update it soon😊

Till the time please wait

And yes it will also be the last part of this story too

Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

I'm looking forward to the next part. Pls iss baar inke beech kuch toh ho jaye!😆

Originally posted by: aashup

Don't worry yaar is baar to pakka kuch hoga, 😉

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Kya naam rakha hai totally going with the story and Kapppuuu ! Dont make me go uncontrollably mad! How can you do this ? Seedhe seedhe bol nahi skate the ke look "You are amazing I am going crazy for you day and night lets stop this drama and BEHAVE LIKE MARRIED COUPLE because I love you like a mad man " Bas itna nahi hota bolne ? Or a straight I love you would have done it. I was just screaming "Come one crazy people you both are married to each other its not illegal to have some romance in ur life" 😕 😆 Made me truly enjoy this one THE MOST ! That manager almost wasted Kappu's 10 mins by praising ?!?! I hate him !
That part where he says he will cry cause this woman is so beautiful ? I just laughed on that 😆 and that driver part Ofcourse my Hero is so caring towards all. I now call kappu 'A real gentleman' because he is one 😃 but still Kappu just say it in the next update warna mein khud entry le lungi story mein 😛 😉 😆

Love you sooo much for this super cute update you maintain that excitement and you can clearly notice my excitement level in the above lines ;) This one made me laugh made me go mad made me smile like a stupid and made me more excited for the next part.

Lots of Pyaar :) Keep it up.

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Awww... poor kasum... kya se kya ho gya... lovely update as alwyas n m waiting for the next exciting one...

part 5 The uncontrollable feeling

Heya...😊 people now this is the last update of this story... sorry it's a bit long

Hope you'll like it, again criticism is always welcomed...waiting eagerly for your comment

Kapil sitting on a driver's sit but not in a mood to drive the car... he is distraught with what had happened tonight... he didn't say a single word to her... it's not at all a facetious situation for him, he is shattered... this was the chance when he could confess his deep love for his wife but because of his pusillanimous behavior, he failed to do so... now he just wants to toss his head in regret... sumona sitting next to him, wanted to cry on her throbbing situation...she had fictionalized so many things about this date... but it went out to be just a dinner "a bad dinner" at this moment she wants to reach home and cry like hell all night long.

Kapil puts his hand on steering wheel and rest his head there to compose himself; sumona bends down on her lap, hiding her face

Kapil: I love you (he is still in that same position)

Sumona: what???? (she lifts up her head and wonder what he just said...)

Kapil: (lift his face up with a profound pain in his eyes) yes I love you... I know you don't love me and I'll never force myself on you... but I'm sorry I cannot handle it anymore (his pain has deepened and suddenly his voice is loud and strong) and you know what you are my wife and you have to love me... that's it I'm not going to leave you and you cannot leave me... did you get that..

(he authoritatively said it but even he knew that whatever he is saying is totally idiotic, he is not sticking with his statement he do not want to force himself on her but he is also afraid of the fact that she'll leave him)

His dialogue is followed by a long silence

Sumona: (what the hell...he proposed me ...is this a dream... she pinch herself) oouuch...

Kapil: what happened (he's looking at her with a muddled face)

Sumona: aaa... nothing, so you were saying, you love me???? Right????

Kapil: yes...(with a pleading eyes)

Sumona: so... you are not joking, h na...?????

Kapil: (yaar ye aurat pagal to nhi h, yahan dar k maare halat tight ho rakhi h or ye aise behoode sawal pooch rhi h) no I'm not joking...why would i joke... han vo bhi at this moment

Sumona: so... you love me and you are not joking??? Right ????

Kapil: (hey bhagwaan mujhe is aurat se bachao, ise is situation m bhi kbc khelna h)

(After a short silence she burst into laughter this has made kapil embarrassed and seeing her laughing, his heart get turned out of his body and tears are emerging in his eyes)

Sumona: (sumona is on 9^th cloud... she has gone crazy thinking that the man of her life whom she love like a mad woman is also madly and deeply in love with her at this moment she feels like the happiest person on this planet between the laugh swiftly her eyes move towards kapil and she see his paling face and can see tears in his eyes which are ready to fall)

She turned up from her seat and intentionally knocked hers into his lap (kapil is in an utter shock... by the time he could say something, he feels pair of soft lips on his)

(her lips pressed against his, first time he finds her face so close to him...a drop of tear falls from his right eye in joy, right now he is in paradise... kapil too tried to join but her wife is too forceful on him, so he let her lead him... he is enjoying the exotic taste of her mouth as the kiss is getting deeper and deeper more fervent as she is hungry for him since ages... her hands wandered from his back to his hair making kapil moan in anticipation... kapil's hands are traveling all over her body, at this moment... he is enjoying his smooth skin as he always wants to experience it...seeing her wife on top of him kissing him so passionately, aggressively making him go wild...the time he started enjoying her body, her smooth skin more making his pants tighter, all of the sudden she breaks the kiss as she felt lack of oxygen)

Both are breathing heavily till now but kapil wants it more so he tries to capture her lips on his but she stops him

Kapil: in a most irritating voice...like a kid (kya h????? ab meri bari ...)

Sumona: nhi... ho gya (she tries to release herself from his grasp but she fails as he has a strong grip) choro mujhe

Kapil: na meri jaan itna asan nhi h... tumne sher ko khud nyota diya hai (with that he trails series of kisses down from her face, down her neck very enthusiastically but yet gently)

Sumona knows that where it would lead if she'll not take any immediate step

(she all of the sudden pushes him off and went back to sit on her seat... now this action of her has irritated him like hell)

Kapil: what the hell... ye kya baat hui bhai ???

Sumona: what ??? Let's go home...

Kapil: pulling her towards him ... are yaar ghar jane ki kya jarurat h jb car m sb ho skta h to (with a creepy smile on his face)

Sumona: no ways... car m... not possible

Kapil: what nonsense sb possible h... boht easy h let me tell you how we'll do it

Sumona: (With anger in her voice) no ...come on... lets go home

Kapil: kyaaa... yaar it will take half an hour to reach home or m tb tk control nhi kr skta

Sumona: please do not be stubborn like a kid... itne time tak control kiya h na...ghar chalo

Kapil: he mimics her irritatingly' ghar chalo... fine... par ghar chal k khabardaar mujhe kuch bhi krne se roka to

(Sumona is already very embarrassed with whatever has just happened few minutes ago and this dialogue of his making her more uncomfortable but deep inside her heart is blissful too)

Kapil: okay kapil sharma aaj tujhe car nhi hwaijahaj chalna h... to chalo... (with that he drive car as fast as possible to reach home)

The End

Hope you like it😊

Ab aage ki kahani khud bna lena dimag m hehehe😉

thank you so much, guys for such an overwhelming response for my first story, each one of your comments was encouraging for me, hope you'd enjoyed the story and yes.. I'll be back soon with another story tab tak k liye love you all😊