FS: Behind You [UPDATED: LAST PART]

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Rabia

@fun4ever89

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#21

I just simply loved it Muneera...the way you described the setting gave me an eerie feel...and the cliffhanger left me wanting the next part asap...do update soon...😊

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ayyamuz

@ayyamuz

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: tabi9
kab update karoongi yaar...I thought it will be updated upto now..Waiting

I'm sorry, darling. I couldn't find time all day, Just updated, please check 😃

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Neha99

@Neha99

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#23

OMG...read both the parts😃

Congouring movie at night in dark with lightning n then the messages 🤡😈

SCARYYY...i m getting too excited here 🤣

I LOVED IT 👍🏼, great idea

Poor thapki but who was the message sender bihaan??? Or someone else😲 i think bihaan but idk i want next part asap...gonna wait though😆

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PenguinBaby

@PenguinBaby

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#24

The msg says B for Bhoot so I'm thinking it's B for Bihaan lol. It's gripping! Update soon!

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ayyamuz

@ayyamuz

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: SanyaEterna
The msg says B for Bhoot so I'm thinking it's B for Bihaan lol. It's gripping! Update soon!

WOW! You're so smart 😛 😆

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Kowsi

@Kowsi

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#26

I am not too much into this genre but I am liking it!!

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Ayaan78

@Ayaan78

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#27

B4B means B for Bihaan pandey.. update soon please.

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Iqra

@iQraaa

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#28

OMG i just read both parts in one go and its like 3 in the morning and i am like having goosebumps !!!! 😲 😲 😲

OMG THIS IS BESTTT!!!!!! 👏👏

I SERIOUSLY LOVED IT YAAR!!!! 👍🏼❤️ whats gonna happen next OMG OMG i am too excited !!!!!!!!! 😲 😲

Edited by chandaaaxo - 9 years ago

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sukanksha

@sukanksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Omg... It was so gripping loved it...
Will it have a part 3?

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Sakshi Sharma

@oceanbubble

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#30

OMG...

This had me on the edge...quite literally...i m sitting alone in my cabin right now...& i am afraid to look back...

That is the impact a good piece of writing should leave on the readers...😉😉

I had expected that in this update it will turn out to be Bihaan...but i should have learnt it by now...you always surprise us...😆😆😆

Ok...looking at the B 4 Bhoot stuff...i was sure it was Bihaan...he must be using some other phone i guess..

All the blood curdling scenes you described...i was literally covering my eyes...& just peeping through my fingers to read it...oh...how i hate Horror...

I had really not expected Thapki to get up at all...i would have sunk into the couch if that was possible...poor girl...she couldn't handle that...

I loved Bihaan's care & concern over her...😳😳😳

he went & stood behind her...just like in the msg...plus...he was apologising to her about something when he was interrupted by preeti...right...?? So that has to be him...isn't it...??

Pls Muneera...update this one quickly & pls pls a little bit less horror in the next one...i don't think i can take anymore of it...😆😆😆