FS: Behind You [UPDATED: LAST PART] - Page 8

Originally posted by: manaan

Beautiful, really beautiful ending. Love it ...
Plx write another one soon...
Will wait for it.

Originally posted by: Dplee

I howled with laughter reading the last two paragraphs. Loved it!!!

Originally posted by: oceanbubble

Ok...Muneera...I will admit...the first part sort of left me sucker punched... It was hurtful to me atleast...i don't know what happened to me...but i ended up crying reading all that coming out of Thapki's mouth...wanted to strangulate her...😆😆😆

& then...it kind of took me by surprise...i was expecting him to feel hurt...maybe angry...i expected him to yell a mouthful & storn out of the house...lolll...🤣🤣🤣

But nothing of that sort...Instead he ended up kissing her...the hottest kiss...😆😆😉

When he said look behind you yet again...i thought this was yet again taking a spooky turn...😆😆 Silly me...😆😆😆

The last para blew my head off...COMPLETELY...😆😆 Like seriously thapki said that...??😲😲😲 I wish to see your thapki in the show...nahi ho sakta kya esa...😆😆😆

Good one muneera...i know it was the last part...so when are we getting a new one...haan??😉

Originally posted by: ayyamuz

Wow! What your writing could do to people, make them laugh or cry 😲

Hehe! Yeah my Thapki took me by surprise as well 😆

You know honestly, I wrote this one in a haste, literally struggling to make time to finish ( I even stayed up late for writing one of the parts 🥱), anyhow I loved writing it, but it didn't turn out to be like I wanted it to be

For the next one, I'll take some time to write a better one, now that I'm finally free. Phew!

Thank you Sakshi! ❤️

Originally posted by: oceanbubble

Ok...get one thing pretty straight...no matter how much the readers bother u & pester u...u really should not update until u feel like...readers will obviously complain...but then...it can be fun to wait as well...😉😉 Everyone has their life & some are pretty busy as well...so we can wait as much as u like...although we will still keep on requesting...😆😆

So yes...take your sweet time...& post another one when you r ready...not just coz u feel obligated...ok...??😆😆