Kasum os The uncontrollable feeling part 5- updated and completed - Page 5

Kappu 🤣 i will not force myself on u but i will not let u go too 🤣 superb... sumon ko dekho...ilu gya bhaad m let me kiss my husband first... 😉 kappu se to control hi nhi hota... 😆 super awesome update and a perfect end to the disaster dinner... at least they got dessert 😉 keep writing...

Kyaaa???? Aaage ka hum khud bnaye toh yeh padha hi kyun humne?? hahahahhaha😆

Originally posted by: Kappumyfav

Mein bataoun aagey na kuch saal baad you will get to see them do se teen 😉 ya phir 3 bhi hosakte hai triplets ka zamana hai 😆 A big teddy hug to you for writing this one :) And I loved loved loved the last part actually showed their desperation for each other 😉 I laughed like crazy when he said " Car mein ho sakta let me show you" 😆 It reminded me of that PK movie ki shaking car *eeekss* I remember hiding myself under the blanket when that scene came 😆 *I am so good at embarrassing myself* Sorry ! 😆 anddd. . Uff ! That kiss 😳 but It really made me pout when his tear fell :( I was glad Sumona took the step cause Kappu se toh shuruwat nahi hoti he is so shy & cute kahin ka 😳

Lovely it was :) Will wait for your next awesome work. Keep shining :)

Lots of pyaar & Luck :)

Originally posted by: mansi_as18

Kappu 🤣 i will not force myself on u but i will not let u go too 🤣 superb... sumon ko dekho...ilu gya bhaad m let me kiss my husband first... 😉 kappu se to control hi nhi hota... 😆 super awesome update and a perfect end to the disaster dinner... at least they got dessert 😉 keep writing...

Originally posted by: UrjaLuvsWahi

Kyaaa???? Aaage ka hum khud bnaye toh yeh padha hi kyun humne?? hahahahhaha😆

So hot!! you should write one last part of them at home!☺️ Acha sorry hahaahahha Superb FF..👏 I'm still stuck in that car scene!!

Aise sitam na kr aye zaalim !!! Btaoo to shi aage kya hua😉 ...imagination network is temporarily down , can't imagine myself 😉., achaa sorry but this ws supr fantastic update ,kappu k language me "dono bhare pade the " ...u r good at explaining kiss😉,too hot it ws .

Originally posted by: Kashish95

Aise sitam na kr aye zaalim !!! Btaoo to shi aage kya hua😉 ...imagination network is temporarily down , can't imagine myself 😉., achaa sorry but this ws supr fantastic update ,kappu k language me "dono bhare pade the " ...u r good at explaining kiss😉,too hot it ws .

Plz do write more , and post another stories fast , i m waiting 😊

Aweee this was such a cute ss, I loved it

Baap re almost everyone wants to know what happened when they reached the house *Laughed Crazily* Seriously yaar matlab sabke sab Kapil Sumona ki tarah bhare pade hai 😛 😉 😆 Okay Sab doesnt include all but a few who requested the next part ;)

All the best @aashup Humari next emraan hashmi writer 😆 😆 (Sorry yaar)

Originally posted by: luvakanksha

Aweee this was such a cute ss, I loved it

Read all parts in one go.

Beautiful n phenomenal work 👏

Loved it.

Hey pls a small request, pls write an epilogue to this one. If that's convenient, pls do write.

Absolutely brilliant work enjoyed it.