The uncontrollable feeling part 3😊😊
Hello guys... I am back with another part of this story, yes with many writing mistakes I will request you to please try to ignore it but criticism is always welcomed😊 waiting for your valuable comments
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kapil is on his way to the shoot, sitting in his car and thinking about sumona, as usual her thoughts makes kapil grin in anticipation, swiftly he see that his driver is looking at him with a muddled face.
kapil: (with a serious face and slight anger in his voice) oye... kya dekh rha h, bhai car chala tu dhang se, zinda pohanchna h mujhe shooting pe.
Driver: ji sir sorry (in an apologizing voice)
Kapil's POV
Kapil: kapil sharma soon people will consider you mad so stop thinking about her (he gives himself a strict order and start checking his phone, after reading few tweets of his fans and replying to it, he's feeling good and especially tweets from his female fans, appreciating his looks always makes him happy as it gives confidence to him to propose sumona) my fans really have good taste (he grins at that thought after spending few more minutes on twitter he switch on to news app reading few political news his eyes falls in a news headline "man committed suicide after his wife left him" these headline suddenly catches his attention and he reads the whole news (a 34 year old man, Friday in Navi, Mumbai committed suicide after drinking an insecticide after his wife left him, the deceased find out as a struggling actor was married to a Bengali woman, it was an arrange marriage occurred in 2013. After questioning friends and neighbor police has concluded that husband was in deep love with her wife but wife was not happy in their relationship and left him due to this reason husband was under depression and committed suicide. When contacted on the development, the spokesperson of the state police, Mr. Raghuvendra Thappa, said he was yet to be briefed on the incident)
(this news has given him a sudden jolt, he has started imagining himself into that man's condition)
Beta kapil tera bhi yahi hal hoga agar ye aurat tujhe chor k chali gayi to, o no... (at this moment he feels like screaming as this sudden thought is rising an immense pain in his heart) god how I'll live without her, she has become my habit now, fine kapil sharma enough is enough now (with a confidence) come-on you are handsome, honest, loving, you have such a good sense of humor, so many women admires you, you cannot be such a looser, she's your wife and you should propose her, jyada se jyada kya hoga mna kr degi, tujhe chor k chali jaegi, tu uski yaad m pagal ho jaega (this thought has again made him feel conscious about his decision) yaar...(with a dejected look) nhi kr skta, sach m chor k chali gai to (again he gathers him up and finally decide to propose her) chal yaar dekhi jaegi kb tk yun uske liye tadpta rahunga (with a deep breath) mrs kapil sharma aaj to m tumko propose krke hi rahunga (he feels a sudden jerk which made him come out of his thoughts)
Driver: sir ji set aa gya
Kapil: han... han... dikh rha h mujhe (he irritatingly mimic him) sir ji set aa gya... jaise dikh nhi rha h mujhe andha hu na m
Kapil gets down from his car and walk towards his green room leaving confused driver behind, who's wondering that what had happened to his sir today, he had never behaved in such a manner to him before.
Kapil enter in his room still in a dilemma whether he should propose her or not
He looks at his phone and finally decides to call her
Phone is ringing ...
he is a star, so confident, bold, positive, fearless but when it comes to talk to her about his feelings he becomes the most cowardly person.
"Dear husband" flashing in sumona's phone which gives her huge smile on her face
She picks up the phone
Sumona: hello
Kapil: aaa.. ummm.. hi... (damn nervous)
Sumona: hi... Phone kyu kiya? koi kaam tha? is everything all right na?
Kapil: (thinking that this woman becomes so irritating sometimes, ye nhi pati ka phone aya h pyaar se baat kru, railgadi ki trha chut gai h, sawal pe sawal puche ja rhi h)
Sumona: is your back okay? Are you hungry? God... aisa to nhi na ki aap apna lunch bhul gye, sharma ji please mujhe fir se ana padega kya set m aapko lunch dene? ofooo.. you always do this, thik h fine I'm coming
Kapil: (he is hell irritated with her now and all of the sudden he asked) aaj raat ko bahar chalogi mere sath?
Sumona: what? (she is shocked, during 1 year 3months 14 days of their marriage he had never asked such question before, she is confused did she listen right, is he asking me for a date, all these questions are giving her a tickling feeling)
Kapil: do you want to come with me for a dinner tonight
Sumona: umm...aaa...
Kapil : (his eyes are closed and pleading please don't say no, please please please bhagwaan ye aurat mana na krde)
Sumona: ummm... okay
Kapil: okay than I'll text you the place and time in an hour
Sumona: okay...
(After putting her phone down she is still confused that what just happened now) is this a date? If it is sumona teri to nikal padi (she's on a cloud 9 at this moment and has the biggest question in her mind, WHAT SHOULD I WEAR FOR THE NIGHT)
(And there kapil is still confused) yaar dinner pe bula to liya bt bolunga kya or kaise ????
To be continued...
Next chapter will going to be very exciting I promise that😉
But please wait for it
I'll update it soon😊
Mangal Lakshmi
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