Kasum os The uncontrollable feeling part 5- updated and completed - Page 2

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Ooo... aag barabar lagi h dno taraf 😆 awww poor kapil... dont worry u look handsome always.. ❤️

Originally posted by: Kapillian_girl

Firstly you should edit your main post and write about the second update in the main heading. Secondly you should pm your friends so that atleast they come to know about the update. Mujhe bhi pata nahi chalta update ke baare mei if i havent seen your " Oops sorry!!" Wala post!!. Thirdly the update is superb. You described her feelings beautifully and his self consciousness towards his clothes when he found her staring at him was hillarious. All in all i enjoyed reading the part. Keep up the nice work dear!!

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

and he has so many beautiful fans 😛 I know right ! being Kappu's GF I feel jealous that Sumona is his wife mahn ! 😉 😆 😆 I thought Sumona wont be so desperate for Kappu but I am glad that she equally needs him ! Koi toh sumona ko batado ke Kappu sirf uspe marta hai 😃 Aw ! I love the part where Kappu feels self conscious and goes to change just because he wants to look good to his beautiful wife. . How good is that ! But yaar Kappu toh hamesha hi itna handsome lagta hai 😳 I guess ek baar sumona keh degi that he is handsome toh woh maan jayega 😉 I am just loving the tension between the couple. .just one little action and they are ready to let out their desires !!!! Ufff ! agle update mein yaad se fire brigade walo ko bula lena Aaaggg lagne wali hai !!! Tooo much of hotness 😳

I'm glad you chose to write POVs cause am really impressed by the way you write you keep it simple and so beautiful. You are amazing at describing the feelings. Awesome as always :)

Keep shining !

Lots of Pyaar to you and pleaseee jaldi update karna Zyada wait mat karwana :)

Originally posted by: aashup

oh dont worry... it took me months to realize how IF works 😆

Originally posted by: aashup

Hehehe i was waiting for your reply😃and there you are with the best comment😃yes when i mentioned beautiful fans i was actually thinking about you guys only😉hehehehe yaar actually i do not want to take this story forward but your beautiful and encouraging comments force me to expand the story like this comment of yours has encouraged me to add more part to this story and you know how much i love you😳so yesss i am gonna add more chapters to it

Yes babes wait n watch aag to lagegi ab hm lga k rhrnge😉😆

Thank you sooo much for your tareefe babes and coming from a beautiful writer like you means a lot to me😳

Lots of love baby❤️